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By : Greeneyes
  • From MotekElm on February 28, 2017

    Frustrating that it's a WIP. Not enough Dramione. A good start, it could go somewhere


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  • From ANON - jen on November 16, 2013
    This is a fantastic fic pls make it long and up date soon pls I can't wait for the next chapter, draco's a jerk and I love ur writing
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  • From ANON - christy86 on September 08, 2012
    I really want to know what happens next update please
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2012
    Very good read so update soon!!
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  • From ANON - christy86 on August 09, 2012
    Update soon can't wait when draco finds out to
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  • From ANON - christy86 on August 09, 2012
    Update soon can't wait when draco finds out to
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  • From lemonade8 on August 06, 2012
    I...don't know. I sort of like this Hermione, but I'm having a very hard time sympathizing with her. I want to like her because her situation is familiar, but she handles things so drastically different than I would/did. My child's twin DID miscarry at nine weeks, and my doctor didn't look sadly (I have never known one to do that, to gaze sadly at a patient. They have to stay professional at all times.) Losing a twin being a single mom didn't make me sad, it made me less and more stressed. I felt guilt at the relief, sadness that it didn't have a chance, worry about what would happen in the future to both me and the other fetus...

    Her mother?! How did a volatile, pregnant woman under horrific stress tolerate someone telling her that she's always going to wonder about the twin and then go into details about it? I would have gone off on ANYONE who did that to me, especially my mom who should have known better. That was a callous, insensitive thing to say.

    Hermione said that she would have the baby alone. Does she have a job? Who will watch the baby? Is she going to dump on her parents (dear god,don't let her do that! it would be revolting!)? Can she deal with her mother vomiting callous opinions to her when she has a parenting issue? Why didn't she just get an apartment of her own- she has access to Malfoy funds (and has a right to the pittance that a mere flat would cost)? I thought that initially hiding from him was childish, but I liked that she finally did the grown-up thing and spoke to him and told him her plans.

    I do question her love for him. She flew off the handle for being neglected for a mere three weeks. Military wives would smack her around and tell her to grow up. She didn't try to listen to his side of the story at all, even to give him the courtesy of one last try before cutting off (the man she supposedly loves) for the rest of her life. He was being shady- breaking promises. That does not bode well for the rebuilding of trust, so if her love had died in a matter of three weeks, I wonder if he was worth loving to begin with.

    I will tune in to see if Hermione and Draco become grown-ups, if she miscarries, if they work it out (because this is the Dramione board) and if Draco was set-up and by whom.
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  • From ANON - rae on August 06, 2012
    Thanks for updating this story! Good chapter but really sad, hope it turns out well.
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  • From ANON - Fotia on August 04, 2012
    Love the story so far. There is no way that after essentially ditching her for nearly a month to have an affair, and actually leaving her to be "affectionate" with the other woman in public, that Hermione would ever trust Draco again. And she is definitely not the type to "stay because of the kids." So we can only hope that there is going to be a big surprise.
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  • From MidnightLilly on August 03, 2012
    Twins can sync their heartbeats in the womb
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  • From DB1 on May 07, 2012
    @12 love the story. Please please update soon

    DB
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  • From eliza1234 on January 10, 2012
    i really like how the story is going update soon
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  • From eliza1234 on December 29, 2011
    update soon can't wait what happens next
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  • From sarahdaye9 on December 19, 2011
    Great new chapter, Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From eliza1234 on December 19, 2011
    update soon can't wait what draco will try and say to hermione
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