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Reviews for All Desire in a Day

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on March 09, 2012
    Perfect! I absolutelly loved this fic! Loved it! So dark and anxious, a real slap in the face with reality. I think this story is very applicable to real life and its lessons. Well done!
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  • From Jien on February 05, 2012
    Loved it. would be nice if it had a sequel :>
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  • From makochan0217 on January 17, 2012
    Draco is an idiot, but at least I think he's learned his lesson. He's lucky that Harry wasn't angrier than he was, and he deserved a lot more. I think he knows it too. It was kinda sad to see the way that Harry sort of turned in on himself as he became older in the house of the snake. Snape was just as much of an idiot as Draco, and that dumb blond should have known that what he had was a great gift and to not question it. Oh well. At least he's wiser now, yes? Wonderful as always, and I look forward to your next fic that you finish. *whisper Parsimony, yes*
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  • From bloodshound on January 14, 2012
    Har made me lol. Next time you want to know something... ASK ME. The sitch kind of reminded me of that evil clown from the simpsons writing hate letters to bart with his own blood because it's more dramatic... it was just that sort of sillyness level.
    The difference being, this one nearly got draco dead for answers har could have easily given him. at least he'll treasure har now. They're so much better together than a part... what other partner could kick a dark rituals arse. ^^
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  • From Leania07 on January 14, 2012
    Wonderful story and perhaps it was a good thing Draco did this ritual; I'm sure he's more apt to think before he speaks now. As many have said (different stories and such) knowledge is power. Thank you for the thought you put into this, it was quite enjoyable.

    Leania
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2012
    no, sexuality is irelevant when you truly despise someone.
    I've had man, drop dead gorgeous acording to all, but in my eyes they were piles of shit.
    It is like you've put it in your end, cemented feelings are cemented they can't be shaken with 'hey we're both gay/straight'.
    It's a very unusual, but very well thought, written fic.
    I enjoyed reading it.
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  • From SParker on January 14, 2012
    I meant cliffhanger, not end...
    ***************************************
    about the end...

    Well, I'm glad Draco is back, didn't die AND Harry took
    him to task for his stupidity in an offhanded way...and
    yes a strong & stubborn Harry is good for beating rituals
    back...keep that in mind.

    All in all, this was all good & I hope Draco truly learned
    something, no matter what he says.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2012
    I really like your story.It's real. Emotions don't shift. Ppl often think they can disregared their family, the way they were brought up and country they live in but they can't. What shapes you up&surounds you turns you into the person you are.
    So of course Harry would coldly despise Draco if not ignoring him, and this is something Draco needs to be aware of.
    Your bad and tragic life leaves nightmares, fears and bitterly learned lessons that don't go away with love&whatnots.
    They tend to stick to you because in realitiy it is dirt from other ppl whose dishonorable actions have markes your life.

    So , I like this story very much.
    I just don't know how will you 'write' feelings into Harry( when I despise someone there is no aspect of his sexuality that I'm not blind to, and mine cease to exist when around him) because I am more interested in that 'scenario' then in the one where he returns to the 'original universe' where Harry and Blaise aren't hooked up.
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  • From ANON - O-chan on January 13, 2012
    Ah geeze, this story is so engrossing! At the end of chapter 8 I was feeling so numb and anxious, just waiting for Draco
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  • From moodysavage on January 12, 2012
    Poor Draco!!! That has to be so hard watching Harry with someone else. And all those stupid decisions. I wonder if when this is over whether Draco will be able to get past all these added memories. If I was him I would pull all those memories out!
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  • From Lunarsempai on January 11, 2012
    You used the argument I had for Harry. he did the same thing when we first met him. Discounting the entire house because it wasn't where he wanted to go and did really bother to try. I like this chapter though I was pretty sad when Malfoy didn't die. Unless you have something else planned.
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on January 11, 2012
    Uh it's like a neverending nightmare getting worse by the vision I really feeling sorry for Draco. This is SO DEFINITELY NOT what he had in mind seeing when he started all of this...and I shudder to think of what the consequences might be for seeing this alternate scenario. But I can't think it can get any more worse for Draco than seeing his beloved in the arms of another (Blaise), and totally despised by said beloved. It almost makes me sick to my stomach in a good/bad way kinda like reading a Draco-trainwreck you don't want to read it but you just can't help BUT to keep reading to find out how it all ends.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 11, 2012
    about #8..

    Huh???? What kind of bloody ending was that ?!? O_o
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  • From bloodshound on January 11, 2012
    this is definately a case of careful what you ask for. I'm glad AU Har had someone to fall back on. Blaise didn't get to play much of a roll in the canon verse. i hope Draco values the Har of his Home universe all the more cause he could well have been someone elses.
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  • From Leania07 on January 11, 2012
    Interesting so far; I wonder when this vision is over how much Draco will have changed. Will he confess to Harry about what he did and how much time has passed between the beginning and the end of the ritual?

    Leania
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