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By : AnyaToile
  • From MollysSister on December 14, 2011
    You and your teasing about smut and then NOTHING! Why do you torment the fangirls like this? Why?

    I am all sorts of curious about what Hermione found in the detention book. Although I must confess to wonder why she thinks its going to make any difference at all?
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  • From MollysSister on December 14, 2011
    Its nice to know the Malfoy name has lost a bit of shine in this post voldy world. I wonder if Severus will invite his old friend over for a drink about 9pm tonight? Does Lucius like to watch?
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  • From MollysSister on December 14, 2011
    You think there will be 45-50 chapters of this story? WOOO HOOOOO! That is fabulous news! I am so very happy to have stumbled upon your story. I cannot wait to hear about some of the more barbaric disaplin methods Hermione finds. Oh and detention tonight. YIppeee!
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  • From MollysSister on December 14, 2011
    Is it too late to vote? I say keep Lupin and Black dead. I am not a fan of either of them.

    So Hermione is dressed in her house colors ready to confront the evil and strangely skilled in enemas Snape. Woot! Bring it!
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  • From MollysSister on November 24, 2011
    Eight more days of "treatments" Woot! I am so ready for Hermione to tell Prof Snape that she enjoys them. Whatever will he say in the face of this brash revelation? I cannot wait to find out!
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  • From MollysSister on November 23, 2011
    OH MY GAWD HOw long is he going to make her wait on the toliet? I am so into this story I am having sympathy cramps!
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  • From yuiop12345 on November 05, 2011
    Nice
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  • From alina290 on November 04, 2011
    Thank you so much for the update. Real life can be bitch at times. I hope your project went well. Poor Hermione. I feel so bad for her. Severus is a man that can never really be read or understood at times. He seems to have had a very hard life here. My only hope is that he doesn't take it too far and then regret his actions. One questions, is he enjoying what he is doing to her? I know that it's to help her, but still.

    Liz
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  • From Whitlock on October 29, 2011
    When will this story be updated? Last week there was an AN listed as ch 14 saying that there would be an update Sunday ( which would have been the 16th). Then that note was deleted.
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  • From severus49 on October 28, 2011
    Yellow ink for Hufflepuff? Why not black, since that's their other house color? Since most parchment is off white or beige, can you imagine how hard it would be to see yellow ink against it? The pigments wouldn't be strong enough. Gold would do a little better, but black would still work the best.
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  • From severus49 on October 28, 2011
    Wait, Snape took away points in the Headmaster's office, even though Minerva was in the room? I don't think that can actually happen. And I have to say, "go Hermione!"
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  • From severus49 on October 28, 2011
    It's pretty good so far, but two minor things bug me - one, why does Hermione keep falling on her arse? Does she have Vertigo? Normal people just get off balance for a moment when they stumble, not fall. Second was when you wrote that she put quills(plural) and her wand in her hair. Wands are around a foot long, so don't you think she'd look really weird with it sticking out? Quills are short,not as weird looking. Why did she hang up the enema bottle? You mean, it doesn't embarrass her? It would embarrass me! I'd keep it in the damn box until I absolutely HAD to use it.
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  • From vonHardenberg on October 27, 2011
    If you have a notification list of new postings please add me.
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  • From kattniptwo on October 22, 2011
    ch 6 --just thought of another concern here if they are going to be in a D/s relation ship of sorts she should be allowed a safe word as she may feel she has no options..agian still holding out that he softens some I still find him a bit too cruel
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  • From kattniptwo on October 22, 2011
    I am all for bastard snarky snape but even here it just seems cruel. | like the promise the story has so far and i do hope that over time he softens some (not fully) but he does need to aknowledge she did work hard for voldies fall
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