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By : sordidhumors
  • From ANON - Sera21 on January 12, 2012
    u know whats just as great as a buffalo? The Western lowland gorilla whose scientific name is gorilla gorilla gorilla. XD I kid u not.
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  • From ladysinistra on January 12, 2012
    This may very well be the single greatest piece of Harry Potter fanfiction I've ever read. Your writing is simply sublime. The characters, even the most minor of them, have a depth to them you rarely find in any work. I eagerly await the next chapter, and each one that follows.

    Lady Sinister
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  • From Leania07 on January 11, 2012
    Wonderfully written, can't wait for more. Intense fight scene, well thought out and done.

    Leania
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  • From ANON - serpentlady on January 07, 2012
    Just for the scene in the chapter called "Ingulgence", I went out and bought a pack of Djarum Blacks. They are very interesting, but too expensive to make a big impact on my smoking preferences: $12.83 for a pack of 10! The first was smoked in your honour!
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  • From ANON - Hales on December 18, 2011
    Please PLEASE, correct your disclaimer so this wonderful story won't be deleted!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2011
    ---continuation of review as keeps getting cut off----

    I like that you are using so many languages. I did cringe a bit at the Ramstein reference but then I spent many choice moments of my teen years in South Africa with friends enthusiastically singing along to the music not realizing how very very bad they sounded to the only person in the room/car who understood German(me). I like taht you made them go see some Metal though. Its not my genre in music but at least it is not Adele --___--. You get a home made space cookie for that ;P
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on December 18, 2011
    ah, I'm surprised Draco managed to give such a decent blow job although he was that high, and, come to think of it, apparate both of them without ending up in the ocean say, or in free fall somewhere...as somebody who is living in a country where you can smoke most things legally( Netherlands) I would love to send you some stuff. However teh American customs are pretty stringent and as I'm not travelling there abouts any time soon I gotta disapoint you :P Thought the first 'I love you' was very well placed and very Harry and so much better then what many authors do and just throw in teh "I've always loved you" thing where theres porn porn porn OMG I love you * instant relationship*. Like sex= love. But then I think it may be that many of those authors are either 16 year olds or soccer moms >_
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  • From Hollibell on December 15, 2011
    lol. I almost forgot to review. I was reading the forum.

    OOOKaaay. *sighs* It wasn't as bad as I was expecting. Which I guess is saying something, since Draco freaked out. They're still together, so that's good. I wasn't looking forward to them not speaking to each other and being so far apart. I am really looking forward to later chapters after reading your replies to me! =) It sounds like you will be writing my most perfect combination of sex/plot/action ever! I can handle dark and angst, as long as Harry and Draco survive with their relationship intact. Erm, I'm embarrassed to say the I crave that HEA, so if that's not a possiblity, warn me now! I don't remember there being a major character death warning, so I am assuming I'm safe? I feel so bad for Draco. He's going to be all alone in Griffindor. I actually have to say though that I'm kind of glad you didn't put him there so he and Harry could shag like bunnies whenever they wanted. I'm not going to say that I don't like that cliche, because I do, its just nice to see someone not using it for a change. ;)
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  • From Hollibell on December 14, 2011
    Oi. And still he hasn't told him. I've a feeling this next chapter is going to he rough. No way will Ron and hermione not say anything about harry not going back. I keep hoping harry will change his mind or draco will decide to not go back too or something, anything so these two are not separated. I think the thing I love the most is that neither is really submissive, they are so very equal. I just love that.
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on December 14, 2011
    What?? Tequila with no lemon?? :D !! Its a sacrilage I say!!
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  • From Hollibell on December 14, 2011
    HEE! I remembered something I wanted to comment on like a bajillion chapters ago (ok, maybe exaggerated). I LOVE the fact that you counted Harry's encounter with Heather as a loss of virginity. I can't tell you how many times I have heard a girl say, "I'm still a virgin. I just give blow jobs." Everytime I hear it I'm like, WTF, are you serious? There's a reason its called oral SEX you moron! Anyway, I loved the grocery shopping they did. Draco sounded so cute. I would have loved to have been that girl and seen those two being all sweet and flirty while shopping. How sweet! And I love it every time Harry puts an Order member in their place. Although I love Tonks and always pictured her as one to help with the sneaking out, lol. And Hermione's prudish ass really needs to get laid. If I were Draco, I would fuck with her sensibilities hard!
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  • From heartshappedsunglasses on December 14, 2011
    ur on adultfanfiction now!!!! I now have one more site to search for updates ^_^
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  • From Hollibell on December 14, 2011
    Good God. *fans self* That was some high quality, first rate Pulitzer prize winning porn right there. In fact, I don't even like calling it porn, it was that well done.

    The wedding was so good! I wish they could have danced. That Phillipe is a major douce. I look forward to his slow and painful death. I adore these boys! They are so good together. I know more is posted, but I think it will have to wait until tomorrow. ;) I'm beat.
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  • From ANON - Chelsea on December 09, 2011
    Well. I have read plenty of Drarry in my lifetime and some have been the greatest Drarry of all time - just perfect.
    Yours goes on that list. Keep on writing darlin'.
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  • From Hollibell on December 09, 2011
    That was a lot of food. I think I gained 10 pounds just reading that. I am soooo angsting over what is going to happen when Draco finds out Harry's not going back. I keep hoping he's going to change his mind. I loved the dates! All the sweet fluffiness. It was all so good! Although, I may have gotten a cavity. Next is when it all goes to shit, huh?
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