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By : estherkolbe
  • From bloodshound on September 12, 2011
    oh dear... an amicable relationship this is not.
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  • From SinfulMind on September 12, 2011
    Wow, very promising story. Your style leaves much to be desires, but you should get better qith time. That last chapter was somehow confusing. First Snape is cold and stony, then kisses Harry, then again fucks him without much consideration and leaves after giving him sth for pain. Weird. I hope his not really with Draco - ewwww... Keep writing, just take more care with your style and try not to end the scenes so abruptly cuz it makes your readers confused.


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  • From HeartStar on September 12, 2011
    interesting I look forward to more *S*
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  • From bloodshound on September 11, 2011
    looks like this is going to be quite a bumpy relationship, even before we get into the d/s stuff.
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  • From mrequecky on September 11, 2011
    This first bit was delicious! Want more :D
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  • From CodyMThomas on September 11, 2011
    I think I really love your writing and I think that Severus just might make good on that threat.
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  • From bloodshound on September 10, 2011
    typical head long Harry. so, despite the kink will there be any kids in their future?
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