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By : WingsofaDream

From LadyAngelEuropas on May 30, 2012
I love this story so much, i wanted to review and say i have absolutely not lost interest, can't wait to read more
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From Emmeline.S on May 24, 2012
eeeeeeeeeeeeppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp!!
lol
i loved it, again XD
bill is definetly hawt, so i can understand his little crush, but no ones more sexy than DRACO!!
and awwwwwwwwwwww!!
how sad and cute was sev!
i've been checking this story for an update every night this week, in between reading your other story about Drarry, wich deserves tones of more eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppppppppppppppppppppppppppps!!
And in all seriousness i want to thank you for staying with your stories, and giving everyone the chance to wittness your amazing talent. Coz i know a lot of authors on adult/fanfiction hve trouble with keeping to their storys, myself included "looks guiltfully at floor"
So back to not so SIRIUS (whos being a giant ass by the way) update soon, coz i hve plenty of eeeeeeepppppppppps left for ur nxt chappie.
GO DRARRY!!!!
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From bloodshound on May 24, 2012
hmmm, i wonder if the boys will get their shop.
heh, draco better not see him admiring other lads or he'll simply burst into flames. >> does har's hair ever get in the way? Will it stop growing in length soon (mine was down to my butt and it was a real pest to deal with not to mention wash and care for. i had it chopped back to mid back. had to due to dead ends everywhere). Maybe magic helps keep har's in good condition... it'd need to with all he gets up to. :D
good to see ron can be nice ish when lil jonny's not about to poke him into the ways of prat liness.
Heeeee. dog pile on the har! :P And an introduction to ceddy. I wonder if the TT is happening and if it isn't, what you'll do instead. If it is I imagine that it's going to be very different since har will be pretty much of age and will likely STILL have absolutely no desire to enter. though if he does get in, i can see lil jonny and beth joining together as his anti cheer leaders. XP
Well... can you say awkward in the extreme... yes, i thought you could. either Vi is just not picking up the vibes or she's willfully ignorant. Te Awkward is pretty hard too miss. Hmmmm, just what is it about Siri that irks har so?
heh, way to totally skip the quiddach match. ^^ Did the twins still make their bet?
who's dragging har around and why? was that an accidental wack over the head and who WAS that D.E.?! was that barty?
heh, typical har. barely on his legs himself and he's looking for ppl to help. ^^
well, nice to know Crouch is a stable as ever. >>'
If i were har, i'd've been glad to escape too. hysteria doesn't make for a comfortable stay.
I wonder what bought out Sev's tears. I don't imagine he cries often. was it something from that creepy letter of doooooooom, insecurity over the potters, plain old stress of a parent whose child was sent out whole and came back injured, the fact that har'd once again been thrust into a dangerous situation (though this one wasn't his fault.)when sev wasn't there to defend him or a combo of all of the above.
Yeah, i can see Draco not letting har out of his sight after he hears about this one.
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From thrnbrooke on May 23, 2012
Too bad the stupid Potters and Sirius would never know the depth of Severus' love for his son. Always thought Sirius should grow up! Right on the mark!
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From Madamdragon on May 23, 2012
That was sweet and touching. I just love snape. I hope you update again soon please.
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From ANON - used romance on May 16, 2012
So I feel like a giant d-bag because I hadn't realized that the story was still a WIP when I started. I feel extra silly, because I, of course, have had many a reaction over the past 40+ chapters.

Like Harry's and Severus' relationship? GUH. So much love!

I don't think I've ever read a Veela fic quite as beefed up as yours. I totally appreciate you holding off on the smut until the full inheritance (mostly because each and every sceneis fantastic - PS the threesome in WiitbN was GOLD).

Even Havanism is awesome! When I saw the starting note, I was sure it was going to be a bust, but it's beautiful and I loved the scant scenes where he was doing his prayers. (And I love your sensitivity to other religions. Plenty of respect for you for that.)

The only thing I don't totally adore are the visions... I see their uses and such, and I guess the frustration is suitable considering Harry's position in the visions (the spectator rather than participant.

On the whole, A+!
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From thrnbrooke on May 16, 2012
What was it? I soooo need to know! Who sent it?
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From bloodshound on May 15, 2012
drats, i missed a chappie and it was one with lots of review bait too.

boooo. remi resigned... i suppose it's not unexpected, it just sucks. >> The whole potion question was explained too. i'm glad he and har... and violet mended fences. jonny boy though is a lost cause and no great loss. i reckon he might be just a wee bit uncertain about himself and jealous too, since his 'rents will be focusing their attention on har... does that mean har is potter heir or just an unacknowledged child... since, despite his parents being married now, he's technically a bastard and that'd make dear jonny the legitimate first son. Jonny's position is threatened even though har has no interest atm. arrigant little oik that he is though, i'm sure he'll twist it into poor poor pitiful me.

I'm glad ron apologized, thought i can why he'd want to keep peace with a dorm mate and he didn't have much in common with mio anyway. hanging with older people mio might actually be communicating with people more on her level. really, trying to slow her mental levels to jonny boy and rons levels was probably holding her back some, though she'll miss the bond they had. I wonder how ron and jonny will cope on their own. will the even want to stumble into things the way they were as i'm stills sure mio was the brains of the outfit.

d'aawwwww. the boys are sooooooooo cute together ! *squeeeees. how is it none of draco's slyth friends have picked up on his changed attitude. i mean, they gotta know by now he's not putting out or picking up anyone anymore?

The potter parents have a lONG way to go before har is anywhere near ready to spend time with him. events might speed up the process but until then... *shrugs.

i look forward to the chaos likely to happen at the match and i wonder if mio gets to crush on Krum this time around. after all, hey, she's free now yeah?

Even though har apologized, i hope he remembers this in future. Sev is always, ever and only looking out for him.

anywho, moving on. snickers 'Har and Draco, sitting it a tree. K I S S I N G... first comes love, then comes....' owwwwie. stupid broken branch. *pouts.

seriously, what WAS Draco thinking? once again d'awwwwwww. har is sooooo sweet. he always wants to give back usually even before he's given in the first place.

awwww, i think it's really cute that sev is relaxed enough around har to tease him. sev never really gives that impression otherwise, he's such formal person.

hmmm, i know draco really needs to learn this stuff, but wow, if events fall out ANYTHING like they did in the canon, good luck prying him from har's side ever again. the fathers aren't in on their kids 'mates to be' status yet are they?

heh, snarky Luc is snarky.

So, the rat manged to locate V after all, though i'm guessing he kept his attempt on hars life to himself. poor old muggle bloke. sucks to be him huh. at least they take har's dreams seriously now.

awwww, Sev is such a good papa.

Well sheesh. how to wreck the b day feeling there V. a Birthday gift/greeting for V... oh that is just too creepy for words. *shivers along with har at the feeling of foreboding on the horizon.

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From jami_lee on May 15, 2012
poor harry & draco to be apart for 2 months. makes me wonder what & who the letter was from.
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From Madamdragon on May 15, 2012
I love how Severus is so protective of his son. HOpe more is to come soon please.
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From Emmeline.S on May 15, 2012
eeeeeeeeeeeppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp!!
Love it, but when is Severus gonna find out about Draco and Harry.
Or dose he already know.
did Draco tell Lucius?
di Lucius tell Severus?
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepppppppppppppppppppppppppp!!
I wana know, i wana know.
update soon, plz, u fabulous author.
(eeeeeeeeeepppppppppppppp!!)
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From ANON - Bambi on May 15, 2012
They're so much going on, I can't comment on it all!! But that classroom scene, whew!! And I'm so happy Harry is so loved and has self respect that he isn't even thinking twice about ripping up that letter. Snape and Harry are so sweet to each other
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From NinaSweets on May 09, 2012
Gosh John Potter is such a freaking twat!!! I'm glad that Ron apologised but poor Hermione - please give her some nice girls to hang out with, boys are stupid. I'm also glad that Harry and Remus are kind of friends, he always was the most sensible Marauder. Also I love Harry's loyalty to Serverus it's just such a touching thing to see, well read anyway. A lovely chapter and whoooo for hormones oh yeah ;) I wonder how the world cup is going to go, obviously Lucius won't be running around with the death eaters, can't wait to see what you do!
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From thrnbrooke on May 08, 2012
Something tells me they won't give up.
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From ANON - BloodTear on May 08, 2012
Oh the Potter's make me angry! Lol I hope Harry doesn't have anything to do with them! Severus is a much better parent. Great chapter by the way. I loved the interaction with Draxo and Harry. Lovely:) can't wait for more.... Lol or for Maybe Severus walking in in them once... I feel like Sev still sees his trouble finding son a bit innocent.;)
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