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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - polka dot on October 27, 2011
    Police who don't use deadly force, hmm, well they are in England so maybe it's realistic.
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  • From bloodshound on October 27, 2011
    shakes head.
    Nothing in har;s life EVER runs smoothly huh. At least Malfoy is more firmly his ally... even if it's cause he doesn't want to be in the devils path.
    Still, i think Klien got it wrong. Har isn't a serial killer. He doesn't seek out people to kill it's just when he has a choice between letting himself/ others be maimed or killing, he goes for the kill shot. He'd be a better hit wizard than an auror i think.
    Hmmm, does the potions effect mean he's being influenced by something or is it something else again. Did the werewolf blood react with something already there? dammit, your stories are always so addictive. looking forward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - sp777 on October 25, 2011
    About 11.... Whoa! Go Harry! O_o [its hard reviewing on a cell]. Anyway I'm feeling Harrys frustrations..what is it that Draco wants him to figure out?
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  • From YamiBakura on October 25, 2011
    Chapter 11

    Eeeee! That was exciting! I can't believe he just killed Greyback right there in front of all those aurors who'd just failed, but will the blood have any effect on him? I imagine that if saliva is enough to pass on the transformation, then any blood, particularly if it ended up in his eyes or mouth, would have some effects. I'm desperately loving this, and can't wait to see what happens when Draco gets out of that bubble. Methinks he's not going to be too pleased.
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on October 23, 2011
    Harry is definitely kicking ass and taking names!
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  • From bloodshound on October 23, 2011
    damn, missed a chappie. :/
    Klien really has no clue how to handle Har does she? Fortunately the head auror seems to. Winces on har's behalf. yup, he just stuck his foot in it hard core. Malfoy is so twitchy and on edge AND he owes Har his life, so he's not going to take this well at all.
    on to the next chappie
    ... 0_o' Did Har just kill Fenrir Greyback?!
    Heh, snickers, Malfoy in a bubble anyone? Fun mental image that one *imagines a malfoy beach ball.
    Snape, you dick! Damn, he'd better appreciate this.
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  • From dgraymansorrowinvoked on October 23, 2011
    loved the new chapter!!! um u might want to fix this sentence "Ron didn't mind if he ate with his mouth full" it is in the very begining and i think u menant to use talk insted of ate^.^ other than that i really enjoyed the chapter~~^.^
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  • From ANON - BlasterBlurby on October 15, 2011
    Wow I'm just lovin this fic. Theres not a single thing I would even think to complain about. Very well written.
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  • From SParker on October 14, 2011
    about #10...

    *looks at title* Let me guess...dancing with the stars, right? :-]

    I had a thought how it would be ironic if Klein became Deputy Headmistress
    of Hogwarts, Merlin help the students...all in all, this chapter was kinda
    tense, with the powerplay.
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  • From SParker on October 10, 2011
    about #9...

    Well now, this is definitely going in a
    different direction, fer shure.. :-)

    Makes me wonder, just WHAT exactly you got
    planned for this story.
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  • From bloodshound on October 08, 2011
    Now we're getting into the meaty bits of the story. har has killed in truth but i believe, the will, the intent to kill if need be has existed before. They were in a freaking war, on the front line. You don't survive there without the intent to kill. Not sure why the aura chika is so surprised over it. They all KNOW har has a steel will, this is just proof there of.
    I love how har took charge with the wolfwere to. most diplomatic of him and I hope he can get the poor being some answers.
    As for Malfoy... well, that should help with the snape sitch at least.
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  • From SParker on September 29, 2011
    about #8...

    Well now, things are starting to get interesting...and
    I'm not sure about Klein.
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  • From ladylizzy on September 27, 2011
    I'm really enjoying your story. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From bloodshound on September 26, 2011
    wow, covered quite a bit of ground with this one. So Har, if you go around collecting enough people who need help, eventually you might find some of these ppl can help the others. hopefully snape will let har tell malfoy... he really needs the help.
    magical allergy... lol.
    heh, it followed me out, if i can keep it from getting killed, can i keep it?
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  • From SParker on September 22, 2011
    about #7...

    1. Unicorn 'water'??? *gotta laugh at that one* :-D
    ...though what you told Unneeded gotz me kinda nervous. *_*

    2. I must say I was surprised you used 'wolfweres' in this one,
    I must admit it's not an often used word in the creature myth
    vocabulary AND most people/authors have never heard of them.

    3. Why..oh WHY does Prof. Klein have my hackles up..and couldn't
    Draco be a little bit sneakier? But, then again he didn't go to the School
    of Sneakiness, with Harry Potter as Headmaster.
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