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Reviews for The Massage

By : CryingCinderella
  • From ANON - anncee on September 08, 2011
    oh my gosh! why! why would you do that to me! how cruel to stop right there! hehe please update! can't wait to see where this goes! (although i dare say i can guess where this is leading) >=] ....fantastic as always!
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  • From ANON - Mary on September 07, 2011
    Well, talk about BIG cliffhangers... great chapter and waiting with tingling eyes for the update,
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  • From Sampdoria on September 07, 2011
    What a fantastic chapter, absolutely perfect. I hope Hermione will "handle" the situation with grace and passion, leaving both of them satisfied rather than imbarressed. It does make me think though that Severus protests about Hermiones qualifications migth be rooted in a totally different "problem" than her educational qualifications:-))
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  • From ANON - Dawn on September 07, 2011
    Evil cliffie ending Chapter 3! Damn you!! (But seriously, great fic so far. Now, don't take too long to update, mkay?)
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  • From EvaBrick on September 07, 2011
    AUGH! What a cliffhanger! :)
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  • From ANON - whatever on September 07, 2011
    MOREMOREMORMEMROEMOEMREOMEOMRE I LOVE THIS! I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL TMW :'(
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  • From on September 07, 2011
    OK...all I can say is AWKWARD!!! Looking forward to reading more!
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  • From on September 06, 2011
    Oh, Hermione you naughty, naughty girl!!!! Getting turned on by Severus. What do you think he's going to say about that? Anyway, LOVE it!! Please continue with another chapter!
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  • From Sampdoria on September 06, 2011
    Absolutely loved it, I am willing to bet that Hermione gave him a massage far superior of any massage given to him before, it was wonderfully written!
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  • From LadyxEmpire on September 06, 2011
    I absolutely love your stories, and this one is no different. However, I can't help but take the cynical view that this one too will end up being shelved for an extensive amount of time. You are an absolutely brilliant writer and it is positively frustrating beyond belief when I find a fantastic story that never gets finished. Do you plot out your concepts before you begin writing, or is it a more organic flow that you explore as you write? While there are merits to both, if you tend to employ the former please consider constructing a general plot line before you begin only for the sake of consistent updates and completion (certainly not for lack of outstanding plot!). It is my opinion from reading a number of your pieces that you clearly have exceptional skill and talent and I would love to be able to see where you take the characters in all of your stories. This review comes from a place of sincere love for your work, so please don't take this as a "flamer."
    Love, Peace, & Lemons,
    LadyxEmpire
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  • From sarahdaye9 on September 06, 2011
    Poor Snape, I can't think of many things that would be more humiliating to him than to have to admit weakness AND be naked in front of a former student. But we can't get to the sexy good times without some tension right?! ;)
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  • From on September 04, 2011
    Wow! So far so good. When are you going to post another chapter!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - colao on September 04, 2011
    ooooh, I like...
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  • From Sampdoria on September 04, 2011
    I really liked this. Very well written and plotted. What I liked the best was that Severus for the very first time as long as I have read the books and fanfiction, were truly taken to task for abusing a student. It has always annoyed me that, even if Severus were supposed to be a disliked teachers and a kisser of Slytherin asses to maintain his cover as a spy, he was allowed by the Headmaster and other professors to be a truly abusive teacher without being taken to task for it. The way he treated Harry from day one went way and above his call of duty as the afore mentioned spy, so obviously punishing a child for his fathers sins and for his mother not loving him as he wanted her to do. Neville were bullyied into a nervouss wreck and he never grew out of his bullying of Hermione. She was punished for being a mudblood, Harrys friend, Gryffindor and outshining his preciouss Slytherins. Yes, she gained her knowlegde from books, schoolchildren are supposed to do so, she raised her hand in class, and asked questions. Well, there is a few years since I went to school myself, but I do think it is still a part of the education and grade to raise your hand to answear a question asked by the teacher if you knew the answear, and to ask questions if you want something clarified. Punishing her for doing so and so clearly show that his preciouss Slytherins either didn't know or didnt care about their schoolwork, tells more about him than about her. The episode with the "I see no difference" comment where Draco so clearly had hexed Hermione should have got him sacked or at least severely repriminded if Dumbledore had any credencial as Headmaster in sted of playing warlord all the time. (And yes, I do think Dumbledore was as lousy as Headmaster as Severus were a teacher, and many studends suffered for it). I love that Minerva is a far batter Headmistress than Dumbledore ever were as Headmaster. On the other side, Voldemort and several of his followers, Lucius Malfoy especially, must have been stupid beyond normal for not realising that no teacher would have been allowed to keep his job when behaving as Severus did, if his employer didn't have a secret agenda for it. It is luckily that they were as stupid I guess, but they were still stupid. Anyhow, Hermione has no reason to accept his "Know-it-all" name calling anymore now that she is an adult, and he should stop behaving like a petulent child and start acting as a teacher or find himself a new job. I most sincerely hope that Hermione will give him the massage of his life, leaving him painless, annoyed, aroused and even grumpier due to Hermione being the one installin such feelings in him. I want him to grow into a human being, still the grumpy bat we love, but a more honorable grumpy bat, and I want him to face the persona he has allowed himself to be, and do something about it. I am of course very much looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Mary on September 04, 2011
    So far so good! We'll se how the massage - I mean treatment goes. Poor Hermione, he won't be happy...
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