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Reviews for Shades of Grey

By : SpeedyTomato
  • From ANON - ChaosLady on November 12, 2012
    Marvelous!
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on November 11, 2012
    so delores' dementors found harry, good thing luc was there to get them out, even if it was ahead of schedule. and i feel so bad for luc, it's obvious he's upset about losing his wife and son the way he is, and now not even getting to tell them a real goodbye. i did like harry's little learning session about the wards, hopefully it's a first step in him realizing all the stuff he's been missing out on beccause of the way dumbles has been controlling things and realizing that sev and luc really do have a lot they can teach him. keep up the great work :D
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on October 08, 2012
    ohhh, love it! harry's finally willing to listen at least a little and luc is learning that harry's smarter than he first believed, now maybe things will start smoothing out between them all. keep up the great work!
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  • From bloodshound on October 06, 2012
    well, that's hopeful. the start of an alliance at least and with all the crap that's been hurled at har over his short life its nice that someone will finally watch his back, even if self interest is still one of the main motivators. Ron and mio did their best, but they're just kids. They don't have the knowledge to handle this or the experience. Sev and luc do.
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  • From ChaosLady on October 06, 2012
    The newest chapter is good. Could you have Lucius and Harry conspire together to play a prank on Severus, to break the monotony?
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  • From ANON - Musissimos on October 06, 2012
    I really like the style that you've written this fanfic in - whilst it doesn't feel quite as personal as most fanfics, it's a lot closer to how the books themselves are written and it flows really nicely. Sincerely looking forward to every chapter you publish from here on out!
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  • From ChaosLady on October 06, 2012
    I haven't read this in awhile, nice for you to get back in the swing of things.Or maybe it's me...
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  • From LadyFreak on September 07, 2012
    absolutely loving this story. I was wary at first as i hate the 'bad severus' stories. but this is coming out fantastically. Please update soon :)
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  • From bloodshound on September 07, 2012
    yay update! ^^

    Poor Har, this chappie was all about him learning just how far up sewage creek in his hole riddled boat he is, with dumbles standing on the bank, using a long pole to shove him towards that waterfall and smack the ores out of his hands when he manages to improvise one.

    He's lucky that sev and luc are willing to come in from the other shore, throw him tow rope to bring him out of the creek and mean time provide him with more ores and a boat patching kit.

    If I was har I'd be panicky as well. It's like the mental ick factor of thinking about those bugs that lay their eggs under the skin. Just thinking about it has you cringing and mentally screaming 'get them out! get them OUT! GET THEM OUT!'

    looking forward to next chappie.
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  • From Leania07 on August 08, 2012
    Wow, I mean, wow! That blow up was a llllloooonnnngggg time in the making! I actually got a little teary eyed from reading it, you could feel the emotion. Seriously, how could anyone expect an orphaned boy who was treated like crap by 'family', then every other adult around him, to be on the good 'light' side and not spiral into darkness and madness. Well this might just be the opening Sev and Luc were looking for; and I know Harry feels loads better after getting that off his chest. I can't wait to see what you have planned next, and truthfully taking Harry to his parent's graves should be the first step towards building trust. Perhaps a little more truth and openness on their side will help too. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next!

    Leania
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  • From ChaoticNightofFlames on July 24, 2012
    awesome story. Please continue
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  • From disgruntledfairy on July 19, 2012
    Wow! Your story is so flipping wonderful! I can't get enough of it. The way you write is way above and beyond average. I can't stand that there are only 7 chapters! I'm dying in suspense! Well I can definitely wait if the same level of skill in writing you display in each chapter you execute is accompanied in those following. Oh my gosh I'm so excited! Thank you for the beautiful chapters and I cannot wait until the next update. Until then!
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  • From jujukitty on July 14, 2012
    i was so behind in this it wasn't even funny lol. love how this is coming along, not to mention how harry manages to screw up there plans over and over again just by being -him- lmfao. also like the realism of it, harry doesn't just blindly fall in with their plans, their past actions holding consequences they're all going to have to deal with, but also how they're learning how misguided they've been in regards to him the entire time as well. keep up the great work, i look forward to more :D
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 13, 2012
    Oh I sooo can't wait for more!!! Will they be safe in Godric's Hollow? Will they show Harry his old home?
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on July 13, 2012
    I'm glad to see Lucius' and Severus' plans have changed to take Harry's feelings into account. I hope the new plan they come up with will involve more truthfulness on their parts toward Harry. I'm glad Harry went on a rant, he has just unknowingly made things easier on himself. Excellent update! It's nice hearing from you.
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