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Reviews for Control

By : estherkolbe
  • From SinfulMind on September 22, 2011
    Smut rules! ;) I'd like to trade places with Harry if possible :P
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  • From BloodTear on September 21, 2011
    Gah. Harry is planning something isn't he? I mean, really Sev can't make do with his threat of ending the relationship bc they need each other for the bond... But Sev could make his life hell... But Sev also knows his pet... Gah! I can't wait tip the next chapter! Great job with this one.... On the front door lol
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  • From magentah on September 21, 2011
    Yum! (See, I told you I check all day long!) I have an idea about the true jerk behind the Tobias Snape haunting, but I'm going to keep it to myself in case other readers check the reviews. I love that both Harry and Severus have a lot to learn about this relationship. Severus is already realizing that he can't stay detached like he has in the past. Hopefully he is aware that it's possible to be in love with your submissive while still being a fantastic Master. The two aren't mutually exclusive! I definitely can't wait to see what happens at the club tonight!!
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  • From Nikte on September 21, 2011
    SMUT!!! By the way, forgot to mention something about last chapter, Harry promised to not go alone to Severus' family home, he never promised to go only if Severus accompanied him...
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  • From magentah on September 21, 2011
    Glad to see this back! The smut was fantastic :D and I'm enjoying your hints at spankings. I hope that Harry doesn't go running off to try to save the day by himself! That was a big ultimatum for Severus to throw at him, but I think it just shows how serious the situation is, and I hope Harry understands that. This is great! Can't wait for more! :)
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  • From Nikte on September 21, 2011
    Mmmmhhhh, so many questions. Does a ghost can leave a magical signature? What about a wand, I mean, will it leave the magical signature of the owner even if it is used by someone else? And what about Severus dream, was it planted in his head by someone else, or was it only his subconsious reflecting his fears? OH, SO NEED A LITTLE BIT MORE OF PLOT, but of course, i also need A LOT MORE OF SMUT Jajaja.
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  • From SinfulMind on September 21, 2011
    Ha! I knew it! When I thought about the Deatheaters, Lucius was the first person that came to my mind. :) The story is getting better and better with each chapter!
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  • From BloodTear on September 21, 2011
    Oh please,'please,'please Harry don't dO anything stupid. Well, not stupid enough for Sev to end the relationship:... But do do something that will get you into trouble haha!

    I am so glad this is back up and running! I felt utterly lost without it yesterday! It was so depressing! I checked about nine hundred times for a new chapter!

    As usual, AWESOME chapter.... Perhaps another or more soon? Hehe
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  • From BloodTear on September 20, 2011
    I am officially near tears now. This is oh so depressing. I mean... Its ADULT ff... Obviously there is stuff going on! Ahhhh! =......(
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  • From magentah on September 20, 2011
    AAH! I came home from work to get my nightly 2-3 chapters of my favorite WIP only to find a horrible message about you needing a proper disclaimer. THIS IS A TRAGEDY. I won't throw a temper tantrum about it but I'm very tempted! ;) Please note, my crankiness is at AFF, not you. BUT I do hope you get on that quick so I can read read read, lol.
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  • From BloodTear on September 20, 2011
    What the heck happen to this story?? Ahhhhhh!
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  • From LadySilver on September 20, 2011
    :( story has been hidden
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  • From Danyealle on September 20, 2011
    Your story has been hidden. Please check the email box associated with your AFF account for more information. If you no longer have access to this account, please contact tos_team@adultfanfiction.net for more information.
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  • From BloodTear on September 20, 2011
    So, apparently reading on your phone, in class, is frowned upon... Otherwise you would have gotten this review hours ago. Lol. Ah-maz-ing!!!!!! Gah Sev is so flipping hot! Great job! I am also quite glad that he didn't make poor Harry wait any longer... I mean... How cruel lol
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  • From Nikte on September 20, 2011
    Wow, that was so hot!!!!!!!!!! perfect for my midmornig break, and by the way, my baby says thank you for not letting his mommy get fired, jajaja. And I totally agree with you, would love to be in Harry's place, Severus is a damn good master, and sexy as hell ;)
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