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Reviews for Business Meetings

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SirenSkywalker on January 03, 2012
    O.o wow. Dunno how she missed this one!!! *purrs* Vampire Draco as she has NEVER seen him. *glances at the clock and pulls a face* oh dear and now she must sleep. Afraid you're lovely tale has kept her up nearly all night. Honestly pure gold and wonder as always!!! She should know better than to start reading anything of yours late at night. She simply cannot stop until she's finished it!! Thanks so much for sharing!!!
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  • From ANON - Storm on December 10, 2011
    Wonderful story, you're right, I think that Harry and Draco's reactions were more important than the violence and we can imply what happened from the clues. Great job! Looking forward to your next story.
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  • From kitmistress on December 01, 2011
    T_T its over.... T_T but it was an amazing ending and i can only hope that you write more stories in the future, as i will read and follow them, your an amazing writer and i'm sad this story's over.
    Loved the ending though, amazing.
    Thank you for the story
    Kit
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  • From Sailorlorelei on December 01, 2011
    Great ending, I'm glad the ministry didn't get away with anything. I must say though, during the sex scene it is a bit hard to picture exactly how their bodies are positioned. It could go either way some times, with Harry either facing Draco or the two of them being back to chest. I would try to be just a bit more clear in that, it can be distracting at times. Also you think for such a rich vampire Draco would have a bloody bedroom. If not for himself at least now for Harry. I can't imagine sex being remotely comfortable on a hard marble floor, even with Harry on top of Malfoy. Regardless I enjoyed this story immensely. I can't wait for the next chapters of Parsimony and Sanctom Sanctorum. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Amiyom on November 30, 2011
    Fantastic story. Very nicely done.
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  • From SParker on November 30, 2011
    about the end...

    Well now, that's a good way to end it nicely. Though
    fo' sho' I thought you were doing a part 2, but it's
    all good. :-)

    I really liked how it was just the two of them as the focus
    of the story, without trying to add drama or other characters
    into the mix.

    You should do it more. Seriously.
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  • From bloodshound on November 30, 2011
    I was wrong AND right. har and draco aren't just good together... no, they're brillient. It's going to take the Ministry a LONG time to get over this and the lesson was pounded home with a mallet. do NOT mess with a Malfoy fang Wizard or his very powerful partner.
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on November 30, 2011
    It's almost like Christmas!

    A very nice one-shot and the last chapter of business meeting on one day!

    Thank you for sharing this story and I'm glad Ron and Hermione are not completely out of the picture for Harry.

    cheers
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  • From ANON - roo on November 30, 2011
    I must admit to having gone of your fic's for a while , Ashborn left me nonplussed, how ever , WOWSER this one rocked, your Harry and Draco have always been so deep in character, even for one of your shorter fics : ) thank you for this and I will happily read anything else you have to post for us all .
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  • From Sailorlorelei on November 28, 2011
    I love what you have done with this story, it is hard to make a good vampire fic and I must say you have done it. I'm glad Harry decided to stay this time, and I can't wait for the last chapter though I will be sad when it's over. Do you plan on writing an actual sex scene for them or not? Regardless, you have as usual portrayed both of their characters beautifully. Please keep up the fantastic work, I look forward to this and the next Sanctum Sanctorum.
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  • From ANON - JoleneG on November 28, 2011
    I've read your work for a long time; used to read it on livejournal and recently picked this story up here (not due to a change in your writing, but because I didn't have the time to dedicate to your amazingly lengthy and huge portfolio of work!) I love the short chapters and how business meetings can seems so intensely action packed.

    Quick question that is driving me NUTS: is Harry facing away from Draco during the frotting/drinking of blood, or facing toward him? He leans forward as if by gravity and looks towards Draco who is front of him, but then looks over his shoulder and Draco comes against his arse. Additionally, they kiss post-orgasm. Does Harry turn around after Draco appearing, and then turn back for a kiss/to be carried? Or is it something else? I have no idea why this is driving me so crazy trying to figure out, but it is. I'm a spatial visualization person I guess?

    Thanks for clearing up my rather odd confusion. >
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  • From AngelKayohisura on November 27, 2011
    Chapter 7:

    Squeals in happiness and dances around. And this is why you are my favorite fanfiction author. It's never too easy, but it's never forced. (The way the narrative plays out, that is). I loved Draco's assessment, I loved Harry's rebuttal even more. I loved the structure of the prose. That is, some statements were short and sharp, and that structure delivered all the emphasis and abruptness appropriate to the moment. I loved it. :D
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  • From AngelKayohisura on November 27, 2011
    Chapter 6:

    I have chills and my mouth is dry. Enough said.
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  • From AngelKayohisura on November 27, 2011
    Chapter Three:

    I think if I continue writing such detailed reviews I will just end up repeating myself. As such, a great chapter. I love the back and forth between Harry and Draco--the shifts of power are lovely.
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  • From AngelKayohisura on November 27, 2011
    Chapter Two:

    Still spectacular, although I my eye twitched a bit at certain parts only because it didn't make sense to me. ("when the choice is possibly watch a murder happen myself because the vampire facing me might not understand I
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