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Reviews for Chameleon's Song

By : SomethingElse

From ANON - butterpie on August 31, 2011
Wowsers, now even the parents are getting involved with this issue-sheesh! Anywho in past history China was once conquered by Genghis Khan-who was from the Mideast, so perhaps Cho Chang has djinn in her background, or some other form of mythological creature from the mideast. Just throwing ideas out so no worries. Blaize's snake tail seemed drawn to mentioning Terry by name when he was brought into the hospital so that might be one potential mating for you to aim for. As for Pansy perhaps someone in Huffpuff,or even Neville since that seems to be her worse case senerio ending up as someones lap dog no doubt-lol! Nice touch from you also adding the part about her hands being so sensitive too, as that could give someone an edge to build a relationship between mates. So who's, or rather what's next? Only you know dearheart.
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From bloodshound on August 31, 2011
errrg Luc is cold. I just wanna shake the prick.
so hang on, wait, what? You're saying Har's current;y at school sibs AND is potential mates at school are in the medi wing yes?
are you having fun picking the creatures, cause you've sure got some interesting ones so far. it's nice to see someone venturing off into lessor used territory.
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From ANON - bill560682 on August 30, 2011
i did just read a different story which gave me an idea you could have harryget picked for a pro quittich team. so he does schooling during the week and practice and play games on the weekends. that way you open him up to many more people outside of those at hogwarts. before you think that is a bit young think about victor krum he played in the world cup before showing up to hogwarts so he would have been 16 when the season started unless he was dumb and held back a year or two. an with the way people went nuts for him even in england like ron you would think he had been playing for a while and proved he was as great as all the hipe about him.
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From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2011
anon again, I would like to see more people come to Harry( oliver ^_^)

but I do have a few species that might be interesting!
Manticore, like a chimera , but tail is scorpion.
Dryad
Lamia
merrow! it's a mermaid type that can remove it's 'skin' it is believed that they become slaves if his/her skin is stolen!

also, the name is mew
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From ANON - butterpie on August 29, 2011
Looking very good as you continue to add more folks to this rather mixed bag of possibilites. Some sound so needy, while others seem determined not to give in to Harry's allure, oh well. How about djinn, unicorn or dragon next? Also wasn't Marcus Flint once hinted at as having troll blood, so how about him? I'd also really like to see if you could add Cho or Ginny next, if at all possible. Dean could be another choice who's more like Harry's mum with pure human status, but as a friend (or more) as it's your call. So let's see what you choose. Anywho well done!
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From ANON - bill560682 on August 29, 2011
now as far as a naw potions master for years 1-7 goes you could bring in the weasley twins who went on to get thier potions masteries in thier spare time just to be able to piss snape off about the fact that they are also now potions masters. now the only real problem i see about that is that if the twins have creature blood then so would the rest of the family such as ginny and ron. so then this would end up turning into a harry has sex with the whole weasley family type story. unless you come up with a creature that it's blood ONLY shows up in twins and that would then cover the patils and weasley twin and also leave the other weasleys out.

the way i see it the weasley twins make several contacts at the 2 other schools during the tri-wizard tournament so were able to start selling thier pranks to those 2 other schools as well during thier last year at hogwarts so that they took harry's 1,000 gallions and turned it into more like 20,000 gallions before they ever left hogwarts. so they would have no problem in buying themselves a mastery in potions just to piss off snape. an i think they would likely spend at least part of thier summer after 7th year traveling to locations were other schools are to intoduce thier products there as well so that thier owl order business should account for about 95 percent of thier business. so all they really have to do is hire people to create thier pranks for them after getting unbreakable vows from them of course then hire other to fill the orders, then they hire someone like lee to keep an eye on the store a few hours a day.
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From ANON - bill560682 on August 29, 2011
now you wanted ideas on how to bring former students back to hogwarts? i would think you have 1 of 2 options, start a masters degree program at the school or replace some of the teachers such as oliver wood replacing hooch as flying instuctor in his spare time while he also plays keeper as a pro for whatever team. that would also open up the option of wood inviting other fromer students to stop by as guess instuctors in thier given area such as the chasers from harry house team. you could also have hagred leave to go off to marry madame maxine from the french school opening up his job for someone else to take, plus get a new history teacher to replace binn's and a new muggle studies treacher as well. an to make it work you can have hogwarts fail it's international confederation of wizards 10 year check of the school so it either makes the changes or hogwarts is removed from the list of schools approved by the i.c.w. for international students. an if that happens you would no longer get students like chang from china or the patil twins from india, that also mean anyone from hogwarts wanting to work outside of great britain would need to take i.c.w. approved tests to prove they know the subjects they claim. you could also have the i.c.w. find snape's class below the make as well and have dumbledore on keep him on as head of slytherin house and as a potions research spealist or only allow him to teach those looking for thier mastery in potions since those students would need little to no oversite at all.

of course the patil's and chang would in fact be determined by how your magical world is set up? since at one time places like india and canada to name only 2 were under direct british rule if the magical world still has direct control over all great britain former holding then the i.c.w. would be nothing to worry about for the most part.
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From bloodshound on August 28, 2011
okay, i;m mild confusion here. Are the ones in the medi wing potential mates, sibs or a mix of both? And did they just get their critter half forcibly wakened... if so, maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan does dumbles have a lot to answer for.
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From ANON - kit on August 28, 2011
oh and one more thing i thing a harry fawlks thing would be interesting since it was said to be rare.
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From ANON - kit on August 28, 2011
the only thing i didnt quite understand was the dream i mean it seemed to fit. but.....i know you said something about it not having that much hemione in it but i think she is enough of a dom for her to be harry's "pure human" so you would make a new thing (srry couldnt spell it). oh and i think it would be fun if you had a giant in the mix.
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From ANON - bill560682 on August 27, 2011
now as far as the talk about goblins, house elves and centures there is an easy way to pull that off,proffessor flitchwick is thought by many an author on this site as well as other sites to be part goblin so if he had a grandchild they would be part goblin as well.

also as far as muggleborns go how many of those muggleborns are due to a wizard like malfoy sr. raping a muggle then wiping thier memory of the event. it is varry likely that at least several muggleborn students are the result of deatheater parties that got broken up by aurors before the women were kill and the ministry wiped thier memories of the event. an since muggleborns are never told of things like this they never go to the bank to have thier bloodlines checked.
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From ANON - bill560682 on August 27, 2011
now it may just be me but it sounds like you are threwing out the idea that this might just also become a harry/lily fic as well. an no i am not against the idea seeing as that is one pairing that is very rarely ever done, so i say go for it. an before anyone goes eeeewwww that is sick think about all the other pairings that are done on this site? harry/voldimore who is old enough to be harry's grandfather, harry/james who IS harry's father, harry/patunai who IS harry's aunt, harry/sirius who is harry's godfather, harry/remus who is harry's uncle, harry/snape who is old enough to be harry's father, also those about harry having sex with his own children or his godson teddy or him having sex with the children of his friends such as the several about harry and draco's son.
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From ANON - bill560682 on August 26, 2011
ah but what you seem to not to take into account as far as collin and dennis go is where did the magic in thier family come from in the first place. i like to think that muggleborns are infact the decendants of disowned squibs, an if you get enough squibs in the same family line you end up with a muggleborn. think about it if you were kicked you of the country of china because you only had 2 arms and everyone else in china had 4 arms you would go live with the other 2 armed people an try to forget all about the country of china. so yes it is possible for the creevey brothers to have blood from several different families running threw thier vaines. it is very likely that they may even have very diluted werewolf blood in thier vaines. seeing as werewolves would be treated much better in the muggle world then in the magical world as long as thier illness was not found out. all a werewolf would need to do was to claim to be a member of a group that pays tribute to diana goddess of the moon and thereby needs to take the day before the full moon the day of the full moon and the day after the full moon off an that he or she can work any other days or shifts in cluding weekends to make up for it. now since most people do not want to work night shift or weekends then the boss would see this as a great way to fill those spots.
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From bloodshound on August 26, 2011
can i comment on the chappie anyway?
Dumbles what the hells are you thinking, seriously. people are experiment material or bloody chess pieces!
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From ANON - butterpie on August 26, 2011
This sure seems like a version of "The Bachelor", what with all these dosed students gearing up to stake a claim on 'poor oL Harry'-lol! Draco seemed to be more of an observer than a contenter here despite Blaize and Seamus'obviously excited state of mind. Still what's up with Terry since he's Harry's brother through Remus and Pansy's his sister through Sirus. Mayhap you plan for some other pairings besides Harry's, hmmm? Interesting, very interesting- you got me hooked so carry on.
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