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By : goldhorse
  • From newtothis on April 05, 2012
    there kind of beeing hard on ron, i mean he worreid about harry disapearing, that normal but they keep lieing, he does trust draco, for good reason becouse he does not know half of what going on, and he does notwant hermoine hurt and he the bad guy. it almost seem like they stop being friend with ron, becosue all they do is lie to him,and hurt him


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  • From ANON - BOUND LOVER on April 05, 2012
    Amazing chapter!! I love the twist you had going on in this chapter, very unexpected!! Hope to see a new update soon! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Frosty on April 04, 2012
    Great chapter! Poor Melody. I feel bad for her, I really do, but all I could think of when she said she was pregnant was "she's going to be a complete nightmare once she gets bigger and more hormonal". Seriously, I feel like someone may die from her temper... Or maybe kids will mellow her out, I'm not sure... I loved that Draco and Hermione were there for her when she was freaking out and it was sweet that Draco went with her to tell Snape. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon?

    ~Frosty
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  • From ANON - Alice on April 04, 2012
    Awh! Melody's pregnant too! This is awesome! I'm gld yohr hourse is better...bitchy? I think we'd get along well lol. This chapter was actually pretty epic :D Until the next time, ta ta for now (:
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  • From Kimbovet on April 04, 2012
    Well the babies definitely make things more complicated but in the end they will probably be a good thing. On to the ministry...KUTGW
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  • From ANON - BoundLOVER on March 31, 2012
    I'm really happy you updated your story! But, in my honest opinion this chapter feels a bit rushed. To me it seems as though you got a little lazy with your updating and you sped through writing the chapter. It feels like a filler chapter just to get it out of the way. I have been following your story for a while, and when I compare these 2-3 updates to your previous chapters in the beginning it feels as though these newly updated chapters are a bit weak. I'm not flaming you, I will continue to read this story regardless because I think that the plot line is absolutely amazing and everything in this story is absolutely wonderful and mind blowing. I just wanted to give you my honest opinion, because as a fellow writer I know that these kinds of reviews help sometimes. Thanks for keeping the updates coming and I look forward to another one soon!
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  • From ANON - Grace on March 31, 2012
    LOVE!LOVE!LOVE! I've been reading some stories on fanfiction and Its so nice to have yours where the grammer is correct and the words aren't mixed up. I mean people there is a difference between sorted and sordid and they're and there. Anywhoo. Please more kink learned from Sev!!!!! Oh and sorry about your horse. I'm and animal person and majoring in prevet and psych so I know how emotionally and mentally draining that can be. Hope everything works out good and everyone is healthy.
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  • From ANON - Alice on March 31, 2012
    I like your cannon parts :D You didn't post before I left....and then I fell asleep when I got back XD double fail. This chapter was really awesome, keep up with your awesome work and i hope your horse is fine now, update soon? Ta ta for now :)
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  • From Hardygirl133 on March 30, 2012
    Oh No!!! Your poor horse! ='( My horses are my babies and I know how it feels. Fingers & toes crossed for her =)
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  • From Kimbovet on March 30, 2012
    Another great chapter! Absolutely loved the suspension scene! Can't wait to see what you do to Umbridge in this story. Hope your horse gets better. - Kim
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  • From ANON - Frosty on March 30, 2012
    *fingers crossed* As terrifying as I find them (they're so BIG), I hope your horse is okay! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, it's not a reflection of the direction of the story but the amount of work I've been having to do. I never, ever want to write another essay again. Ever. I loved this chapter! I particularly enjoy how you can tell the war is taking it's toll on everyone. A lot of people seem to gloss over how traumatising everything is and have them all living happily as if nothing bad were happening. I like that you can tell your characters are damaged by everything, but they're still fighting to make everything good again... if that makes any sense. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon?

    ~Frosty
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  • From Darknightmare on March 30, 2012
    Hello,

    I really appreciate your story "Bound"!
    However, I would like to correct you on an error that often comes back when you use french in story:
    -> "Mon cher" is used when you refer to a male
    -> "Ma ch
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  • From ANON - Ah...Draco on March 30, 2012
    Here we go again, I'm in the same spot as I always am at the end of your updates - nervous, exhilarated, breathless and wanting more but at the same time not wanting your story to end. I love the way you tell your own story while always coming back to the events we know from the books. It takes a familiar tale and allows us to enjoy it in a new way, and for the Draco fans like me it's a delight to see him as a good guy not just working with JK's heroes but becoming one of them. Love it, thanks so much for writing this story and for sticking with it!!
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  • From sarahdaye9 on March 29, 2012
    Ha! Loved the banter!
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  • From ANON - Alice on March 29, 2012
    I'm going on a trip tomorrow, were leaving early and coming back late. I was wondering, could you update within the next 9 hours? I will repay you with cyber hugs and reviews? :D (my phone blocks this site because I won't pay to prove I'm over 18 -_-)
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