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Reviews for One Soul Two Bodies

By : ForgetfulLove
  • From HornyVirgin on April 06, 2013
    OMG this is crazy how did you come up with this story? It's amazing and confusing and so far well thought out. I love it. Hope you update soon.
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on June 14, 2012
    ch. 17 was so good and so sad. I'm glad Hermione and the boys are getting along. I wonder when she'll tell them that she had been pregnant?
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  • From ANON - amanda on March 14, 2012
    This story is different than the norm I read. But it has captivated me. I like your style of writing and cannot wait to read more.
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  • From dragongirl on December 30, 2011
    Nice! Very moving... Need some tissue alerts! LOL
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  • From ANON - Akasha on December 29, 2011
    For the love of all that is sacred. Post the next story
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  • From sarahdaye9 on October 23, 2011
    Uhoh! Bad bad Nymphadora! And I like the part about all the Weasley brothers and Dad being bad, since you usually don't see that in a story unless Hermione has gone to the dark side as well. Can't wait for Hermione to get with Remus and Snape, but I'm loving the story on the way!
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  • From CafeAuLait on October 23, 2011
    Loved the little Dramione scene! xoxo (my otp) I wouldn't mind learning more about the other Hermione. It's good to know Ginny is safe. Draco doesn't like harry; well, I guess some things never change, lol.
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  • From CafeAuLait on October 23, 2011
    I grow more and more intrigued by each chapter. I wonder if the Hermione in this present timeline was as brilliant as the Hermione who changed the timeline.
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  • From CafeAuLait on October 23, 2011
    Hmm...that was an interesting cliffhanger in chapter two. So, Hermione's soul has been split from her body for twenty-four years. Lucius and Draco being at the cottage is surprising. I was sure they would be death eaters, I'm glad I was wrong.
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  • From CafeAuLait on October 23, 2011
    Nicely written. You captured the scenes very well.

    Poor Hermione, I'm glad she wasn't raped.
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  • From dragongirl on October 20, 2011
    Oh YES!
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  • From dragongirl on October 18, 2011
    I simply love it!
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  • From magentasouth on October 17, 2011
    To be palatable is to be tasty and appealing. You are calling something maggot infested and palatable. One wonders at the quirks of your palate. This is the first line of the story. UNpalatable is what you mean.
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on October 16, 2011
    ive got an idea, on who goes after her...how about none of the above and Lucius does!!!
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  • From SnakeGirl on October 16, 2011
    I am really enjoying your story. I'm starting to get a better idea of what is going on and I like the direction you're taking.

    Severus is my favorite, so my vote will always be him.

    But really, I could easily see them all running up after her. Or perhaps Lucius since they'd just had that small confrontation - must be hard to be seen by someone who had probably been fond of you as a rapist. Poor Lucius, he's obviously a good guy in this world and now he's being confronted with evidence that he has in himself to be so evil. Ah, well, I'm pretty sure that part is just a side bit, lol, but that interaction within the self has always sort of fascinated me a bit. I think it's why Severus is my favorite character - in all of HP he's the only one that realized he could be more than he was and went about doing something to change that. And your fic is a really great way to shine a light on that - how easy it is to make the 'wrong' choice.

    LOL, anyhow, great chapter and looking forward to the next one!
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