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Reviews for Coercive Persuasion; Brainwashed

By : MightyGryffindor
  • From Calmzone1 on December 18, 2017

    Brilliant job ripping apart the manipulative life he led and trying to help Harry see the truth. I wonder if Harry would ever recommend that Hermione or even Ron undergo what he is going through. After all, they were both horribly brainwashed, as was Ginny.


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  • From ANON - starr on July 11, 2015
    OMG this is so good tp bad you stopped writing :(:(:(:(
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  • From ChaosLady on December 23, 2011
    You're right the Harry Potter story is a lot darker than it seems on the surface.
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  • From newtothis on December 23, 2011
    i like this story till you turn ron bad, i alwasy thought it would be better to have ron on harry side, if he belive the wrong think he only 16 so he learn that from his parents, so he have to go agaist them maybe even the girl he love hermoine.

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  • From Christopher11 on December 22, 2011
    The only 'brainwashing' I am seeing thus far is the brainwashing that the Malfoy's and that 'mind healer', more like professional brainwasher, are trying to do to Harry, to be blunt.

    I gave the story a reasonable chance, but to be blunt.... it's horrible. It's a bunch of manipulated viewpoint tripe.

    Had to give an honest review here.
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  • From ChaosLady on December 21, 2011
    Sounds like Albus screwed Sirius over on purpose! Which should really piss Harry off. He loved Sirius. Even if he doesn't get mad over Dumbledore leaving him with his muggle relatives AFTER he had been warned about how bad they were. Especially given what muggles did to his siter Ariana!
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  • From jujukitty on December 20, 2011
    poor harry, just dump his whole reality on end why don't you lol keep up the good work :)
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  • From hotflower901 on December 20, 2011
    I still think that the politicans don't like Harry disagreeing with them. So they kidnap him, drug him and brainwash him to what they believe.
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  • From jujukitty on December 19, 2011
    well looks like harry's at least becoming receptive to new information. and i'm almost afraid to see what ron and mione wind up doing.

    as for the disclaimer thing, the only thing i can think would be wrong with it is (and i got this warning on all mine i posted at first) that it disclaims the characters and not the actual fandom. the problem with that being that Harry Potter is the name of the fandom as well as the character, but apparently the mods are a tad anal about things
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  • From ChaosLady on December 19, 2011
    Yay! We are finally getting somewhere! Great update!
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  • From hotflower901 on December 16, 2011
    I realize this is AU and psych is not my speciality. I would think that Harry would need to interact with someone that he trust. Having Draco being one of his guards just seems like a set up. Unless of course it is
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  • From ChaosLady on December 15, 2011
    Harry seems to have a lot of irrational anger...
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  • From SilentDreamer on December 11, 2011
    Uhhhh I am very very intrigued!!! MORE PLEASE!! :)
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  • From ChaosLady on December 11, 2011
    Interesting. I would say more but my brain is mush.
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