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Reviews for Center Stage

By : MyladyinRed
  • From ANON - heartstar on August 11, 2011
    Thank you lol So the plan seems to be working so far! S*
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  • From ANON - Maethoriel Raina on August 11, 2011
    I meant beta, not beat, that just shows how much I need to chck my own work!
    Another thing to point out is Hermione and Ron, are they paid ex friends or dating Draco? Or both?
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  • From ANON - Maethoriel Raina on August 11, 2011
    The spacing was much better. How you manage from an iPod is beyond me, but very well done. There was a spelling mistake clam instead of calm in the first sentance but aside from that it seemed fine. If you still need a beat I'd be willing to go over the chapters for you.

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  • From ANON - blue on August 11, 2011
    Good lord, what a stopping point! I can't wait to see what happens next. Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Baylea on August 11, 2011
    I LOVE this story!!!=] I can't wait for the next update! No more cliffhangers... Please:)
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  • From Stevo1711 on August 11, 2011
    So cute cant wait for more love Harry (bottom) &
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  • From Jessica86 on August 11, 2011
    You just have to let Harry accept. I mean, it's the best deal ever! and I would love it if you made the chapters even longer, cause then they wouldn't end so soon...
    Well, if you would have been going with Remus it would have been better to have Sirius as the other part. I mean, we all know that those two belong togethere...even if they don't want to admit it...
    Can't wait for your next update.
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  • From ANON - heartstar on August 09, 2011
    I love this so far More please.
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  • From ANON - blue on August 08, 2011
    So cute, can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From bloodshound on August 07, 2011
    I wondered how Harry could be so easy with his room mate dating a pair of bought and paid for ex friends of Harry. So, if we forget the paid friends thing, does that mean Harry can still lean on them or are they leery of him? I assume dumbles was still a manipulative dick.
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  • From ANON - Maethoriel Raina on August 07, 2011
    I really like where you are taking this story and it is well written. I look forward to the three of them together.

    A few points, the spacing on the site makes it somewhat difficult to read and there are a few mistakes such as names not capitalised and Grimwauld Place which I believe should be Grimmauld Place (hp-lexicon.org). Little things like that make itless smooth a ead, but a great start nonetheless.

    Will add this to my bookmarks and anticipate the next chapter.
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  • From wolfcathope on August 07, 2011
    nice but curious how this is going to work
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  • From DraconiaLesoto on August 07, 2011
    Please please please seperate your paragraphs(Example below). It looks really bad and is hard to concentrate on the story. Other than that i like the idea so far and can't wait to see how it goes on, lemon next chapter pleeeeassseeee? (since i'm such a good little reviewer?? *puppydog eyes*)

    Example:
    Paragraph one

    Paragraph Two

    That is how it should look, with a line between the paragraphs :D Please and thank you!
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  • From ANON - lilyluna on August 07, 2011
    Great story i cant wait to see what happens with he three of them at afternoon tea update soon
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  • From Hambares on August 07, 2011
    Harry seems a bit shy. I wonder how Lucius and Severus will get him past that?
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