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From ANON - Ionopachys on November 03, 2011
I really enjoy your stories. I do wonder about the logic in this one. The supervisor took Harry to task for not connecting the cases, but he did. The story seemed to take only a few days, and after the second attack Harry did start looking at the players' connections. At worst he took a day longer than he should to really start digging, but he can't be faulted for not immediately figuring out the Healer was a strange twisted who didn't fit the normal profile. Could it be that his supervisor is still compromised?

This of course leads to a bigger problem. Shouldn't the next move be for Harry to put his memories of Blue Eyes into a pensieve and show them to other aurors? Maybe Harry doesn't get much respect, but his superiors must not think he is flat out insane or dishonest, else they would find somewhere else for him where he couldn't do much damage. I would think that the fact their supervisor was possessed, even for just a moment, would be a pretty urgent matter. Harry could claim that he wasn't sure about the possession until later encounters with Blue Eyes, but now that the crisis with Alto is ended, what excuse do they have not to do everything in their power to alert the Ministry of this danger?
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From bloodshound on October 27, 2011
bleeding scorching hell, it took them long enough! I mean, damn, one round with a troll and he and Mio were besties, but draco has had to save his life (and vice versa) how many times? Still, Har was well jaded by this point.
At any rate, i look forward to future installments in this series... should be interesting to see them actually work torgether for a change. :P
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From SParker on October 26, 2011
about the end...

That was a good ending...and beginning for them.
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From bloodshound on October 19, 2011
so, she didn't know. not to much of a surprise i suppose. The fact that Har managed to drag Drac back from the brink was though.
interesting, i wonder who one earth it could be and if he knows har very well. It's almost Dumbledore ish, whatever it is.
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From SParker on October 14, 2011
about #9...

You know, I almost feel sorry for the girl...ALMOST, now I must
try to get drunk to forget I said that.

So, what happens now? Is this the end or you haven't even touched
on the juicy bits yet? :-)
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From ANON - AlterEquis on October 14, 2011
Thank you for the list!
I saw it and now I've read them all up untill here!

This series makes me think of the running to paradise trilogie I think it was with the black and red hate magic. Kind of, but it's a good thing for sure ;)

Curious about this blue eyed person too.

cheers
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From SParker on October 10, 2011
about #8...

1. I KNEEEW it! I had a feeling in the the back of my mind
that she might be a twisted of some sort, but I wasn't sure
how she did it to say it. Personally, I think it could be
by touch....or something.

NOW, we can kill the 'bee-itch'!

2.
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From ANON - AlterEquis on October 07, 2011
Hi there,

I'm confused about the order of the cloak and dagger series, and teh fics that are in them.

Could you perhaps post the order on your homepage or somewhere?

Sorry that I misused the review place but it seemed the easiest way to contact.

many thanks
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From SParker on September 29, 2011
about #7...

*groans* Aww man, the woman is a disease, right?
Get close and you wind up contaminated.

...and what unlucky number were you implying? Two,
cause it couldn't be thirteen.

Oh, and by the way, you have a VERY good story here,
with a character more irritating than a rash. :-)
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From ANON - Mehla_Seraphim on September 29, 2011
Holy balls Draco lost it. Also...sweet I love jackals and I'm not sure why lol. This is indeed becoming interesting. It's like anyone that gets too close to Miranda or spends too much time becomes a twisted.
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From ANON - Sharae on September 23, 2011
Hi,
I LOVE your stories and was wondering if you have any objection to people (namely me) converting your story off of AFF etc and making them into a format that can be read on an iPad or similar? Full honours for the story and ideas will be put as appropriate, i only ask because i fly international alot and dont get to read online very often, thus end up ahving many updates to read at once and i wanted to spend my flights reading something a little more interesting than the inflight magazine. feel free to email me back at sharae @ live .com (take out the spaces)

Regards.
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From SParker on September 22, 2011
about #6....

Oooooh myyyyyy Gaaaaawwwwwdddd!!! Can we just
PLEASE kill the bitch! Can we just dedicate the
next chapter to her death??? We don't NEED another
chapter, just KILL her!

..and I thought there would NEVER be another female
as annoying as Ginny Weasel.
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From SParker on September 16, 2011
about #5...

Oooo...dammit to hell...dammit to HELL!
SOMEone needs to see the light in this
situation! ...and now the bespelled idiot
'thinks' he's in love. *gag* Then, pissing
Harry off in the process!

It's a damn mess!
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From ANON - Mehla_Seraphim on September 15, 2011
Sounds a bit like Draco is under a spell. He's acting very very odd.
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From SParker on September 08, 2011
about #4...

You know, if Healer Alto was standing at the edge of a
cliff, I think i'd accidentally push her over...with
a big push! Beauty, indeed..*pfft...pfft..and pfft some more!*

Everytime I see the word, 'my lady' I want to take a pen &
scratch the word out. *grrr*

..and how come Harry isn't doing some type of charm on Draco???
I would have done several! Healer Alto...*gag* Still don't trust
her a$$.
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