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Reviews for Benefactor

By : TransientTemptation
  • From jj on March 08, 2015
    plz write more
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  • From ANON - Cherry on February 25, 2015
    I just found this fic, and although a part of me is super squicked out, another part of me is fascinated+turned on.
    So, while I was thinking about Benefactor and the possible directions its plot could go after this chapter, an idea hit me. What if you time-skipped to Draco being a fugitive after a massive manhunt takes place, and Harry, after all those therapy and counseling sessions and after raising their son, decides to find Draco to find out if he truly loved him, all those years ago. I think it'd be a good way to give this fic a happy and less-squicky ending, and maybe even reforming Draco (HAHA unlikely!)
    Anyway, just a thought. I'm also eagerly awaiting the next chapter of Strange Seduction. I'm leaning towards Blaise Zabini, but using the law of Chekhov's Gun, it's probably Snape. It would be awesome either way. (Slenderman)Snape with tentacles?? I'd definitely dig it.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 30, 2014
    I have absolutely no idea what's going to happen next in this story!!! I just keep reading with my mouth hanging open.
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  • From ANON - Myuna on March 23, 2014
    OH NOOO! Poor Draco! I halte Snape for his action without asking Draco first. I hope Draco can find Harry fast *cross finger*"
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  • From ANON - raiderhater13 on March 03, 2014
    great story please let me know when you update
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 27, 2014
    considering how very easy it seems to abuse the system, i'm surprised there are safeties in place for child endangerment... hmmm, i wonder how the slug has never been caught.
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  • From Jan on February 26, 2014
    Well that sure is a different twist to the story, can't wait what's going to happen next, please update chapter 17 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - WesleyY on February 23, 2014
    Whoo! This is taking such a dark turn. An enjoyable perverted fic has turned into a twisted tale, but in a compelling way. Quit the reveal with Slughorn's influence on young Draco. Draco's obsession with Harry is frightening, but I am eager to see what happens. You continue to have me hooked. So glad to see you updating. :)
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  • From ANON - goingplaces on December 01, 2013
    Well written
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  • From ANON - Myuna on October 17, 2013
    Ch15

    No! Snape should ask Draco not report him as bad person. Draco has to tell Harry soon. I can't wait to read next chapter ;)
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on October 16, 2013
    It's horrible what Draco is doing but it's hot but it's not healthy for Harry but Harry is sooo adorable but Dracos' "Angel" Harry is having Draco's heir...what to do, what to do! Isn't there some "authory" thing you can think up that Harry can keep the baby & Draco can keep both of them? Harry has made Draco think of someone besides himself...Draco cares for someone besides himself. Maybe he is becoming a better person. And who is it that is trying to turn him in???
    Doesn't seem like a Severus thing to do...he is more likely to be more straight up in your face about it.
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  • From ANON - WesleyY on October 16, 2013
    Wow, this is not where I saw the story headed. Rarely do you find characters facing consequences in fics such as this. And while I enjoyed the kinky side beginning of this, you've made the story more dramatic and interesting. Snape being the moral compass? Draco actually feeling guilt for what he's doing? Looking forward to more.

    And I'm so happy to have you back! I love your writing style and your enthusiasm for the characters and the weird and wonderful. Never leave us again! :P
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  • From wavedancer70 on October 09, 2013
    You know I just read strange seduction and I wanted more now how dare you hook me again lol I need more chappies wahhhhhh I can't wait to know if harry will keep the baby ohhhhh I hope he does I know in real life I'd be very upset and crying for someones blood but this is fiction and all so I'm cool with the story but please update.
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  • From ANON - MaggieMay on October 06, 2013
    Wow, this took a very dark turn. Did not see this twist coming. Looking forward to more. So happy your back. Hoping you update Exchange next. :)
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  • From Cerucci on September 28, 2013
    this is just plain freaking awesome! i love it so much in fact i love all of your stories, and i love mpreg, please update soon and sorry about the jerk that flamed your story, im sure the person was jealous of your awesome stories. :)
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