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Reviews for In Servitude of the Dark: The Hand That Guides Me

By : xXxLuckyxXx
  • From freeze107 on December 27, 2011
    First off I would like to commend you on an amazing story thus far. It is an amazing story and I cant wait for you to post more. try not to let yourself get beaten down by harsh reviews, I think the story is turning out wonderfully and I think your portrayal of Snape is highly realistic. Im glad you chose to let him take over gaurdianship of harry. I would like to see more of what harry is learning with tom. I especially liked the old magic scene, from the dementors letting them go by to the sunrise. It was incredible, thats the only way to describe it. I also really enjoy your portrayal of light and dark, I think that it is a concept that very few authors implement correctly, but you have done so beautifully. I would maybe like to see a turning of the tide so to speak, I think that now that harry has a more open mind about magic and life in general I think it would be more beneficial to meet up with the other practitioners of "dark" magic(ex: draco and the others). Im not saying that have to jump right into being best friends but I think that it would add to the realism of the story. I really want to see harry move out of the dursleys for good, and from what I can see it looks like that is the direction your story is taking so Im happy there. I thought that you let harry forgive ron and hermione to easily, They had only been friend for about a couple of years and he is already willing to forgive them for anything? It just seemed forced and I think you should capitalize on the akwardness of their situation in the future. I also really like your ideas about harry's father and his inheritance and the altercation between him and dumbledore. Going back to comment on some of your previous chapters, I also like the idea about the unicorn 'wand', and the black swirls that it gained. It really added depth to the relationship between tom and harry due to the conversation. I love the healing classes and the politics, really interesting idea and not many authors have a healing!harry. I know im kinda boucing around in my review so I apologize for that but I think that the freindship between harry and draco could actually work out now that I really get to thinking about it, He was a total prat in first year, but he probably would have matured, maybe not to the extent that harry has, but he has had some help. Sorry for jumping around so much and for bringing up so much stuff from the past, but this is the first chapter I have reviewed on so I thought you might not mind. Keep up the great and work and please write some more.
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  • From kaasan on December 27, 2011
    Yay!!!! Another great chapter in really good story! I love the direction that you are taking with this and can hardly wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work and down with Dumbles!!
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  • From ravensowleye on December 27, 2011
    The more I read this story the more I like it. You've done a really good job keeping the characters true to their nature in the original literature, but also putting your own little spin on them as well. I am really looking forward to where the rest of it will go :)
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  • From Darkserpentcat on December 27, 2011
    I really hope Snape or Harry will get to show Remus that they are not exaggerating for example having Remus talk to Snape about it and Snape showing Remus the memories Harry showed him.

    I don't think Remus should go to Harry about the exaggeration thing as Harry's trust in him is fragile as it is and Lupin knows that as such Lupin might not want to ruin it by telling this to Harry's face (basically calling him a liar) however the same can be said the other way around

    Oh and please kick the Dursley's out and make it painful

    Anyways I just hope Remus does side with Harry or go nuetral in the end because though he is a secondary character in your fic and kind of foolish in this fic I love Remus and Sirius and prefer when they side with Harry

    Oh and maybe for the whole Potter family money you should point out some business the Potters own and keep up so if the Potters lost their money they would also have to close down various shops putting people out of work which could cause Dumbledore to double think trying to get the money for various reasons
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  • From bloodshound on December 27, 2011
    well damn, I'd hoped after Har's 'pep talk' Remi would grow a pair but I guess it'll take more convincing... if anyone can be bothered. I do hope so as i genuinely like remi despite his being a lamb in a wolf skin. lol, does this mean pettigrew owes too?
    I do like the way dumbles was out done. a patronus moments indeed. ^^
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  • From hpforever300 on December 24, 2011
    Another amazing chapter to a phenominal story :) please keep posting asap!!! :D xx x
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  • From hpforever300 on December 23, 2011
    god, I love this story, its so captivating! Imm loving it :) I really hope there isn't too long of a wait for the next chapter, I hope we can see more of the basilisk, I think its quite an underated creature in hp and should be seen more :), I also can't wait to see the relationship between harry and develop even further :D I was pleasantly suprised by their encounter, anyways I know whatever you do you'll make it great :D please keep writing :D :D xx
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  • From savannah19742001 on December 23, 2011
    I am totally enchanted with this story, I love how Harry's training is so very subtle. I look for this story every time I come to adult fanfiction, for this story captivates my imagination and for that I thank you...
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  • From bloodshound on December 23, 2011
    oh, i din know you were on ff as well. *facepalm. guess i should've though. are you under the same name? *grimaces. I hate looking for a story on ff, searches bring back to many options.
    you're blurb at the top makes marv appear almost entirely self centered. Will Marv's emotional attachment to har (provided he has one) carry over to voldi?
    Oh, i'm glad the basalisk didn't get killed this time out. He/she (depending on the fic) is such a valuable resource.
    I wonder if triton is very different from the others. His name certainly is but then calling him something like Aqua would have been boring.
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  • From kaasan on December 22, 2011
    The story is moving along quite well. I don 't think that Harry was too hard on Remus, seeing that Harry really does not trust him. Keep up the great writing!!
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  • From Kitkatislovely95 on December 22, 2011
    Really good. I can't wait for more.

    xoxo,
    kitkat
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  • From savannah19742001 on December 22, 2011
    Good...really good chapter. I love this story so much and look forward to more of your political intrique...it it well written and I am enjoying the take down of the powerhouse Dumbledore. Great job can't wait for more...
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  • From bloodshound on December 22, 2011
    Do you have a mailing list? here's my email if you do ckestra@hotmail.com cause I'm sick of missing chappies.
    Ron and Mio are still kids, but that;s understandable since they haven;t had to go through what har did that forces their mental maturity.
    YES, FINALLY. Now maybe Remi will start accepting Mooney a bit more and behaving like the werewolf he is, rather than the tea cup poodle he's been portrayed as to date. Dumbles has a LOT of hard questions that need answering.
    mwhahaha. I can't wait till Andie starts to dig and drag out all the dirty secrets into the light. The chamber pot is really going to hit the fan... I look forward to it. ^^
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  • From jujukitty on December 22, 2011
    yay for angry harry lol very nice scene with him confronting all three of them, eventually those two really will have to learn. and maybe remus will actually grow a spine now. keep up the great work, can't wait to see more tom/harry interactions
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  • From llyoung on December 22, 2011
    Loved the chapter and the confrontation between harry and remus. I also love it when there is a rift with the golden trio (and really like it when the rift remains).
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