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Reviews for Working On Us

By : Greeneyes
  • From StarrCrystal on September 24, 2011
    *wipes away tears* omg thats so sad...
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  • From sarahdaye9 on September 23, 2011
    Poor Hermione, although I am rather anxious to hear Draco's side of things.
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  • From hypergurl221 on September 23, 2011
    This is really good
    update more often so i can get my fix ;)

    Love it!
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  • From CafeAuLait on September 23, 2011
    Aww, poor Mione. *smh* If Draco really is cheating then he's a huge ass, and I hope Hermione takes him for everything he's worth...unfortunately that wont happen.
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  • From eliza1234 on September 22, 2011
    update soon can't wait what draco does in trying to find hermione and finding out she is pregnant
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  • From ochitduzon on September 22, 2011
    This is very interesting so i love to read more. Please make it a longer update next time. Thanks!
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  • From sarahdaye9 on September 22, 2011
    Poor Hermione, hope things turn around soon.
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  • From StarrCrystal on September 22, 2011
    Oh my goodness!!! I knew it!!!!! Will this be updated anytime soon!!!??! I gotta see what happens next!!!
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  • From loisalcantara on September 20, 2011
    more more more. Sorry but i am EAGERLY waiting for your next update.
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  • From ckllsdam on September 08, 2011
    Interesting premise, and a story that I would likely be attracted to. Unfortunately, I will not continue reading this work because there are so many errors in grammar and punctuation that it is distracting (and detracting) from what could be a good tale. I found more than a dozen errors in just the first handful of sentences, including capitalization ("Husband" is only capitalized if it is the first word in a sentence, which would be odd, or on some kind of engraving as a title), misuse of commas and semicolons, improper dialogue punctuation, paragraph spacing problems, incomplete sentences, etc. I would urge you to use a beta reader to help you improve your writing if you are serious about being a competent story-teller.
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  • From xoburntofferingsxo on September 07, 2011
    I love this!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 07, 2011
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From loisalcantara on September 07, 2011
    i'm dying to know what happens next! update soon
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  • From StarrCrystal on September 06, 2011
    These clifthangers are killing me!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From katiekrm on September 06, 2011
    Now I really want to know what happens next.
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