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By : TransientTemptation
  • From ANON - Lilith on July 27, 2012
    If Harry is 11, how old would Draco be? Hopefully not old enough to be his father.
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  • From ANON - Lilith on July 27, 2012
    A little strange to me, Draco lusting after a, well, a child. Kind of disturbing. Not really a fan of pedeophilia but I'll read since I love drarry.
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  • From oronochi on July 26, 2012
    Yay, a new chapter! And what a chapter it is, with Harry being cute and a yummy lemon. There is even a hint of something more, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope the doctor doesn't get too touchy-feely with Harry, especially with Draco watching. And I wonder if the news is what I think it is. Also, did Draco ever get around to continuing the potion regiment with Harry, like the growth-stunting potion? If not, I wonder how the next chapter will play into that. Keep up the great work and I patiently await the next chapter.
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  • From bloodshound on July 26, 2012
    BOUT TIME DRACO. if you truly love the kid you look after everything for him... including his health.
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  • From SnappyPants on March 22, 2012
    Xomg. I'm half torn between completely giving myself up to the smut, and being totally offended by evil Draco. I LOVE IT!! Especiallly the dresses. Good god. Also, having come late to this story, I vote emphatically for a femslash of similar persuasion, if my vote's not to late to count!!!!?
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  • From Madamdragon on February 23, 2012
    Master?! Hmmm. Wonder if what Draco is doing could have a down side like going too seme. But great update hope everything turns out good in the end. Thanks for the update. Hope more will be to come soon.
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  • From bloodshound on February 23, 2012
    well, at least they got through it okay. i hope he's not doing any permanent damage inside har, but that really didn't sound promising.
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  • From oronochi on February 23, 2012
    What a wonderful chapter from you as always! I can't wait for the next chapter, especially if Harry is pregnant. That will make an interesting turn in the story, but hopefully stop Draco's training of Harry. Keep up the great work!
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  • From WesleyY7 on February 13, 2012
    Here I am, trying to kick your butt in gear! Don't leave Draco's Angel, and us, hanging!! :D
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  • From WesleyY7 on December 27, 2011
    This continues to be all kinds of wrong, but still can't stop! I like how each chapter is like a snapshot into this disturbing relationship. It's obvious Draco has come far in his training of Harry. (The boy is now completely comfortable in dresses and costumes, and is now well-practiced enough to tease Draco to the brink of orgasm.) I do find it interesting that he continues to call him Draco. With the dynamics of their relationship, I keep expecting a Sir to pop out from time to time. Or even a Daddy.
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  • From RavenclawJedi on December 22, 2011
    I just started my break from school too! I've been checking for an update and was so happy to see one. Draco continues to be deliciously creepy. He's completely warped Harry. I'm very curious how the visit will turn out. I kind of miss Draco seducing Harry though. I mean, I know he had Harry under his control, but it would be nice to see some of Draco pleasing his Angel again.

    Have you given any more thought to the femslash version? You're awesome!
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  • From Madamdragon on December 21, 2011
    Hawt as always. Update again please
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  • From TibbytheWitchy on December 21, 2011
    Mmmmm lovely chapter and quite the delicious kink! Mind if I ask for one to be added? In an earlier chapter you mentioned this turning out more M/s than you'd originally planned and I don't remember if you asked for our opinions or not so i'll just give mine to you: PLEASE PLEASE DO IT! Nothing better than a Master Draco with a subby Harry. Plus with that whole 'training' bit in here it'd fit right in! But onto my kink that i'd love to be fitted in here, can Draco please please please get Harry a collar? Hmm? Pretty please? Pretty pretty please?
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  • From bloodshound on December 21, 2011
    'bout time. will his parents want him back sometime soon?
    I hope draco's taught the kid some magic... enough to get by inspection anyway.
    wouldn't it be boring though, if you know everything your trained pet does?
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  • From djaddict on December 21, 2011
    This is so incredibly hot!!

    I mean wrong! So incredibly wrong.

    Oh, who am I kidding - it's smoking!!!!

    More?

    lol
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