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Reviews for Time's Up

By : Gotbooks00
  • From CafeAuLait on December 25, 2011
    Four/Five: I thought Xander's recovering from a head wound happened much to quickly, even with magic. Poppy would have never let him leave the hospital after only an hour of being healing. He should have been in the hospital for a few days. It's a bit careless considering that, although things seemed fine at the moment, they could have deteriorated in a few hours. Xander should have still been exhausted on his birthday.

    There's something off with Hermione and Blaise's emotions. They aren't coming across well. I felt more genuine emotion from Draco (his hateful stares and comments) than from either of them.

    It's difficult for me to find the chapter five plausible because of the severity of Xander's head wound. That said, I do like that Hermione is willing to let Blaise be apart of their son's life because she knows it's what he needs.
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  • From CafeAuLait on December 25, 2011
    Three: I like the Draco is marrying someone very down to earth. I'm a dramione fan, but I can appreciate both characters in relationships with others.

    Blaise seemed fine, I could already tell he was Alex's father.

    Poor baby, curiosity almost killed the little Slytherin.
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  • From CafeAuLait on December 24, 2011
    One: You have a good eye for detail. I enjoyed your prose, I thought they flowed very well.

    I like that you didn't go with the standard Harry/Ginny pairing it gets boring after a while, and I really like Luna. I also love the twist of Ginny cheating on Harry with Pansy.

    I can't accept Fred's death either, so I'm glad his still alive.

    Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - ElizaJane on December 23, 2011
    ARE YOU ALIVE?
    But seriously. The story is fantastic.
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  • From hotflower901 on December 20, 2011
    well done
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  • From ANON - colao on December 19, 2011
    still lovin' it!
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  • From Jewels812 on December 19, 2011
    i am really enjoying this story...i love a good Blaise and Hermione story and this one is one of the best I have read...loved this chapter and can't wait to see how she handles the family
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  • From hotflower901 on December 19, 2011
    I am not sure I would want to see him if I was pissed at him.
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  • From Citten on December 17, 2011
    love the story so far i just found the story like today, well yesterday now, and i love it!!! :) i cant wait to see what will happen now! i bet it will be great! i will be watching and waiting for more! and i also do hope that you have lots planned for the story and that you will not end it soon or too quickly either! :) dont disapot us by not posting on monday or i might have to hurt you... give lots more, then even more, well you get the idea. :)
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  • From ANON - colao on December 16, 2011
    I'd like some Italian a night, too!
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  • From ANON - LizaJane on December 16, 2011
    So, I will admit, I am completely addicted. I love your writing, the only thing that I'm a little iffy on is how quickly Blaise and Hermione seem to be falling back into what I assume are old patterns. I feel as if Hermione should fight it some more, but hey, you're the writer. You know what you're doing. Please, continue.
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  • From OmenRequiem on December 14, 2011
    So, I have a slight disappointment that is completely your fault. I needed to be in bed an hour ago, and then I found your story and now I'm still awake from not being able to stop reading for the night. But, it's totally worth being tired at work, so it's all good. I can't wait to find out about Xander's magic and I'm anxiously waiting for more Hermione/Blaise relationship outside of their son.
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on December 14, 2011
    more please, i'm curious to know what the results will be.
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  • From ANON - colao on December 13, 2011
    as a romance junky, I love the Hermione/Blaise parts, but the rest is good too!
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  • From dracolover1 on December 13, 2011
    i really liked this chapter. cant wait for the next chapter, this is by far one of my favorite fan fics and my favorite blaise/hermione. keep up the good work =) i also love the way you write. you give a lot detail wothout spending a lot of time doing it i love that. cant wait for the next chapter =)
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