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By : MyladyinRed
  • From ANON - johnny on September 22, 2011
    I love it especially the paring daddy love! cute!!
    hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - Nyx on September 20, 2011
    Amazing please write another chapter soon
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  • From ANON - Dawn on September 12, 2011
    Love the story so far. Can't wait for more!! Just a suggestion, if you could put a little back story in this as to how Harry was taken from the Dursleys.
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  • From beloved18 on September 01, 2011
    Awwwwwwwww, so cute! Draco was so adorable! I really, really, really excited for the sex in the next chapter (squeals and dances)!

    Minor mistake: You put 'woe' instead of 'woo'.
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  • From ANON - blue on August 30, 2011
    Very cute!
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  • From ANON - lover-of-dreams on August 29, 2011
    i just love thiis fanfic plzs update soon.
    i vote there should be no marrage contract but i think draco and harry should have some fun with remus and sirius
    (im scottish so i use "nicked" on a daily basias)
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  • From ANON - Dx on August 29, 2011
    YES! I cant wait for more!!!!
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  • From ANON - dragon on August 29, 2011
    great chapter, are you going to do a flash back where they save harry from the dursley's home? poor draco. cant wait till ur next update
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  • From Raholea on August 29, 2011
    interesting so far, a little rough but practice will make far improved. one word however.

    'Woe' and 'woo' are NOT the same. you were looking to use 'woo' ...

    Woe:
    1. grievous distress, affliction, or trouble: His woe was almost beyond description.
    2. an affliction: She suffered a fall, among her other woes.

    Woo:
    1. to seek the favor, affection, or love of, especially with a view to marriage. Synonyms: court, pursue, chase.
    2. to seek to win: to woo fame. Synonyms: cultivate.

    (as per dictionary.com, my very best writing source friend online)
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  • From llyoung on August 28, 2011
    Prefer no marriage contract. I don't really like harry/draco stories.
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  • From Darkserpentcat on August 28, 2011
    To be perfectly honest I am a tad worried with how Sirius and Remus are with a six year old Harry in this fic considering they are originally his godfathers and stuff and they really shouldn't be into such pedophilia though I have no problem with teenage Harry and them and Fenrir being a pedophile is honestly more realistic

    If I may make a suggestion I would like to suggest either the three daddies already know Harry is their mate which is why they have feelings like that or Harry is a creature who feeds off of sex like a succubus or lamia

    I like where a succubus can be a male but feeds off of lust by being penetrated sexually while incubi feed through penetration

    but I would suggest more along the lines of making Harry a lamiae because of the whole snake thing and it is less used

    Other then that keep up the good work though I might skip the child sex scenes

    Oh have you considered putting some Weasleys in there in the future because I think Bill would be perfect in that pairing
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  • From Carousel on August 28, 2011
    I love this story so far! o3o It's so cute and sweet and I can't wait for chapter four. I want to see what kind of game Daddy Fenrir wants to play. Update soon~
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  • From Tesgura on August 28, 2011
    Oh, and I think you meant to type 'woo' instead of 'woe'. Woe means sorrow.
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  • From Tesgura on August 28, 2011
    Oooh, sexy fun ahoy! I vote Harry stays with his daddies! That'll be such sexy fun! Plus, Draco not getting what he wants should be funny to see too. Can't wait for the next chapter of sexy goodness!
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  • From ANON - Yaoigirl on August 28, 2011
    I love this story so far and I vote for a marriage contract. I think it would be a nice way to develop the plot. ^_^
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