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Reviews for Business Meetings

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Storm on November 06, 2011
    Great job, can't wait to read more. I'm anxious to see what the ministry tries.
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  • From YamiBakura on November 06, 2011
    Chapter 8

    Gwee. That's all I have to say. It's all I can say about this one. Gwee! Also, as a writer I know how hard it is. But as a reader, I also froth at the mouth and twitch a lot when you cut something off RIGHT. WHERE. IT. GETS. GOOD. and then don't update for a week or two. XD Or longer, in my case and so many others.

    Also again, I'm glad to hear she's still around. It occurred to me after I left the last review that I worry about you guys, despite having a purely reader-fan to writer-gods/goddesses relationship with most of the people here. But it's been such a long relationship, spanning years now, and some of the best friends I've ever had started as the reader-fan to writer-gods/goddesses relationship, that I can't stay totally impersonal with everyone. Thrnbrooke (and you; if you ever stopped updating without explaining that you were moving to livejournal or off the net entirely, i'd go bananas with worry that something serious had happened) is one of those people who've been around for years, and I just worry, it's what I do.
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  • From SParker on November 06, 2011
    about #8...

    Oh, that was funny to me..Harry trying to calm down by any means
    possible. *Harry thinking to himself* Zen Harry, think ZEN dammit, go into
    that garden of peace! [..I have a wicked sense of humor..].

    ..and WOW, was that like a mating dance?
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  • From bloodshound on November 06, 2011
    woah, that's huge! An arrogant being like a v lord and a Malfoy besides, acknowledging Har as his equial?... man, that's MEGA. At any rate, Draco was right about a submissive Har. In this instance it comes across false indeed.
    If the ministry keeps this up they're really going to stab themselves in the hand... or what ever the wizarding equivalent is. Losing Har, even if he didn't join Draco out right, would seriously put them at a disadvantage. I imagine Har's name still has a lot of pull and he could quite easily become a rallying point. Sure, they could try and kill him but with Malfoy as his ally it wouldn't be smart.
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  • From ANON - Amiyom on November 04, 2011
    INTENSE. Love it. It's amazing how much characterization and plot you're fitting into this story with only one set. It reminds me of a play.
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on November 04, 2011
    Lol, seems like he did, hit Draco is he would try to taste him.

    Bloody basterd using unforgivables on Harry!
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  • From SParker on November 03, 2011
    oh, I just happened to have seen Yami Bakura's review..the last time
    Thrnbrooke posted was back in Jan/Feb. I think she came back recently
    some months back, but she comes here every once in a blue moon now.

    ..which is understandable, every now & then you have to get away from
    here or you might get caught in another fandom OR real life needs your
    attention at the moment.
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  • From SParker on November 03, 2011
    about #7...

    1. What is wrong him??? O_o You don't enter a house
    full of vampires, unless you're suicidal or one cocky
    bastard!

    2. I have to admit Harry gotz a pair of serious BIG
    hairy balls on him to actually backhand a vampire...and
    a leader at that! Draco has to get him back in some way.

    Other than that, this was good. :-)
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  • From YamiBakura on November 03, 2011
    Chapter 7

    You are NOT UPDATING THIS FAST ENOUGH. Nothing is being updated fast enough. You need to write faster, so I can read more! At any rate, I LOVED THIS, can't wait for the next installment. And maybe one day you'll get a proper review out of me again. XD

    On a side note, do you know when thrnbrooke disappeared? Has she been reviewing anything of yours? She's been around for years, and she always reviews EVERYTHING, but I haven't seen her around lately.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2011
    wow, i'm in need for sunshine too:D
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  • From ANON - Rabia on November 03, 2011
    So intense! I like how in this story you only know what happens in the vampire lair. You only know what happens outside of it if it is explained. Harry and Draco's relationship is very strained. I feel like there is a small thread of trust that could be broken with any wrong move from either party. Although I think Draco has a stronger hold on that thread. Love this story, keep up the great work!
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  • From bloodshound on November 03, 2011
    jumped the gun their a bit young master malfoy. Still, i think his control, with under his nose, was quite admirable.
    Even so, Har allowing him to see his weakness was a gift, on that i think malfoy almost threw away with that stunt. It'll take him a while to get that 'trust' back even with the ministry out to get them both. I wonder what it will take for Har to side with Malfoy... or at least turn on the ministry.
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  • From bloodshound on November 01, 2011
    *winces. Okay, who's out there deliberately vampy baiting... still, i can believe that's the kind of crap the ministry would pull if things weren't going there way.
    Well, your response to my last comment was fairly proven in this chappie. heh, draco doesn't want him to go back. Still, he'd lose a powerful ally if Har didn't go back.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 29, 2011
    smoking hot, love.just like you;)
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on October 29, 2011
    And Harry should have punched him, but still it's an entertaining notion.

    no
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