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By : estherkolbe
  • From BloodTear on September 18, 2011
    Aw I want to see Harry get into trouble! I knew he had tO sooner of later! Please update that chapter soon! Also, these chapters were awesome, as usual! =)
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  • From Selera on September 18, 2011
    ...... EVIL! Badbadbadbad EVIL! post the next chapter or I will hunt you down and force you to watch Barney until you do!
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  • From LadySilver on September 18, 2011
    absolutely wonderful ^^ i cant wait to see what happens next. ^^ i just love this story! and am enjoying your fast updates! You are awsome!
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  • From bloodshound on September 18, 2011
    Har and Ad have PLANNNNNNS. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
    Snapes not gonna know what hit him. =^-^=
    I hope Har's up for dealing with the fall out.
    Snape really needs to write up a contract... or at least set up some ground rules so Har isn't going in cold all the time. >>
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  • From Tesgura on September 18, 2011
    Oh I think I love you right now. As often as you update I can log on everyday and find a few more chapters and I just realized I've never reviewed, but damn do I love this story!
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  • From magentah on September 18, 2011
    Great chapter! Excellent introduction to bondage for Harry. Especially for a first scene, I think he did quite well! Sorry I didn't get to review yesterday, had a long day at work. I can't wait to see how they interact afterward! Very much looking forward to the next update. :) I literally can't get enough of my favorite kinky boys and the fun situations you put them in. Thanks again for sticking with this story! I wish other readers weren't so lazy about reviewing--you deserve the praise. :D
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  • From bloodshound on September 17, 2011
    I hope he;s not planning to break harry down to much to re build him. slaves can get so... generic when people do that. har is much more fun as his own self, attitude and all. Snapes going to have to be very patient and ease him into it. the other bloke was right though. Too soon indeed, after all, Har has been into this for a very short time and he hasn't even started obedience training or boundaries or anything much really. Do they have a contract? I can't remember, but at any rate, let him learn a bit first before tossing him in clueless at the deep end.
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  • From BloodTear on September 17, 2011
    Ah that was awesome. Sev is so mean yet so delightful lol. He has to know that, while Harry is almost a natural sub it seems, his attitude will still Get him into trouble... Will Sev ever spank him for being bad or having an attitude? I am curious bc it seems like that might be the route Sev takes. Again, love this story!=)
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  • From magentah on September 16, 2011
    Eeee so cute! That was so good for both of them, I think. Harry's not the type to bow down immediately and get it right from the start. I mean, hell, he doesn't even really know what he's supposed to be doing. Severus has been fantastically patient, and I can't blame him for not having too much patience left at the same time. I can't wait for the next chapter! Also really curious about what Harry's outfit looks like. :)
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  • From Nikte on September 16, 2011
    No bondage today ;( Anyway, I was starting to wonder when will Severus start "training" Harry, and it's so funny he is so in character, I mean it is so tipical of him to expect Harry to know exactly what he is supposed to do with out explaining first, it
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  • From BloodTear on September 16, 2011
    You are updating too quickly? Never! I look for updates with this story about a hundred times a day! I got an account just so I could review it lol... But just figured out that I wasn't signed in until today. Anyways, great job! I like the dominant/submissive aspect in Sev and Harry's relationship. Keep up the good work!
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  • From magentah on September 16, 2011
    Lavender's last name is Brown, btw. The Patil twins are Parvati and Padma. :) I can't help but worry for Harry--I don't imagine Severus is going to be happy when he finds out Harry was sneaking information about his father behind his back. So excited to hear you're in it for the long haul! Haha. I will definitely be sticking with ya. :D
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  • From bloodshound on September 16, 2011
    Gah! you up date too quickly. *pouts. I don't get a chance to comment on stuff. *pouts harder. but i like not having to wait for my story time none the less. ^^
    I did spot a few typos but they were four or five chappies ago.
    *fishes your snape out from under the mattress and brushes him off, repairing any damage. He's a pretty good snape really. I hope he'll come to trust Har soon cause he's gotta know, Har isn't one to sit/stay when someone he cares about is hurts... no matter how much of a turn on he finds it relinquish control. >>
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  • From magentah on September 15, 2011
    Oh, also: Cliffhanger! Gah!
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  • From magentah on September 15, 2011
    OMG I just wrote a GIANT review and AFF ate it. Ugh. To summarize: you are AWESOME and pervy in such wonderful ways, I am loving the plot as well as the smut, and I think you should keep writing this story forever. Really. Sorry I didn't write it out in better detail like the original review I tried to leave! Thanks so much for sharing your fantastic ideas for our favorite boys with us. :D
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