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By : AnyaToile
  • From MollysSister on October 21, 2011
    I am getting a little zing every time Snape says "proper treatment" He says it a lot. I like it. I wonder why he isnt attending to her other ahem needs?
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  • From MollysSister on October 21, 2011
    Oh cold water! I am flinching just thinking about it. I wonder is part of this the humiliation of letting go of her bowels in front of him? Will he have her watch herself in a mirror? Should I just shut up with all the questions? Yes I can. Lips are sealed. Click
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  • From MollysSister on October 21, 2011
    I wonder if Hermione realized she was being given a time out? I certainly didnt! LOL! I wonder is that part of the punishment allowing time to pass before she can let go? Can a person really hold all the water the is threatening her with? Hummmm
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  • From MollysSister on October 21, 2011
    Me thinks Severus is a bit toooo practiced in giving enemas to be a novice at it. He has a platform in his bathroom? I am all suspicious! Naughty boy
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  • From MollysSister on October 21, 2011
    Oh my goodness what a lot of bravery it took for Hermione to admit such a personal problem to Snape of all people. Naturally he mocks her. Meeps!
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  • From janasi83 on October 18, 2011
    "If a time limit is not specified explicitly, staff should assume that the permission extends indefinitely."

    I can assume that Hermione won't figure out that since she's her own guardian, she has the right to rescind the permission for punishment at any moment? LOL Now why would she fail to come to this logical conclusion, I wonder? *snicker*

    BTW, personally I like Snape rough and mean. :) Suits him much more than the lovey-dovey persona.
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  • From alina290 on October 17, 2011
    Snape with a sense of humor. I guess Hermione was really enjoying his fingers in her back door. Thank you for this chapter. I am eagerly awaiting the next one and the next one and the next one.


    Liz
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  • From katiekrm on October 17, 2011
    I definitely like Snape better in this chapter. He wasn't nearly as insulting and didn't seem vengeful towards her like he seemed before. I don't know if you've read this fic, but the dramione fic A Licentious Proposition has an enema scene in the last chapter. Sadly, the fic is not completed.
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  • From Goddess81 on October 17, 2011
    Such an English word....Bottom.

    that last paragraph had me in fits of giggles "Yes Miss Granger lets stick it in your Bottom"

    I can't wait for the next chapter Xx
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  • From alina290 on October 17, 2011
    Nicely done. I've always loved Crookshanks, he is a very smart cat. If I get another cat, once I get my own place, I will most likely name him Crookshanks to honor my HP love. You left me hanging, wondering what Hermione found out about the staffs policies and procedures. I so look forward to the next chapter. You sure keep on making each chapter interesting. Thank you.

    Liz
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  • From Goddess81 on October 16, 2011
    Another lovely chapter, I was a little bit disappointed to find out Lucius wouldn't be involved with Hermione's detentions. (I love Lucius/Hermione/Severus fics) That being said I'm very excited and can't wait to find out who your third person is going to be, for some strange reason I have a feeling it's going to be Remus...If that's the case I look forward to see how you tie it in with his family. Xx
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  • From janasi83 on October 16, 2011
    Gah, a cliffie! Merde... I want to know what the book says - although it probably won't make much of a difference in Hermione's punishment LOL.

    I really like this fic so far, it's something completely different. To be honest, I would never have thought of enema used in a sexual way. Nice to know people are being creative and enjoying themselves though! ;)
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  • From divinenimbus on October 16, 2011
    Hmm...I'm a little worried at this point that Hermione should be running the other direction no matter what she's come to realize she finds pleasure in; find a dominant man who knows how to keep the humiliation/threat of humiliation within the confines that it should be kept. Despite the fact that this is Snape we're talking about, I find his behavior very worrisome so far. If he wants her cooperation I don't think he should be acting vindictive just for the sake of being vindictive. Granted, I will admit that I'm approaching this, looking at it from the viewpoint of someone that's used to healthy, caring D/s relationships being the norm, meaning that no matter what the 'play' activity is and how the sub is treated in that setting you can bet the Dom always has their sub's interests at heart and care about them quite a bit. I'm getting that this obviously (or likely) isn't going to be the case here so I guess I'll have to reconcile with that fact...unfortunately haha. All in all, I still can't wait for the next chapters and I want to see where this is going, but I'm a little hesitant now because it seems as if this is going to be a situation into which Hermione should not be allowing herself to be put.

    As far as your question about bringing back Sirius, my answer directly relates to my feelings about D/s relationships, I think. When you asked us what we thought, I got the impression that you wanted to bring him back to use him in some of the sexual scenes. I wouldn't be against this if, again, the D/s relationship were safe, sane, and consensual, however that does not seem to be the case so far. Because I can't really tell what the context would be, I have to reserve my judgment on this for the moment. I guess my answer is, my feeling about Sirius's involvement would be effected by Snape's behavior and competency as a Dominant.
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  • From katiekrm on October 16, 2011
    I was a little weary of the whole enema thing, but you actually made it hot. But I feel like Severus has gone overboard with the insults. It's gotten to the point where it's a total turnoff. I would also like him to develop a relationship with Hermione where he actually cares for and respects her. I really hope Lucius doesn't join in on the punishments.
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  • From Goddess81 on October 16, 2011
    I've been following this story for awhile and I must say I'm absolutely loving it.
    Is Lucius going to be a permanant fixture in this story? *I ask eagerly*
    Severus is a rather delicious enigma at the moment and I look forward to the next chapter with anticipation Xx
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