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Reviews for Scales, Wings and War

By : PaintTheLily
  • From Hydradragun on January 29, 2012
    please up date XD
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  • From Leania07 on January 25, 2012
    Oh interesting so far, now has Harry indeed reached his creature inheritance at 16 and is hiding it as of right now? Because nothing has been mentioned since the first chapter (or introduction), and I just wanted to clarify. Keep up the good job and I await the next chapter.

    Leania
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  • From Flare on January 24, 2012
    Oh this really sounds wonderful and I really love what you have up so far so please keep it up.
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  • From jujukitty on January 24, 2012
    yay, glad to see another chapter! so charlie's one of harry's mates huh? that ought to make things intersting, of course neither one knows it yet i'm assuming lol. and i really liked the plan for appearing to be random muggles, very nicely thought out and gave us time to get some of charlie's mindset. keep up the great work, i look forward to seeing more of this :)
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  • From HeartStar on December 14, 2011
    I love this sofar more please...
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  • From AlphazSlut on December 14, 2011
    I'm pretty interested so far. ;) It's pretty ballsy of you to adopted this when someone else already put out a fairly popular version of it (Which, I have to say I've read and reread it in its entirety at least a a dozen times.), but everyone is different and hopefully soon you'll be able to make us stop comparing the two. ;) I've read the reviews so far, and personally, I would just take out the first chapter that you adopted off of, not many people read the author notes. :/ I actually REALLY like your depiction of the Dursley's abuse, I feel like it's all too often over shadowed, even by J.K. Rowling herself, so props for that! I'm also very interested to see if he will be Dom or Sub and who he's mates will be. Another thing that's going to be tough to compete with. ;) I'm pretty much in love with Nasta and Max from ROTD. I don't mean to keep harping about another story in YOUR review, but you must understand that because it IS so popular it's going to be some TOUGH competition. :) I can't wait to read more!!
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  • From jujukitty on December 13, 2011
    another very nice chapter, i liked seeing petunia standing up to vernon. glad to see an update, keep up the good work :)
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  • From Flare on December 13, 2011
    This is very intresting is very intresting is ti going to have the same pairing as the other stoires DmHpBZ or are you planning sothing different somthign rare? Oh no matter what you are planning I am sure this story is going to be amazing so please keep it up and update it again as soon as you can becasue so far this story is really intresting and has me at the edge of my seat eager for more.
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  • From dgraymansorrowinvoked on December 13, 2011
    Again, I am loving this~ definitaly explains more. But if he had his 16th birthday in the first chapter, why is he now 17. And where did the changes he went through go? Still good either way~ sorry it's short, my computer died and I am cured fly on my iPod until it' s fixed...
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  • From Kitkatislovely95 on November 11, 2011
    Really good start! I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

    xoxo,
    kitkat
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  • From LordGeovanni on November 11, 2011
    Okay, this story has been done before. I hope you make a radical change to the story or else everyone will always compare it to the successful alternate story. Can I make a request? Make Harry the Dominate. I am tired of all these Submissive!Harrys and even "Rise of the Drackens" I am no longer able to read. Please keep your chin up and forge your own story and have fun with this.
    ~LordGeovanni *Kupo*
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  • From Cinder1013 on November 10, 2011
    Poor Harry! I hope he gets revenge.
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  • From jujukitty on November 10, 2011
    nice start to things, interested in seeing what direction you take this. keep up the good work :)
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  • From QuintiliVare on November 10, 2011
    To all the idiot reviewers so far, if you had read the Authors Note at the top, you would have seen "I intend to start the story from scratch - not to start it with this first chapter. However, feel free to read through if you want an idea of the concept that will be present later in the story." So really, don't complain that the first two chapters contradict each other -.-

    I can't believe your adopting this story as well, when there is such a popular version out! That takes some balls! I like that ^.^ I'll be sure and fallow this story. It will be very interesting to see how different people take the same basic idea.
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  • From dgraymansorrowinvoked on November 10, 2011
    ok, kinda confusing, was this chapter a flash back? if so u should do something to idicate it. also, harry's eyes are green, not brown^.^ other than that, loving the new chapter and i cant wait for the ext update~~
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