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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Zip on January 27, 2012
    Soo, what exactly Draco meant when he said
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  • From bloodshound on January 26, 2012
    so basically, things are either about to be sorted on the Slyth front... or head even further up sewage creek, in a boat thats about to spring a leak, with out paddles and headed for that surprise waterfall.
    I liked Minnie's attitude. she really made me grin. 'when it all goes pear shaped, do remember to come to me hmmm.' man she's fun.
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  • From Leania07 on January 26, 2012
    Oh good chapters, glad I only had to get caught up on two. I hope this ritual Draco's working on works for him. Then again, if it does work, will Draco begin to be stand off-ish towards Harry again? Can't wait to see what's cookin' ;)

    Leania
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  • From Moma_Nina on January 26, 2012
    I'm loving the progression. It's slower than most stories that I read, and I like that the you're giving everyone time to really develop rather than just "Oh, I like you now!" Can't wait for more!
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  • From bloodshound on January 21, 2012
    wow, draco is more confusing than any girl on the planet ever thought of being. I can sort of understand him wanting a bit of proof of less than perfection from the one he's forced to rely on... but under his circumstances... would focus and perfection bet more useful... oh well, stress brings strange effects to the most collected of ppl.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 20, 2012
    about #24...

    LoL! I'm going to have to read this again, because Draco is
    SO conflicted that he even has MY head spinning along with
    Harry! :-)

    WTH! I mean seriously Draco, can u not just accept the fact
    Harry's helping because...yes he WANTS to & it's not necessarily
    a need? That maybe he likes you as a person, despite your background?

    Anyway, good chapter Lomona...
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  • From ANON - Zip on January 18, 2012
    Yes, maybe it is because of cannon, but I think it is about more dominant Harry, which have relatively stable personality, too. I don t say, that I don t enjoy your others stories (when I have time), because I do, it just that I like this two most. I wrote in last review, just my thoughts like wanna be writer. One book about writing mentioned, that you have to look for, what you like in stories most(maybe I mentioned this already somewhere). I just wrote you my selfanalysis about my top 2 stories from your H/D collection. It was quite rude in retrospective, sorry. And of course this selfanalysis collided with my earlier opinion, that you clearly can write original story, with your "wardrobe" full of personalities :).
    Back to Parsimony: I can t wait to learn about Snape next life acocmodations - What is Lucius part in whole mess -If there is impostor, who is it - healing of cursed Slynterins and I hope that Harry will have some sleep in the future, beacuse this is not healthy behaviour :D.
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  • From siriuslynluv on January 18, 2012
    I really LOVE this story and can't wait to read more! Please post more soon! Thanks so much for sharing it!
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  • From SParker on January 14, 2012
    about #23...

    That moment where Harry gives Severus his blood for the ritual wasa nice touch, it actually
    gave me an idea for a story I wanted to throw at you.

    I'm happy for Harry that he'll be able to tell Draco now, that the man they saw may not be
    Lucius. Hope things look up for Harry at that point..and he needs to start dropping hints
    that he likes Draco. Haven't seen that done in a story you've done yet. There's always the
    clueless, but never someone trying to give a clue.

    ..and hopefully when everything is said & done, the poor child will be able to get some
    sleep! :-D
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  • From bloodshound on January 14, 2012
    first off i hope this works. my lap top cracked it so i'm using my desk top compy which is a couple of years old now and shows it's age in speed... or rather lack of it. It also needs to be reset at least once a day or it gets bogged down and clunky.
    anyway, I'm glad snape's free. that's one obligation off har's list.
    wow, so who the heck is it if it's not luc? And how and why do they look like him. if it is luc, where did he hear about the experiments and from whom.
    lol, poor har. he needs to start getting some decent rest soon, or he'll fall over.
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  • From Leania07 on January 13, 2012
    This is interesting, it seems rare that someone writes a mature Harry. He's been through hell and yet some still keep him naive about things in the world. Keep up the good work, and I do hope the wolfwere can find closure for the loss of his pups.

    Leania
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  • From ChaosLady on January 13, 2012
    Thank you for the update! It was wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Zip on January 13, 2012
    I just came to conclusion with this last chapter (22), why I love so much Parsimony and World in peaces. Harry is most independent, cheeky, clever and strong there, and of course little bit of dark. He doesn t listen to adults, but if somethings go wrong, he try to make amends, ehm sometimes. In other stories he relate to events and in the end he change by himself, but in this two, even if he do something new, it doesn t feel out of character. I kind of don t like, if Harry is in first chapter Harry and at the end of story, he become someone else (I.T.). It is worst, when he starts drastically change in the second chapter (in this case, maybe I would feel better about characters like Albus and Scorpius, because, we really don t know about their personalities much). Well, and I absolutelly love when Harry speak for himself and it sound .... clever.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 06, 2012
    about #22..

    Well now! As I was definitely the cheerleader here cheering
    Harry on as he fought with enough finesse to put an experienced
    Auror to shame....'Go Harry!' :-D

    Then, when you get to the end & he's holding his own against Klein
    & McGonagall, I was REALLY like...'You Go Harry!

    This was def' an exciting chapter! :-)
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  • From Sailorlorelei on January 06, 2012
    It wasn't until Harry got hit with the tripping spell that I realized I had been holding my breath throughout that entire scene. Was Draco unconcious or frozen in shock? I can't imagine him letting Harry carry him otherwise. I am so proud of Harry for standing up for himself! He definitely needs to do that more often, the ministry is horrible enough without Harry letting them do whatever they want concerning him. It would be so wondeful if Draco actually did tell Harry not to let McGonagal interrupt him, because then he would have heard Harry call him special~ That tid bit would certainly be food for fodder, I can already see Draco brooding lol. I am going to give Draco the benefit of the doubt and hope he cast the spell wrong, though I do not put it past Lucius to do something as insane as start another attack. That man must be polluted from years of using the Dark Arts. Great chapter as always, and I can not wait for the next update.

    ~Fullmoon
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