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Reviews for Bound

By : goldhorse
  • From ANON - Frosty on February 28, 2012
    The part where Snape burst into their room with rope, all surly and Snape-y made me laugh so much. Even with everything that happened after that, I'm still giggling. I definitely liked all the Dramione in this chapter, I love them together. Wonderful chapter as always!

    *nosewrinkle* I'm sure you'd do a good job of it, but I probably wouldn't read a Harry/Ginny fic.

    Wonderful chapter and I can't wait for the next! Update soon?

    ~Frosty
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  • From unitedgravedigger on February 27, 2012
    This story has become my number 1 dramione fanfic i started reading about when you were on ch 30 and since then i have pretty much re read the story every time a chapter is posted so that i can get the big picture and then i plan to re read it once the story is finished and most likely again after you make your corrections. I know that you had said like at ch 30 you were thinkin only like 10 or 15 more chapters but i hope you go atleast 5 or 10 past that because i think any less would be rushing the story there is still a lot that needs to be done and the story is already at 42. I cant wait to read the next chapter. I personally wouldnt read the harry/ginny but i think it could make for a good story anyways they have been set perfect for maybe their wedding night one shot or something like that. I did read the two other oneshots you wrote and those were really good. Im not one to normally post reviews but i think ill start trying to say something each time a chapter is posted :D. Oh and i completely did not expect the fates to make an appearance or the bondage part with hermione at the beginning but it just made the story better. As a fellow college student i wish you luck on your finals :).
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  • From TempestLore on February 26, 2012
    You know I love this story, but since the wedding it almost seems like I am reading an entirely different story and Dramione has taken a back seat. Your ideas are great, I am just not so sure about Melody,Alex,Celeste characters and I don't really like them, so I find myself skimming to get to some D&H parts and Harry and Ron finding out...even Pansy. It's your story and the first 10 chapters or so were really awesome, but this sudden change and all these new characters is a little jarring to myself as the reader. While I love Snape as well, he's in this too much IMO. I get what you are trying to do, but I miss the tight and clear plotting that you had in chapters 1-10..Starting to feel disjointed and random in places (and confusing) That being said, you are a great storyteller. Your ideas about bound magic, pure,phenom etc...totally AWESOME! That is what is called in the writing High Concept...and it is what sells books. Being able to come up with a high concept idea is NOT easy, so high fives and major kudos to you on that.My only advice would be to stick to the high concept and try not to meander off the beaten path too much in future fics. Introduce new characters not all at once..so the reader can werap their minds around them one at a time. Enjoyable story, good luck and good job :)
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  • From TempestLore on February 26, 2012
    This is such a deeply,gripping fic! I adore it. I have noticed a few errors but was engrossed in the story that I didn't take note of which chapter they were, but maybe it will help if I tell you. Draco made a joke and you meant to use the word "Posterity" but you instead typed prosperity. Maybe was chapter 6? Unsure...another time you used the word "steak" which is something you eat, instead of stake aka wooden stake used to kill vamps and another time you wrote Purpose instead of Propose as in to ask a person to marry you. I am only telling you because you asked...I am no grammar nazi and LOVE this story and wouldn't ever nitpick silly mistakes like that, but it seems you want to know so that you can fix them so I figured I'd tell you LOl LOVING this fic! You are a great storyteller and I am not even half way!
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  • From Kimbovet on February 25, 2012
    Well they're all finally bonded, so things should start speeding up in regards to getting rid of Moldy Shorts. I'm very interested to see what the blood circle has to do with things. Please, please, please write a one-shot for Harry/Ginny's night...maybe include how they kept Ron from hearing (or maybe he does & how they dealt with that). I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! - Kim
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  • From ANON - Phoenix.2000 on February 25, 2012
    I love this story!!! I love how you've written each character! And though
    this is a Dramione...I think Snape is my favorite, with all his 'layers' and his
    dynamic with Melody. Can't wait for more!! Keep up the excellent work
    and thank you for sharing your story with us!!
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  • From ANON - Alice on February 24, 2012
    Aaah that was amazing! They finally bonded and everything! And I swear you could create some awesome Harry and Draco Bromance soon haaha :-) Are you going to write a separate chapter for Harry and Ginny...snippet even? :L I think its only fair cause Sev, Melody, Alex and Celeste had one and then with Sev and Celeste, and ya know the whole story is Dramione...haaha
    ;-) Anyway, aside from my bad bargaining, until the next time, ta ta for now ^.^
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  • From ANON - Lea84 on February 24, 2012
    I have never reviewed a story on AFF, as I have never felt the need to. Until this one. I love this story! I saw it was being updated regularly and never really thought to read it until a few days ago. I am so happy I did. I love everything about this story; but my favorite part is Draco. I love how you made him see his errors and how he is doing his best to correct them. This is without a doubt my favorite Dramoine story on this website. It might even be my favorite, including the story's on FF.net. I was actually a little sad when I fought up to what you have written.
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  • From newtothis on February 24, 2012
    i think harry ginny and hermoine are being jerk by not telling ron, and they wounder why he does not trust them, they keep lieing to him, and keeping secerts, is ron going to get married to luna.



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  • From ANON - Nathoca Malfoy on February 24, 2012
    FANTASTIC!!!
    I knew they would find a way to remove the blood!
    Girl, you have so much fantastic ideas! I'm even liking vampires!!! And that was only after this fic!
    Thanks for the entretainment!
    Kisses.
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  • From ANON - Alice on February 22, 2012
    Gah! It actually felt like you hadn't updated in months (I can't even remember how long its been since the last update) :l An amazing chapter after such a wait! The fight was an awesome added bonus! :D Until the next time - which I hope doesn't stray too far from the very near future! - ta ta for now :-)

    Dam forgot to sign it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 22, 2012
    Gah! It actually felt like you hadn't updated in months (I can't even remember how long its been since the last update) :l An amazing chapter after such a wait! The fight was an awesome added bonus! :D Until the next time - which I hope doesn't stray too far from the very near future! - ta ta for now :-)
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  • From Kimbovet on February 22, 2012
    Woo hoo!!! I'm your 200th review! Glad they're at the ranch again & Harry, Ginny, Ron, & Luna get to go there too. Yay on bringing Luna into the story! Alo, great job in explaining Nargles & Wrackspurts in a believable manner. LOL! Typical guys...fighting tooth & claw & thenacting like nothing was ever wrong. KUTGW
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  • From newtothis on February 22, 2012
    first i dont understand how they blame ron for being distane, hermonie had more no try to talk to him, explain what going on, or to show him the she care about him, even as a friend,

    draco was a jack ass, mean hurt full, so if he cared about hermonie he would have a talk with ron, tell him he sorry for the way he treated him, and show how much he love hermoine, but draco still a jerk,

    Melody and Molly had a nice long screaming ma- erm, I mean chat and it ended up with Molly
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  • From ANON - Frosty on February 22, 2012
    I hope you feel better! Strep throat is evil.

    I loved the explanation for Luna's craziness. It really seems to fit, almost like something that JK just left out of the books rather than something you've made up. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon?

    ~Frosty
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