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Reviews for Parsimony

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From bloodshound on September 20, 2011
    Wow, it just keeps snowballing for Har huh. One thing after another... ah well, at least this way the wolfwere (novel thought btw. The only other place I've heard of one is Terry Pratchett)knows what happened and can mourn it's cubs.
    I am hoping that eventually Malfoy and Har will trust each other enough that Har can bring him ingredient hunting as he was an infinitely better potions student than Har.
    as for why he was out in the woods... he followed one or the other, didn't he? silly git.
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  • From SParker on September 17, 2011
    about #6..

    Been meaning to ask you, have you ever had
    anyone help you with the dialogue between main
    characters or does it come natural for you, when
    you do conversations between two people?
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  • From bloodshound on September 17, 2011
    they might not be but i think you make them come together pretty well.
    I really do like this fic. It's a nice balance for some of the scarier, darker ones.
    Despite all Harry has taken on, it's still got a very light hearted feel to it. I hope Har can handle all he's taken on.
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  • From SParker on September 16, 2011
    about #5...

    1. By the end of the speech, Hermione was grinding her teeth and glaring at him,
    -I don't know why but that struck me as funny. :-)

    He shot Harry a gleaming smile, and Harry resisted, manfully, the temptation to use a Blasting Curse on those white, white teeth.
    -then I saw this one. :-D

    2. When it comes to writing scenes that deal with the classroom, do you draw from experience?
    Do you see writing action scenes as your strong point?
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  • From ANON - semaphore on September 16, 2011
    I didn't have any time whatsoever during the past weeks but just letting you know that I'm really enjoying this story :)
    Really intrigued by Snape and Draco, and I liked the idea of the triad spell (and that Harry's casting the spell would flash bright green).
    Btw, you seem to be insanely productive!
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  • From bloodshound on September 15, 2011
    I rather like it's lighter tone... but that may be because I've been reading a bit of angsty stuff lately. Having such a go with the flow, roll with it harry is a bit of a relief. Got quite a bit on his plate does young Har atm. I hope he can manage it cause he's not going to be the only one suffering otherwise.
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  • From bloodshound on September 11, 2011
    wow, Har's choices are moi interesting. Sucks to be Snape right now. so, how does it feel writing this? It seems to have a much lighter tone than some of your other stuff.
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  • From jujukitty on September 11, 2011
    nice start to thing. and poor harry, sucked into things once again. looking forward to seeing where you go with this
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  • From SParker on September 10, 2011
    about #4...

    This story feels so...casual. I'm beginning
    to think it's about 'lessons learned' or some
    sort and normally I know what it is you're
    writing about from the get-go.

    Like I said, this is interesting.

    ...and after reading the first two sentences, I
    can't help feel that Canon Harry has lived a sad
    life in a way. Despite the friends he has, he was
    constantly fighting all his life & never had a chance
    to REALLY experience things as an actual teenager.

    I'm surprised you haven't done a story like that yet.
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  • From SParker on September 07, 2011
    about #3...

    ..and you just HAD to leave it there. :-p
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  • From bloodshound on September 07, 2011
    woah, snape ... if it is snape, must be truly desperate. Still, go Harry's helping people thing. It was rather daft of him not to leave word with anyone though. what if it was a trap by left over d.e.s or someone hexed with whatever spell is afflicting the Slyths?
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  • From SParker on September 05, 2011
    about #2...

    I really HAVE to say this has a different tone to it.
    Is there a theme to look for?
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  • From bloodshound on September 04, 2011
    He is indeed. I see Harry's 'helping people thing' is still alive, well and doing its thing.
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  • From bloodshound on August 30, 2011
    I thought that this would be a one shot but it's not *hums happily. It's not.
    Wow, you're just motoring through these stories. I think only one's left that you started are Ashborn, that one with no romance and that horror one with Harry and draco going through his killer property. that's pretty damn impressive. I truly wish you made something off these considering how much time and effort goes into them
    just checked your list. I forgot about intoxicate the sun cause i haven't read it and sanctum but hey, remembering 3 unfinished off the top of my head ain't bad right? *makes face.
    The review before me was right too. Likee that one with no romance, this has a really different feel.
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  • From SParker on August 30, 2011
    You know, I was reading this story and ACTUALLY forgot who was
    writing it, because this story has a completely different tone
    to it.

    I'm actually curious to see what you do with this.
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