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Reviews for Sanctum Sanctorum

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Duomi on December 25, 2011
    Yay! I got back from a bit of a holiday getaway and had more to read. I love the new chapters. I'm also very worried about them having a powerful evil wizard chilling in one of their rooms, but that balances out with being excited for Draco and Harry sharing a house. Loved Draco using his knee to keep Harry's mind on track and keep him from killing, too-- nicely subtle and seemed very appropriately distracting. Looking forward to the rest, and happy holidays if you believe in any in particular! If not, happy year-end.
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on December 23, 2011
    So we can await more action of multiple kinds, the content of moonstone's magical signature and a good talk in the next chapter.

    Sounds great!
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  • From ChaosLady on December 22, 2011
    Boy, Moonstone is a bigoted pig! Stupid too. Excellent update!
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  • From SParker on December 22, 2011
    about # 25...

    After reading this, one would think you were channeling
    Shizuo Heiwajima, with the 'dead dead dead...', but in
    Shizuo's case it's 'kill...kill'. He's from an anime, fyi.

    NOW, by the time I get to the end of chapter 26, I should
    see fireworks, lamps falling AND lots of athleticisms. :-)
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  • From bloodshound on December 22, 2011
    can't wait for the next chappie. moonstone is meat on a stick and doesn't know it yet.
    but it looks like draco's about to get up to something interesting.
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  • From bloodshound on December 20, 2011
    that's horrible. god grief. how many kids did they drain and or kill with this and what happens to the kid whose new ability is passed on? are they dead too?
    at any rate, i wonder what har will do with himself now, once this mess is cleared up?
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  • From Sailorlorelei on December 19, 2011
    Ah Harry always messing up Draco's plans. Good chapter, it was unfortunate that Moonstone noticed something. While I think convicting Moonstone would allow Harry enough wiggle room to maintain in London, I understand his thoughts and reasoning. He's silly if he thinks Draco won't go with him, Harry has lost the luxury of being able to fall off the face of the planet alone (I can see Ron and Hermione going as well but as they have each other it can go either way in my mind, really). There was a sentence in the beginning of Harry's pov that I believe had an extra word, the flow seemed a bit awkward whilst reading. It was a sentence about how the arms of the blue air flew, sadly the exact sentence escapes me at the moment. Anyway, I thought you would like to know. Good work as always, and I can't wait until the next update.

    ~Fullmoon
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  • From ANON - Alter Equis on December 19, 2011
    So, now the stakes are raised. things will have to produces much faster now. rescue the kids before they know moonstone is gone.

    Figuring out what Harry wants/needs to do in his life right now, maybe put some Draco in?
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  • From SParker on December 18, 2011
    about #24...

    You know, I think you aught to move to LA & become a
    scriptwriter. That way you can write to your little
    heart's content, with the way you do action scenes. :-)

    This was an exciting moment and if I had popcorn I would
    have choked to death trying to eat too fast!

    Oh, by the way, what chapter was it where Harry & Draco were
    hiding in that office? Eye forgetz...
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  • From ChaosLady on December 18, 2011
    Another wonderful update! I can't wait for the resolution of this one because I'm not sure at all how it's going to end!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2011
    I really dig this story. I just stumbled on it by the time you posted Ch 23 and have to say, I'm pretty addicted. It's really plot-driven (thank God) with some interest and good rhythm between Harry and Draco along the way. Really great, I hope you have other stories because I'm now going to raid your info section. Cheers!
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  • From SParker on December 11, 2011
    about #23..

    You know, I still feel it would be effective
    if the mental bond went both ways in times like
    these, just in case something dire goes down...or
    in Harry's case, to keep 'the pot from overboiling'.
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on December 10, 2011
    Curious to see what the spell will reveal and what Draco is going to tell Moonstone.
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  • From Sailorlorelei on December 10, 2011
    You should be proud, it is a fantastic story. Harry should know by now assuming never gets you anywhere. I do love seeing Draco in his element, he would have succeeded in politics, he has all the mannerisms for it. It was also nice to see a bit of Hermione after so long, I liked that she was concerned about Harry being so reckless. Adam is also rather adorable, I hope they find his parents and cure him, Harry really isn't ready for children. Though that would explain the children (other victims?) running around Harry and Draco in the vision at the start of all this. I'm afraid I am getting selfish, this chapter also felt short and I find myself wanting more, and rather impatiently at that. As always, good chapter and keep up the good work. I look forward to reading your next update, in any of the three of yours in reading naturally.

    ~Fullmoon
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  • From ChaosLady on December 09, 2011
    This is better than last chapter! I can't wait for more!
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