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Reviews for In Servitude of the Dark: The Hand That Guides Me

By : xXxLuckyxXx
  • From savannah19742001 on December 29, 2011
    This story is so very interesting and I just can't wait for more...I really can't wait for the conflict with Harry and dumbledore to really get going.
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  • From Kitkatislovely95 on December 29, 2011
    Oh my. I sure hope Lucius doesn't do anything to hurt Severus' chances. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

    xoxo,
    kitkat
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  • From freeze107 on December 29, 2011
    well done on another successful chapter. very interesting points you brought up along the way. I feel that you made snape a bit weak in this chapter. Even with his fear about the prophecy I felt the way you portrayed him, he would make the right choice and not the easy one. I liked the bit with malfoy and his family, and the death eater meeting, I almost want harry introduced to the dark community just to see how it would play out. I think that how you have portrayed harry so far is leading him to be aligned with the dark community rather than the light counterpart. I am anxious to see Voldemort reborn and hopefully see a more charismatic battle strategy rather than the warfare in the books. Well done and I look forward to many more chapters.
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  • From jujukitty on December 29, 2011
    yes, i'm reviewing back over here again lol loved your solution to the buckbeak issue, adn marvolo's reaction to it, i think my favorite part was when he looked at harry and basically said "yeah, but now you have to talk to snape" i could just see the dawning horror on harry's face while marvolo gloated lol. and poor harry, starting feel all warm and fuzzy towards marvolo and still knowing what chaos that can only bring. another great chapter, keep it up, i want more! lol
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  • From bloodshound on December 29, 2011
    wellp, it looks like the furry purry is well and truly out of the cloth sack on this one. I wonder how the malfoys plan to capitalize...
    It was pretty nifty the har saved buckbeak, even if it was reckless. I hope siri or someone anyway, turns up soon. Har needs someone to confide in before the weight of all those secrets crush him.
    as for Har choosing in dumbles as his guardian... bursts into snickers at the mere thought. You'd have to have the naivety of a 1st year hufflepuff to think that'd ever happen. Still, in the words of a famous rabbit 'he don't know him very well, do he?" what can i say, while it's understandable, remi continues to disappoint. quite a pussy of a wolf, definite omega material. I keep finding myself hoping that someone stronger will take him in hand... your cue if ever there was fen... or possibly tonks.
    about those touches that har so enjoys... sigh, maybe once he gets his bits together once more, voldi the original will be more amenable to performing them.
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  • From Dreamer27 on December 29, 2011
    This story is great.

    I don't want Hermione to make up with Harry, I hope she realises her mistakes when it's too late.
    I like how Ron was against the Headmaster getting the money and I hope he realises he was wrong even if Harry and Ron don't become best friends again.
    I hope the Dumbledore gets whats coming to him.
    I also can't wait until Sirus is proved innocent hopefully and when Remus hopefully will finally realise not to follow Dumbledore and think about Harry.

    I can't wait to see what happens next and when Voldemort gets his body back and what he will do.

    Anyway this is an excellent story and I can't wait to see what will happen next.
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  • From hpforever300 on December 28, 2011
    Another amazing chapter! :D it was very clever of you to put this in, I feel as if it added another element to the story, by steering off to what was happening to the other characters and not just harry, and it wasn't to focused on them either, it was just right, I feel bad for severus too, I know it probably wont happen but I'd love for him to fight voldemort, that would be cool :) I hope we do get to see some dueling action that would be good :D keep it up lucky! :P fan fiction high five!! :) x
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  • From llyoung on December 28, 2011
    Thanks for the new chapter. I appreciate the quick update. I did enjoy seeing what was going on with the secondary characters. But I do have to say please don't let Dumbledore get any of the Potter family money or guardianship of Harry. I also hope Severus just tells Harry about his part with the prophecy getting to Voldemort soon as well. Dumbledore makes my angry (which is a good thing - it means I'm really enjoying your story).
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  • From DragonOfVenus on December 28, 2011
    You're a really good writer and I hope to see more updates from you soon! Please don't let negative reviews bother you. I understand how fragile you can feel as a writer posting her work for the first time, but honestly, not everyone is going to love everything you write. That doesn't mean that there's anything wrong with what you've written or with you as a writer. Lots of people, including me, are really loving your writing right now and would be heartbroken if you stopped or even started over. The trick is to always look forward. If you agree with the negative review, do better next time, not for your readers (again, you won't please everyone, no matter what you do) but for yourself. If you don't agree with the review, just forget about it and move forward the way *you* want to. I really like your Snape, and I can't wait to see how him being Harry's guardian is going to work out. :)
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  • From marie2curie on December 28, 2011
    Thanks for updating so soon!!!
    So sorry to hear about the evil review you got, but please keep in mind that that was only one persons opinion (and clearly it was from someone who couldn
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  • From AmberDaze on December 28, 2011
    Wahoo! I'm so happy to see Harry standing up for what is rightfully his! I wonder if Lupin will re-think what Dumbledore told him now that he has heard Lily say that she didn't want Harry living with the Dursleys. You are writing your Dumbledore so well - whenever he tries to scheme or manipulate Harry and the people around him he infuriates me to no end!! (which is perfect for this!). Hope you had a great Christmas! More Marvolo/Harry please!!!!
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  • From hpforever300 on December 27, 2011
    I totally agree with everything that freeze107 has said, exactly what I was thinking, I would aloso like to see harry keeppy hermione around, as I think her intelligence will prove really usefull and she will have more of an open mind that ron. I love your story so much and find yself just dying to know what happens next,you are a brilliant writer and don't let anyone tell you any different, I love snape how he is, as I'm sure a lot more people like him than that one person who didn't, ill be waiting for the next chapter! :D xx x
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  • From Kitkatislovely95 on December 27, 2011
    Holy... Crap. My hands are shaking from the tension. I was trying to read faster to get to that confrontation. Wow, I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. :)

    xoxo,
    kitkat
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  • From llyoung on December 27, 2011
    Another wonderful chapter and I'm glad you aren't changing your Snape characterization. I like it the way it is. (and I'd really like to turn Dumbledore into a house elf working for the Dursleys for years and see how he likes it).
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  • From mmichelle97219 on December 27, 2011
    i liked the story so far very much and am wondering if there is a way to be notified when you add to it
    sincrely
    michelle
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