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Reviews for In the Dungeons

By : amidtheflowers
  • From ANON - Missus_G on January 14, 2015
    This story blew me away. The character complexity and plot development-just, wow!
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  • From ANON - Audrey on January 23, 2012
    Please keep writing! I want to read more
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on December 06, 2011
    INSANE STORY keep up the great work and its soooo gripping and angsty and perfect
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  • From pomerann on November 07, 2011
    You should submit this to hawthorne and vine. but they require a beta reading. You've got a lot of potential with the story, and I'd like to see where you want to take it. Some brainstorming might help if you're stuck.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2011
    LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! The story line and the characters that Hermione and Draco have become are just fantastic and their relationship is addicting. Pretty pretty please update soon... I can NOT wait to see what happens!
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  • From ANON - s on September 20, 2011
    Very well-written and intriguing. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From amerereader on September 15, 2011
    I love this story so far! I really hope that you update soon!
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  • From ANON - hleeh338 on September 10, 2011
    This story is so intense, the writing is utterly breathtaking. I'm so glad I decided to take the time to read this and I can't wait for more, it is addictive.
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  • From ANON - Winchiwitch on September 09, 2011
    This is a fantastic story so far. It's got me really hooked. Can't wait to see more.
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  • From hypergurl221 on September 06, 2011
    This is amazing
    i love it
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on September 05, 2011
    Hello. I normally don't read 6th year stories, but your Author's Note (Things to consider: Set in Half-Blood Prince. Voldemort hasn't recruited Draco yet to kill Dumbledore. It's just plain old smarmy Malfoy here.) made me give it a try. After four chapters, I can say I am enjoying it, although your AN was blown to bits. lol I am sorry Hermione has had to suffer so much pain in such a short time and that her friendships aren't as strong as she thought they were. I am glad some people stood up for her and that Harry and Ginny haven't left her completely alone. I hope she gets to kick Ron in the nads at some point! I also like the changes you've made to Draco's story to allow him room to grow and change. I look forward to seeing him learn to trust, allow someone else in, allow himself to lean on someone, and begin to fight against all the evil he's grown up with. Thank you and best of luck with your story. I look forward to more soon, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - colao on September 05, 2011
    definitly enjoying this story and look forward to more
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  • From livefolks on September 05, 2011
    Wow, great story! Can't wait to read more. :)
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  • From newtothis on September 05, 2011
    question for you draco was making fun of ron mom, and ron stood up to him and he the bad guy. how come hermoine or ginny or harry did not attack draco for that. i mean i would if someone was makeing fun of my mom.

    and how is ron a bigot, he hate darco becsoue draco a jerk,and alwasy has bad. there is nothing wrong with hateing jerks.
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  • From newtothis on September 05, 2011
    ron in not a git, someone show intrest in him so he gave her a chance, just like you did with krum, he could barly speak english, so you just as bad. dateing a guy that treat you like crap and your friends, i could see ron being hurt, would you like it if he dated pansy.

    i hope they all go back to being friends, but hermonie got to stop acting like a child and tell ron how she feels. and ron has to do the same. but draco a jerk.
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