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Reviews for Shades of Grey

By : SpeedyTomato
  • From ANON - Geo on April 06, 2013
    Fantastic Story. Very well written and great slow pacing! Thank you very much for your work on this piece!
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  • From ANON - curious123 on April 04, 2013
    interesting fic so far. i am enjoying the development of the relationships.
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  • From LadyHemlock27 on April 03, 2013
    Love this story. Its interesting and the characters are believable. Kaliya is an awesome snake too.
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  • From DB1 on March 25, 2013
    @16 poor severus!! Liking the story very much. Look forward to more!! Update soon.

    DB
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on March 24, 2013
    Can't blame Severus for being pissed. Great update.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on March 24, 2013
    Now Severus knows. This is going to drive him nuts! Really great chapter!
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  • From LadyLaran on March 14, 2013
    I have to admit, I love the snake!!!
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  • From jujukitty on March 04, 2013
    yay for more! and i love the snake's view on things, and he's given them a hint about nagini being a horcrux if they can figure it out. and hte guys are having to put their faith in harry, but i think he's realizing he's better off with them, at least for the moment. keep up the great work :D
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on March 02, 2013
    Except for the scene with the feather, which is reminscent of Harry's first charms class where Seamus' feather blows up, that was kinda boring. Although I can see how you are going to make it up to us by showing us why Voldemort summoned both Severus and Lucius by including scenes with Voldemort "interrogating" his Deatheaters *hint* *wink* *hint*
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  • From jujukitty on February 27, 2013
    yay for more! i like the snake and his interactions with everybody lol. and snape and harry finally got their alone time to hash things out and it sounds like they've got a good foundation going. i'm really looking foward to seeing how this develops. keep up the good work :)
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  • From Leania07 on February 09, 2013
    Not only did I get my computer to work for a bit, but I found this story again; my evening is going good! I love love love the cobra! Nothing like an unusual companion who does harmless things to startle you! The Grey Wand, that was grand! I always though Harry was quite powerful, but he seemed a bit too neutral to work with a phoenix core wand. Of course going with that line of though, Voldie wouldn't be compatible either and so wouldn't have the 'brother wand'. *shrug* I really enjoy this story, and you are one of the people who got me writing my own fanfic; I never thought I would. Perhaps someday I'll finish it and post it but until then I'll keep enjoying this story. I can't wait for more!! Hopefully my computer keeps working (stupid laptop...).

    Leania
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  • From ANON - BAFan on February 08, 2013
    Ch. 13 - I think AFF hates my Kindle; I never know if it will accept my reviews or not. Sigh...let's try again.

    I'm really liking this story, though I have trouble getting through some of your long paragraphs. I'm glad that Harry is slowly beginning to trust Severus and Lucius, and that they are finally seeing the real Harry rather than the persona imposed by their prejudices.

    Kaliya is a much better name than Clarence, but a ten-foot cobra isn't exactly an inconspicuous familiar, lol.

    One thing: In this chapter Harry says something about not being chuffed about not being eaten by Hagrid's pets this year, and in a previous chapter (9? 10?) he said something similar about not studying Divination. I think maybe you are confused about the meaning of "chuffed." It means to be happy or delighted, so actually Harry *would* be chuffed about both these things. Unless he was being sarcastic, I guess, in which case please disregard the above. :-)

    In any case, I'm eagerly waiting for the next update.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on February 08, 2013
    Not as interesting as other chapters but informative.
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  • From dark-huntressmoony on February 07, 2013
    yay a new chapter! i have been waiting for this one, though i am waiting more so for the heavy deliciousness that comes from having the two elder wizards around and poor innocent young Harry. though i do like the slow approach to it, its very refreshing.
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  • From devilsmomma on February 01, 2013
    great chapter I love when Harry gets unusual pets. keep up the good work
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