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Reviews for Pandora's Box - COMPLETE

By : Suziesu74
  • From CodyMThomas on October 30, 2011
    Dear gods above how did THEY get in? What are they even DOING there? Oh crap Poor Harry, I REALLY hope his Master forbids them access to Harry, at least until they calm down a bit. I'd hug you in sympathy my darling Harry, but I don't want your master to bite me. Ooooh the next chapter is gonna be gooooooooood. I so can't wait to see it.
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  • From CodyMThomas on October 30, 2011
    this story is very VERY hot and I love the dynamic between Harry, Raven, and Harry's Master, And I ADORE you for the little bit of sounding you threw in there. Love that kink, htere needs to be more of it.

    And yes, the Latin is wrong in the first line. It translates to: "The blood flows from the service of". a closer translation of what you want would be 'Sanguis fluit, a servo': "The blood flows from the servant". or even 'Sanguis fluit, a seruo': "The blood flows from the slave". There wasn't really a BDSM scene back in the days when Latin was a spoken language, so 'submissive' doesn't work. You have to substitute it with words they actually did have, and true slavery was still very prominent around that time.
    I have found that the easiest way to get google translate to work for people is to take the translation and then translate the words back into English. You might have to go back and forth a few times, but it does work.

    I love this story, I really do, but you keep hitting my BIGGEST pet peeve and it's very distracting for me. If I didn't love the rest of this story so much I would have just given up and moved on by now, but the rest is extremely awesome, so well, here's to hoping you'll take my advice and maybe correct it. I swear this isn't a flame, just some helpful advice that can serve you well on a huge fanfic misconception .

    THIS is the prostate: http://men.webmd.(remove me)com/picture-of-the-prostate
    It is NOT a bundle of nerves, It is NOT located in the anus or colon, it's
    not a nub, and it's not even remotely close to being small, in fact it's an organ that's usually
    about the size of a guys balls, if not bigger.

    It's also about as sensitive as a woman's clitoris, and if you are a woman who has ever had the misfortune of having it stimulated too hard or too much, or even landing wrong from a fall, you now know why I wince every time I read about a guy getting slammed repetitively in the prostate as hard as possible.

    I don't know WHO started the whole 'prostate is a nub or gland in the rectum' thing, but I want to find them and throttle them, because the idea has spread like wildfire.

    So that's my two cents, I'm off to read the next chapter now and I want to thank you for an awesome story thus far.
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  • From TempestBDA on October 30, 2011
    I bow to you and your absolute genius XD this story has made my day and i cant wait to see more. its well written has an excellent plot line that moves forward consistently without being overly teasing to the reader. I love Vivven and her new sister like roll to harry and i would love for something a bit more extreme to happen to charlie and ron they have angered me the self-righteous little stalkers humph anywhos great job on the story acnt wait to see more xoxo tempy
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  • From ANON - Marta on October 30, 2011
    I love the story so far and can't wait for the next chapter. You are a little devil, to end a chapter at such a moment... But I have to admit that it has its charm ;) Let your muses guide you ;)
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  • From ladylizzy on October 30, 2011
    What the fuck are THEY doing there?!?!
    OMG you are killing me!!! And i said They so I don't give spoilers to anyone who hasn't read chapter 7.

    Ok, I usually try to be patient for the next chapter of any WIP story, because it takes time for our muses to come to fruition, but not this time. You better come out with the next chapter soon!!
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  • From danniperson on October 29, 2011
    omgggggg!!!!!!!! update soon!!!!!!!!! must know what happens next!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - lksnarry on October 29, 2011
    I am in love with this story!!! I know and hope its Severus all at the same time. I can't wait to see how they deal with the unwanted Weasleys next time. Please don't make us wait too long!
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  • From cynaga on October 26, 2011
    [ch6] Wow - intense!
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  • From pittwitch on October 26, 2011
    Your writing is very powerful and the story is quite erotic, however, the scattered proofreading errors detract from that power. Please consider reviewing or a perhaps a quick beta-reader?

    Thank you for sharing.
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  • From Catchfire on October 25, 2011
    Please tell me your going to write more soon. I don't think I'm ever going to get your description of Snape out of my head ever. Or at least I hope not.
    Can't wait for more. Please please please please update soon with more.
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  • From Eloradanin on October 24, 2011
    Beautifully done, love it and can't wait for more
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  • From helga1967 on October 21, 2011
    Excellent! I love the intensity of the scene
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  • From ANON - djaddict on October 21, 2011
    This is really a great story! I am enjoying the flow of Harry's education into submission and there is just a wonderful feel to the domination.

    What I want to read in BDSM. Thank you for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Rosealynne on October 20, 2011
    Awesome job! U always have me biting my self to keep from moaning etc at ur discriptions lol i love ur stories keep up the awesome job cant wait for ur updates im as addicted to them as harry is to his yummy new Master..
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  • From someonenotme on October 19, 2011
    OHhhhhh yes. More please!!
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