Reviews for AdaletBy : angeljin |
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Ik really like this story, It is so much drama. Can you add my mail, please? It is xd31312@gmail.com
Love this so far!
Please update chapter 13 soon.
Read a few more chapters and yea...this is a really good idea but the writing is still all over the place. I still may still with it but I am not sure. I think with a bit more practice you could be an amazing writer. You have a lot of talent when it comes to world building.
The idea behind this is good but the writing is all over the place. So many things happening at once. It seems like your ideas are fighting each other and you are just excited to get everything down. I think that this could actually turn out to be an amazing story if you had a few proof readers and allowed yourself time to write. Overall a wonderful idea but hard to read.
i just found this story and was hooked. i think i saw at the end of one of the chapters that if i put my email i will get updates so here it is windingcircle4@yahoo.com. i love this story and hope it gets updated soon.
I really like this story. Please write more soon.
I really like your story and what you've done with the characters. Could you add me to your email list for when you update the story. My email is bostonirish413@aol.com. I look forward to your update.
Thanks,
Krystin
Hope nothing bad happens during the graduation ceremony, please update chapter 12 soon, and can't wait to read more!
Please update chapter 12 soon😁
i found this last night and i have to say that i really enjoy this story.
to be honest at first this story confused me but when you figure you it out you just cant stop reading and dont want it to end. i spend 3 hours reading all chapters and was lie what no more :(.... so please update again soon becouse i cant wait to read more of this delightful gem of a story.
wow it's been a long time in between updae !!!! Glad your ok and do hope the updates come faster....this is so good !!!!!!! need to see how you kill off the traders !!!!!!!!!!
Wose child is Ginny? It does not say. Arthur?
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