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Reviews for All Desire in a Day

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From bloodshound on December 20, 2011
    It's a shame he's re thinking his relationship over a what might have been. He said it himself... well thought it anyway. This one is different from his har. I wonder who took out Malfoy sr. After all, even changed as he is, i don't think Har would deliberately kill. I do agree with draco though. This just keeps getting worse.
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  • From Sailorlorelei on December 15, 2011
    Very different? I am curious to say the least. Honestly I couldn't help but simply sigh throughout this whole chapter, Malfoy is a git but at least Draco is regretting this foolish journey. One can only hope that he will learn to appreciate his Harry more after this. I also had to laugh at Harry speaking with Blaise I am so prepared for something to happen in that situation that it is hardly funny. Good chapter as usual, you did a good job of portraying Draco's frustration in this one more than the others I would say. I look forward to the next chapter, keep up the great work.

    ~Fullmoon
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  • From bloodshound on December 14, 2011
    to date all I can say is, so much for the hats 'you'd do well in Slyth' because doing well he is certainly not! I'm not looking forward to the tri wiz or umbitch's inquisition. It'll be so much harder for har in slyth, so much more pressure.
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on December 14, 2011
    I almost feel sorry for young Malfoy. It seems like every which way he turns and says makes the situation between him and Y. Harry all the more worse. And it seems like it may just get alot worse for Malfoy, and especially Y. Harry. And Y. Harry having to use ward spells around his bed that was really sad I never really thought about it that way for Y. Harry when he was in Gryfindor.
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on December 14, 2011
    Still enjoying this story big time!

    It's really fun to see a mature Draco react to the very petty and snotty Malfoy.

    Cheers
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  • From undeademopixi on December 14, 2011
    I think this is wonderful. I hate stories where Harry ends up in Slytherin, and he's suddenly all "wave your green and silver banners" This is the most realistic portrayal of Harry in Slytherin I have ever read! Can't wait for more :)
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  • From ANON - CJB on December 11, 2011
    Great story I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on December 10, 2011
    I guess young Malfoy is even more obsessed with Harry than Draco was in the past. Now he's like a creepy little stalker XD!
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  • From Sailorlorelei on December 10, 2011
    Even more furious? Poor Draco can hardly stand Malfoy and whats going on as it is. Seeing how this Harry is still friends with Ron and Hermione maybe he will get a beak and not have to see HarryxBlaise. More stupid Draco, it's funny how he finds this version of himself to be stupider, and obnoxious, when sometimes their thoughts coincide. He really was a little brat and it's a testament to how far he's grown that he can see that. You have been giving me a pseudo Christmas these past few days, new updates in something everyday is too good, you're going to spoil me. Out of all the upcoming chapters I am very curious as to how the sixth will turn out, especially with the whole sectumsempra business. Good chapter, this Draco is so hilarious in his interactions with Malfoy. I can't wait for a new update. Keep up the good work.

    ~Fullmoom
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  • From ChaosLady on December 10, 2011
    This new Harry is disturbing. After he defeats Voldemort, he could go either way. Be an Auror or the next Dark Lord... Great update!
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on December 10, 2011
    Hi there!

    This fic keeps getting better, I really start to like the way this fic enables you to write trough the years without having to explain all the details.

    And so nice that he still got the sword of griffindor from the had instead of some slytherin artifact.

    Next to that I really like the combination of mature-Draco and not-likable-snotty-git-Malfoy
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  • From SParker on December 10, 2011
    about #3...

    Sooo...what it all boils down to is this, no matter
    what time period, alt. universe or what-not, Draco will
    always be drawn to Harry & strive to get his attention.
    It's like they are yin and yang, don't you think?

    But, help me with something...is this like a 'what-if' for
    Draco or did he change things when he did that spell?
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  • From bloodshound on December 10, 2011
    What an interesting take. I've seen lots were a Har Slyth = dark or at least extremely manipulative Har. It's the first time I've seen him as a Lion in the Snake pit. I'm glad Har was in Gryff, at least he had quiddiach as an escape. If Malfoy the boy had been more mature they might have been friends, alas... *shrugs.
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  • From SParker on December 09, 2011
    about #2...

    That was interesting or I should say...it's interesting how you have
    the future Draco participating by NOT participating, he's only an
    observer. It feels like everything's in third person or 'fourth' person.

    ...annnd it's good to Harry hasn't lost that fighting spirit.
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on December 08, 2011
    Well maybe not a cliff but a hill for sure. But hillhanger has a different ring to it.

    I was just really curious what was going to happen, still am. :)
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