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Reviews for Shades of Grey

By : SpeedyTomato
  • From ANON - psychosmurf on September 02, 2013
    ch 6 Hope they start to treat Harry a little better now
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  • From ANON - psychosmurf on September 02, 2013
    ch 5 At least Snape realizes how much of a wanker he's been. Vernon et al deserves to pay for all they've done and not done. Dumbledore too. hmm bound magic....interesting
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  • From ANON - psychosmurf on September 02, 2013
    Ch 4: Anyone else wanna punch Snape in the nose with his constant name calling?
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on August 27, 2013
    Wonderful update! I'm glad the bonding went as planned. Severus and Lucius choose a good birthday gift for Harry.
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  • From Mashkai30 on August 25, 2013
    Lovely story. I am looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From WorldePARALLEL on August 19, 2013
    I really like how your story is structured and the interaction between the characters is really fluent! I love stories that takes time to warm up and progress, especially where enmity has to be neutralised and transformed into friendship and affection, I think that you have really done a good job on that!

    At first I actually thought that Kaliya was a female snake... :S It would be nice to see Lucius and Severus managing to speak Parseltongue, instead of relying on Harry act as a translator, although I might miss the part where they are amazed and tantalised by Harry speaking Parseltongue, personally I thought that they listening to Harry speak Parseltongue is a fascinating scene. Of course, the best part would be that the Dark Mark can actually be overridden by the new bond :D

    My favourite scene in the story is where Harry falls asleep on Lucius' thigh, and that Severus and Lucius both keep their conversation low so as to avoid waking Harry up. It is really touching as I can see the amount of trust Harry has for them, and the soothing affection that both Lucius and Severus hold for Harry. I do hope that there would be more warm and fuzzy scenes like this in the future, not to mention Harry's birthday would also be a pleasant surprise :)

    I look forward to the story progress, do please update soon!
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  • From moodysavage on August 17, 2013
    lol you are so killing me waiting to get to their ceremony. I keep trying to guess what side effects there are going to be.
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  • From Leania07 on August 17, 2013
    Coming along nicely I see ^.^ Glad they found a possibility of removing the Horcrux w/out killing Harry. Personally, I don't care one way or the other if Nagini is saved; death would be good for her if she had been manipulated and mutated so horribly, but living is good, if she wanted no part of that Horcrux business. Keep up the good work, I have no complaints so far!

    Leania
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  • From ANON - hotflower901 on August 15, 2013
    Moving closer to the bonding. This is where things will heat up? I can't imagine anything more scary then letting a snake bite me. Ewww. Looking forward to what comes next.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on August 15, 2013
    They have a plan! Now, just make sure they don't get the wiggins!Lol! Excellent update!
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on August 05, 2013
    Sounds like they have a plan. And Severus sounds less depressed. Excellent update!
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  • From moodysavage on August 05, 2013
    Can't wait to see what unexpected side effects the spell will have. And the fact that they have gotten so close and work so well together will add to that... maybe that will help direct the bond in the direction it will go.
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  • From Leania07 on July 29, 2013
    Oh God, that duck is hysterical! It's great that Harry is progressing with his studies so well, and having some one-on-one teaching is the best way for him to learn. I almost waited until the next chapter before reading, but I couldn't in the end. Keep up the good work, I'm really loving this story so far.

    Leania
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on July 28, 2013
    Sound like you're winding up for the end... Excellent update.
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  • From Leania07 on July 08, 2013
    Oh boy, the pressure is on! A delicate dance indeed, one faulty step and everything will go to hell. I loved the stuffed dog; I'd be like Lucius and having a hard time suppressing my laughter. Keep up the good work, look forward to more!

    Leania
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