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By : withdemonwings
  • From Madamdragon on December 08, 2011
    I would love to know when you update. madamdragon19@yahoo.com

    I am loving this fic. Keep updating please.
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  • From aquarakaiba on December 08, 2011
    I am seriouly loving the story!!!!!!!!!! Awesome job (thumbs up) Also not sure if you were making fun, or paying homage to The Emperors New Groove, but I love the part with the different potions lol...favorite was the Dragon...Can't wait to read more :)
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  • From Madamdragon on December 08, 2011
    Aw I am beginning to like this. Obviously Harry and Severus are getting closer. Hope more is to come soon please.
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  • From Nadine21 on December 08, 2011
    Are you reposting this story or something, because I could swear I've read it already at least this far? I still love it and am looking forward to the next chapter, have fun writing!
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  • From ANON - InuGuardian1984*notloggedin* on December 07, 2011
    I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!! It's awesome!!!
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  • From ANON - Willow Wand on December 07, 2011
    I really enjoy reading this story and look forward to each chapter. I love the fact that I don't have to translate what you write into something that makes sense. There are really so few errors in spelling, punctuation and grammar. There are a few things that I would consider errors but they are so very minor that I barely notice. The biggest one, for me, is the quotation marks you use. I took a whole half page before I got over it and no longer noticed. Conversation is still very clearly marked and the fact that you choose to use a single (') instead of the double (") quotation marks is okay with me. (My HP books all have the standard (") instead of the single that you use.) Please, do keep this in mind: Publishers and editors are not infallible. They make mistakes, too. So don't always depend on their accuracy to maintain your accuracy. That, however, is not why I decided to post a review.

    I wanted to thank you for accurate use of the word 'relish'. I can't tell you how many stories I have read, in which a character 'relishes in' something. So I wanted to let you know how much I appreciate being able to enjoy an author who uses a thesaurus. So thank you for that. Geez, I bet you even know how to use a dictionary!

    On top of all that, you write a good story - so far anyway! This is the only thing of yours I have read, so I can only judge by what I've read so far. I would love to be added to a notification list if you have one. If you don't, I'd love it if you started one and added me to it. My email is: queen reader 51 @ yahoo dot com. Delete the spaces. Thanks.


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  • From bloodshound on December 07, 2011
    Poor har. this is so frustrating for him... and whats wrong with your punctuation? It reads easily to me, so i'd say what you've got is doing the job.
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  • From bloodshound on December 06, 2011
    poor Mio, she has a lot of apologizing to do. Heh, research party. *snickers. Moony is such a nerd. ^^
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  • From bloodravyn on December 05, 2011
    she deserves to feel awful!
    lol, i love how happy Remus is to do research
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  • From kitmistress on December 05, 2011
    AHHH and the truth comes out!!! ahhh so cute! i hope you explain why Lucius doesn't really know what happened! its great story and i cant wait to read more but thank you for updating so fast!
    and what were Draco and Lucius drugged with?

    please update again soon!

    Kit
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  • From bloodshound on December 05, 2011
    ba ba baaaaaan... just as dramatic as the first time round. ^^
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  • From kitmistress on December 04, 2011
    first Yeah Canada! WOOOOO...sorry, and second off, i loved it! Snape finally put it all together! so cute. please update again soon!

    Kit
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  • From bloodravyn on December 04, 2011
    eeeks!
    please keep the amazing updates coming!

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  • From bloodshound on December 03, 2011
    ut oh, busted Har. :P
    the scene with Corny always makes me lol... he's such a pompous, useless, waste of space little twat. Couldn't happen to a nicer git.
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  • From bloodshound on December 02, 2011
    I wonder if Har will get to know that Mio was hexed in this incarnation. it's the only thing that really irked me about the other one.
    At any rate, at least Mio has some hope now. Yay, the Marauders Map. Heh, and that little confession is going to come back to bite snape in the... er, snuggle into his arms and purr happily?
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