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Reviews for Working On Us

By : Greeneyes
  • From sarahdaye9 on December 17, 2011
    I'm glad you've worked on this story more- I think it is very good!
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  • From eliza1234 on December 15, 2011
    update soon i wonder what dracos mother wants?
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  • From StarrCrystal on December 15, 2011
    I hope she talks to him & they work this out. Stuff like this kills me. But it doesnt kill me enough to stop wanted to read this =)
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  • From sarahdaye9 on September 26, 2011
    Sounds like maybe there is even more to the story. Bad Draco for trying to cover it up, and good for Draco's parents for being pissed at him!
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  • From Firelady112 on September 26, 2011
    I have to admit, this isn't how I'd have expected a story called "Working on us" to go! There's like zero working here. Please tell me that's going to change? I can understand where your Hermione is coming from, I'd probably be the same way - but then again, I was never married or pregnant, so a decision to leave only ever involved me and some heartache...
    Will they work it out? Can they? Are you giving us a HEA? Please update soon...

    P.S. This is NOT meant as a flame, please don't take it that way. I'm just expressing my feelings at your writing, which I think is good, and that's what a review is supposed to be for, right? ;)
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  • From StarrCrystal on September 25, 2011
    I hope they will get back together...
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  • From ochitduzon on September 25, 2011
    Lucius was right. He made his own bed and now he must lie on it. Stupid man! Hermione is a strong woman just like always. I dont know how they could be together now. Surprise me? And also thanks for the regular update!!
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  • From blufalcon on September 25, 2011
    I'm kind of confused with Draco saying he was drunk during the affair and that the lady was threatening him, but when Hermione saw him at Gringotts he seemed really friendly kissing and touching the woman. Is there more than what Draco is saying ???
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  • From CafeAuLait on September 25, 2011
    Aww it's nice to see that Narcissa and Lucius really care about Hermione, although Cissa is taking this way to hard if you ask me.
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  • From eliza1234 on September 25, 2011
    update soon can't wait what happens next i like how the storys going good work
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  • From loisalcantara on September 25, 2011
    argh why so the chapters have to be so short but none the less i love this and felt the pain when Hermione screamed for the divorce. I eagerly await your next update xx
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  • From eliza1234 on September 24, 2011
    update soon i can't wait when hermione come to the malfoy house and get her things and what draco will say about her being pregnant love this story
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  • From ochitduzon on September 24, 2011
    I never thought Draco would really cheat on her. It turned out that Draco is not only a cheater but a liar as well. How could he tell her that it was only a one time thing whe Hermion saw him kissed the other girl's hand? i hate cheaters the most! An arrogant prat is better than a cheater!
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  • From CafeAuLait on September 24, 2011
    *sniff* Aww poor Hermione. Draco is a bastard. I can't believe he used the old "I was drunk" excuse. He wasn't drunk enough not know how to stick his who who dilly into her cha cha. (South Park reference)

    The story is a tad rushed. I understand it's a fic but you need to take more time out to further develop your version of the hp world.
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  • From evanone on September 24, 2011
    I hope you plan on happy end for Hermione. I cant wait what will be next.
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