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Reviews for One Thousand Days

By : Ataraxia
  • From danniperson on October 13, 2011
    *beats Harry* stop it, get away from Draco, AGGHHHHHH. Nice chapter, but infuriating at the same time! Update soon!
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  • From on September 14, 2011
    omg i luv this story....please please please update soon...i'd luv to see what happens next!!!!
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  • From cloudshape on September 03, 2011
    So far I very much love this story and eagerly await the next chapter.

    Positive:
    - I very much like the fact, that the Grangers are involved. And I like how Hermione's mother is treating Snape. I always imagened Hermione's parents to be a bit older than the average parents. That would make them probably like 15 years older than Snape, so she is certainly allowed (and believable) in mothering him a little bit.
    - I like the way Harry and Draco seem to be quite mature now. Hermione has always been mature - so no surprise there.
    - I love the fact, that Hermione and Ron are not married. I love Ron as a character and think he is a great friend, but a marriage of him and Hermione would imho never go well.
    - I do not quite understand Hermione's wish to get married so early (she is only around 20 - far to early to get married in my eyes), but if she gets married Neville is a better choice than Ron would have been.
    - I love your idea of Snape haveing lost his magic - at least if he will get it back eventually. Just not to soon. It is much more interesting, to see him struggle without it for a while.
    - The fact that Hermione is very intelligent and knowledgable, but still now and than encounters problems she can not solve in a matter of a few weeks or months is very realistic and therefore much more appealing to me, than the "miracle-worker-Hermione" that is shown to us in many other stories.
    - The overall impression is, that all is quite realistic and well written.

    Not so positive:
    - The way you "got rid" of the Weasley-clan seemed a bit hastened to me. There was no indication, that they would ever do such a thing and neither Ron nor Ginny showed any tendencies to become "dragon-wranglers". That was only one of their older brothers and it seems highly unlikely, that they would ever be interested in such.
    - In my eyes Harry and Ginny were a nice and realistic pairing. So if you want them to separate, in order to make Harry available for either Draco or Snape (or both), it would have been enough, to let Harry find out, that he is gay. He and Ginny could either still stay friends, or Ginny could move on and cut all ties to Harry. Either way, she did not need to move to Romania
    - I thought it was quite cold of Hermione to run after Harry, when he left, after Snape kicked him out. Yes, Harry was hurt and yes, he should have someone there to comfort him or whatever. But so was Snape. And I think Snape's need by far surpasses that of Harry. The very least she should have done before going after Harry would have been to inform her mother of what transpired and ask her to look after Snape.
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  • From JanisJ on August 30, 2011
    I usually pass over fics that don't say if they are complete or WIP, but since I love Snarry's... Well, I'm extremely happy I took a peek! It is SOOOOO nice to read things that are well thought-out, well-written and rich in details! And you've got a very nice premise here... Great work-- hope to see more soon...
    Oh, and 15 points to your house of choice for using the word "habiliments" :)
    PS. The 'silver lining' of Severus' emaciation making his already impressive cock even more so was hilarious! :D
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  • From bloodshound on August 28, 2011
    oh, dear... that didn't go well at all. Poor Draco and poor harry too.
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  • From danniperson on August 28, 2011
    Loved the new chapter! I'm really enjoying it so far! It's one of my favorite reads atm lol! Hope to see another update soon!
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  • From bloodshound on August 26, 2011
    interesting. Veeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyy interesting. So Sev not only can't perform magic, his body has become allergic? Intolerant? magic repelling? I'm not sure he'd care for life as an experimental subject. Just how far does the magic repel go? Is he reduced to muggle transport?
    Can't wait to find out more of the back story, the trio's jobs and all, and where's Ron?
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  • From danniperson on August 26, 2011
    I think this is amazing so far! Can't wait to see more from it :)
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