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By : CryingCinderella
  • From lemonade8 on October 16, 2011
    Hmmm... she's taking a big risk. He seems to not know how to pursue her normally, or maybe he doesn't want to. She could be risking her heart and if she gets pregnant? !!!
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  • From ANON - Sarah Ann on October 15, 2011
    I am very much enjoying your story thus far. You have a very descriptive way of explaining the surroundings and the thought process though the action process. Hermione's inner monologue sometimes drags on a touch too long but I still get the message trying to be conveyed.
    Keep up the good work.


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  • From on October 13, 2011
    MORE, PLEASE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Celest on October 13, 2011
    you suck.... how can you stop there:) Frustration does not even begin to describe what I felt the moment I saw please review ... update soon
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  • From BloodTear on October 13, 2011
    Gah I wish he'd just get over himself! Great chapter... I'm just ready for Sev to man up! Lol
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  • From EvaBrick on October 13, 2011
    Yay! :D Thanks for updating! :)
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  • From meltin2me on October 13, 2011
    OK WTH? Is he in denial or does he really not remember?? Interesting.
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  • From ANON - colao on October 13, 2011
    really looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - crownglass39 on October 12, 2011
    Oh wow...just ....yeah that works.
    Poor Severus just doesn't know how to deal with his feelings does he?
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  • From shsa0702 on October 10, 2011
    Fantastic! Haha, having just finished the latest chapter from The Fantasy Book and now jumping over to catch up on this story of yours, I find that Severus in a dark, thick robe makes an appearance in both! Haha, it was very interesting to see him in identical states of dress in both of the new chapters of your updated stories.

    Anywho, amazing new chapter, love the tension! I couldn't stop reading and re-reading every part of this chapter. I must've read it a total of three times because I just didn't want it to end! Can't wait to see what lies ahead for us, hopefully a little release for Hermione!

    As always, looking forward to what you have in store for us!
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  • From ANON - misskitty1990 on October 10, 2011
    superb chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter to see the aftermath!
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  • From ANON - Tinymandi on October 10, 2011
    Oh poor Hermione. She needs some release! So much sexual tension! I love this story.
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  • From ANON - TwistOfLime on October 09, 2011
    SO HOT! I loved your pacing in that scene. Also I kind of liked that Hermione didn't climax. It made it more realistic. Thank you for the update. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From BloodTear on October 09, 2011
    Ah I wish he'd stop being an ass! Obviously they are meant for one another! Excellent chapter!
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  • From ANON - Mari on October 09, 2011
    Holy Hot Hell. I'm sure the fallout from that little dalliance will come back to both of them. I'm stunned he did it poor Hermione I'd feel bad for her if it wasnt just what she wanted. Thank you for sharing cant wait for more this is a great story.
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