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Reviews for The Diary - Re-edited

By : Suziesu74
  • From jujukitty on January 21, 2012
    ok, harry and draco are just fucking hot together, you've done a wonderful job with the sexual tension between them and harry's wandering randy thoughts. and of course them being who they are, they have to keep having misunderstandings, but that just means lots of makeup sex right? lmao.

    and remus apparently was married, huh? and who's this mysterious auror? very intriguing. keep up the great work, i cant' wait to find out what happens next :D
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on January 11, 2012
    Aww man just when it was starting to get juicy! So Melody is Harry's godmother huh, interesting so would that mean that the mystery man is Sirius? I'll just have to wait and find out then won't I :).
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  • From jujukitty on January 10, 2012
    lol poor harry, imagine he's goign to be having some interesting dreams for a bit after that little show. and now he's got draco staying in his room too, he is so screwed lol. poor draco though, and of course he's going to have to be his normal stuck up malfoy self at least at first. i see lots of fireworks in their future. keep up the good work, i look forward to more :)
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  • From ChaosLady on October 08, 2011
    OOh. So that's who Melody is. Did she have a crush of Sirius? Why did the diary end? Did she die? I want to know! Update soon!
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  • From bloodshound on October 08, 2011
    oh my. I wonder why he hasn't heard of Mel before. My a lot happened in this chappie. Poor Luc, he's so devastated. As for Har and Draco, maybe it's the stress effect, accelerating their attraction to each other.
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  • From ladylizzy on October 03, 2011
    LOVE IT!! MORE MORE MORE
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  • From bloodshound on October 03, 2011
    wow, talk about practically dropped in his lap. *snickers.
    Still, poor malfoy... sucks to be him right now.
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  • From ChaosLady on October 02, 2011
    this is really good. I'm sorry I missed the postings of the last 6 chapters. RL does not leave me with a lot of spare time.
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  • From ANON - MoonlitWorld on October 01, 2011
    :O nooooo don't leave it there!! Such a cliffhanger!!
    This plot bunny has just got amazingly good!!!
    Please please please update soon!
    I'm loving this story already xD
    xMoonlitx
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  • From tsparkle3 on September 24, 2011
    Oh my gosh, I am in love with this story! i absolutely love it!
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  • From Mandymoo on September 22, 2011
    I liked the idea :)

    However, the actual writing leaves a bit to be desired! Just general grammar! The characters ARE a little off BUT what would be the point of a FANFICTION if they are all exactly the same? So keep going with that!

    Please do update soon!
    -MooChew
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  • From Goddess81 on September 19, 2011
    I liked this chapter a lot...Mmm hot, horny Remus and Sirius....Love it Xx
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  • From BleedingHearts on September 19, 2011
    Interesting start, and a great concept. But the characters don't seem... right. Some of the grammar is wrong, but it's readable, except for the erratic behaviour of the characters. For example, Dumbledore shouting so easily, and seeming less reserved. And Harry's thoughts seem quite random and personal.
    I'm sorry for a mostly negative comment, but I just hope it helps. Keep writing, I can see a lot of potential in this.
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  • From Goddess81 on September 19, 2011
    Another good chapter, I laughed out loud at the thought of Severus telling Harry to wank to relieve frustration. I look forward to the next.Xx
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  • From Goddess81 on September 18, 2011
    I want to read more of the diary...A great start Xx
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