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By : CryingCinderella
  • From Remarkable on August 11, 2012
    OH MY GAWD did Snape really say "boner patrol?" Bwhahahahahahaha! That is the fucking funniest line ever! Seriously, i am glad Hermione was remorseful over her shabby, horrid treatment of him despite the way he pressed her buttons. It really was reprehensible, but in a way, was probably what he needed - to be broken down and built back up again so they could come together on common ground, no dirty pun intended!
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  • From ANON - Nightqueen on August 11, 2012
    OMG!! LOL Sex Will cure you!! I simply can't wait to see what his reaction is to that statement!! Another awesome chapter!!!!
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  • From MidnightLilly on August 11, 2012
    LOL! Sex as an universal cure!
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  • From ANON - Missycam on August 11, 2012
    Ohhhhhh that's so promising I need to read more.... :-P
    I wonder though if Hermione will quit the handjob for a blowjob anytime soon.... :-P
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  • From TalisRuadair on August 11, 2012
    I really did love your description of continually building orgasm. Though poor Severus had to suffer through it for an hour alone. I had a feeling that Hermione might come to the sex conclusion. It's in the name of the book right? Also, I can't help but wonder if Severus' solitary personality is what caused his illness to worsen. If he was participating in sexual acts frequently, then would he have such debilitating symptoms?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2012
    Thank you so much for continuing this story. I had given up and stopped checking for updates. Really glad to be so pleasantly surprised. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - midnightwakeonyou on August 11, 2012
    hahahahahahahahaha sex may be your cure... i dont think i stopped laughing for a couple of mins on that..
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  • From ANON - Mary on August 10, 2012
    Holy canes CryingCinderella, the story is getting so deep! I think Severus is faking the cane... just want to try another treatment... I hope I'm right! Otherwise she is absolutely right, the most embarrassing moment of your life!
    Gosh, so emotional and hot at the same time. Love IT!

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  • From ANON - onyx85 on August 10, 2012
    Great story! It's very well written and the end of each chapter leaves me wanting more! I can't wait to read what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Nightqueen on August 10, 2012
    Wow!! Another amazing chapter. You really know how to weave a tale. I don't now who to feel worse for Severus or Hermione. This is a situation neither one of them ever thought they would find themselves in. So much pain and then pleasure one is unsure of wanting or giving. I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - adi on August 10, 2012
    You've done a wonderful job of expressing believable shifts in tension and doubt between the characters.
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  • From moodysavage on August 10, 2012
    I feel so bad for Severus and Hermione! I can see how he made her angry but knowing him she probably never expected him to react that way. And Severus being humiliated is so hard to see especially after all he's been through. His sneering has kept his feelings safe for a long time and seeing his real feelings and reactions is not something that others get to see. I think describing Hermione as feeling sick about the incident is very accurate.

    Love love love this story and I love how you have written this couple. I can't wait to read more about them :)

    Oh... you also kept me up till 3:30 am reading The Fantasy Book! Whoo Hooo is that hot. (I was too tired to write a review yet) but dang... can't wait to hear Snape's fantasy :)
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  • From ANON - Missycam on August 10, 2012
    Ohhhhhhh I love the twist!!!!!
    Ahhhh thx Minerva for pointing out the obvious...
    Please hurry up I wanna see what happen next ;-)
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  • From ShilohDarke on August 10, 2012
    I So love this story! It has actually inspired me to play with a similar plot... Do give all credit to you for the inspiration. If you happen to decide to have a look, please let me kno what you think!
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  • From TalisRuadair on August 10, 2012
    Well that was surely getting him back but I didn't even consider the possbility of completely hummiliating him. I guess that does wonders for his attitude. Though I cannot help but wonder why he'd be so afraid of her checking his prostrate, it is a typical Muggle examination of a man his age, right? I'm seriously enjoying this story. I can't wait to see what happens in the hospital wing.
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