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Reviews for To Become Whole Again

By : TibbytheWitchy
  • From hotflower901 on April 22, 2012
    it would make sense if Harry was in heat but isn't he already pregnant? I know the bunnies are biches.
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  • From hotflower901 on April 22, 2012
    there is nothing wrong in playing a little rough. As long as they are playing. Giggling at a growling Draoc
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  • From Jan on April 22, 2012
    Loving it, please update chapter 18 soon ^_^
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  • From LordMace on April 10, 2012
    Good story i do hope more is coming soon.
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  • From Leania07 on February 19, 2012
    Ah, it seemed to have fixed itself. I must admit though I'm a bit confused.
    [i]"What?" Harry murmured as Lucius fell apart, laughing hysterically.

    "oh I've known since your little mate started to bug me for information, no teenage creature asks unless they've... Found themselves in the family way, as they say,". Lucius said about on the verge o tears. Severus and Tom weren't too far from them themselves and the duo of shocked creatures found themselves staring at the door that has been softly slammed in their faces.

    "What... Just happened," Harry asked dazedly.

    "I'm not entirely sure," Draco said.[/i]

    I'm not entirely sure either, what did happen? I thought Harry and Draco was sitting in a chair (okay, Harry was sitting on Draco, who was sitting in a chair), then they're standing outside a door?? O.o Did I miss something, or did the site cut something out?? I don't know, but still another good chapter. Smexy Luna/Tari love hmm? Nicely done, I'm not a big reader of F/F but if you write them, I could begin to appreciate them. ^.^

    Leania
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  • From noirekitsune on February 18, 2012
    im really interested in theis story!
    the luna atari pairing was suprise but it somehow worked!
    and poor sev with his misscarriage!
    i cant wait for some payback to the 'light' side!
    *evil grin*
    hope there's more soon!

    -noirekitsune@yahoo.com
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  • From djaddict on February 15, 2012
    *Sniffles*

    Poor Severus. Not to mention Tom & Lucius. Meanie.

    *Still trying to coax the bunnies to the "light side" with carrots and ranch*

    Not THAT light side. I mean the side that doesn't do mean evil things to the sweet boys I love. lol

    Still think you are evil. Very evil.

    And what's with all the pussy? (Oops! Was that too crude?)

    *runs off laughing and dodging the thrown rotten tomatoes*


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  • From Leania07 on February 11, 2012
    Nah, I won't sue you, I'll just prod you with a stick to keep writing ;) Is that white background a site thing or your doing? Its not bad, but threw me off a moment when I read (no I haven't finished reading about the site updates yet, I know, Bad Leania!) Another good chapter so far, keep up the good work and I look forward to the next!

    Leania
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  • From hotflower901 on February 04, 2012
    Hopefully they are not to late to save Snapey. Bill and Ron. Gross. But they will get their's in the end. Beautiful of Harry and Draco. Tickled me because I know how some of my patients are alternating between horny and sick. LOL
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  • From lillyput93 on February 04, 2012
    P.S. Dj's reviews seriously amuse me :)
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  • From lillyput93 on February 04, 2012
    The story is good! I'm becoming a psycho and checking like twice a day to see if any of my stories that I'm reading have been updated and you don't know how happy it made me to see that you had!
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  • From djaddict on January 30, 2012
    Yes, but the words will not be nice!

    Pets Severus. Come here baby, I'll save you from the mean author!

    *dangles carrots*

    Here pretty bunnies! Do my bidding! LOL


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  • From CamoBuni on January 30, 2012
    :3
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  • From Leania07 on January 29, 2012
    Writer's block sucks; here's an 'Idea Stick' to poke your muse with ;) ----= Wonder what's going to happen to poor Sevy, no breaks for them. Don't think I mentioned it (and if I did, it really is worth mentioning again), but I almost died laughing when reading Draco's reaction to 'Tari/Luna love. Then to pass out learning Harry's preggers, poor boy is going to have nightmares and a headache. Hope that block gets demolished soon, meanwhile I'll await for the next chapter.

    Leania
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  • From cullengal101 on January 26, 2012
    hey
    love the story please keep updating
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