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Reviews for In Servitude of the Dark: The Hand That Guides Me

By : xXxLuckyxXx
  • From QuintiliVare on December 19, 2011
    I love it! I know this is one of those completely useless reviews, but at least it lets you know people are reading it? I've always wondered about Andromeda Black, and really like that you gave her a bit of slyness. I thought for certain that the Blacks could never make a normal offspring.
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  • From AmberDaze on December 19, 2011
    Thanks for the super quick update again!! So glad that Severus is on Harry's side - I also thought that the classroom scene where he confiscated the potion was spot on! Absolutely something he would do! I like your portrayal of Dumbledore too (although I've never really liked him - always thought he was too wrapped up in the cause to really care about Harry and left him completely unprepared for the Horcrux hunt). Can't wait for more!!
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  • From llyoung on December 18, 2011
    I love your Snape and if "stage time" for him and Marvolo comes at the sacrifice of less Remus time, I can live with that very happily.
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  • From bloodshound on December 18, 2011
    i think you did a pretty good snape... and yeah, i agree, poor old remi is very much bata/omega material. the only time he arcs up is to protect what he cares about, the rest of the time it's a bit poor, poor pitiful me. Not that i blame him entirely. when your whole society treats you like crap, it can be hard not to pick up the weeoooo weeoooo attitude. maybe you can find a nice alpha ish character to straighten him out some. cause he was a pretty decent teacher... at least compared to what they had. :P
    I hope siri doesn't get stuck as a bit part player, cause as much as he hates snape, he, i think, would do anything for Har... once he's killed a certain rat a lot.
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  • From jujukitty on December 18, 2011
    yay for more story so quickly, you rock! i think you did a great job with snape, no worries there, and i loved the confrontation with dumbles, like harry said, having to learn to fight his own battles, and even mcgonnegal pointing out dumbles' already bending the rules. and snape and harry have come to an understanding, so at least things will be better with them in private if not in public. i think you've done a really good job of balancing dumbles on that almost evil line while still keeping him in the good by a hair. keep up the great work :)

    oh, and as for pming in aff, i still haven't found a way, wish you could though, would make it so much easier to respond to reviews. i think some authors set up a blog or somethng in the forums to respond to reviews on, but i'm not sure. i usually just do what you've done and respond at the end of each of my chapters to anyone i think needs one
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  • From jujukitty on December 18, 2011
    wow, nice story so far, and i actually enjoyed teh bank trip and the decorating lessons, it's little things like that that show how harry grows, it actually annoys me when all of a sudden whatever character is doing something out of the ordinary and it's just kind of understood that they learned it at some point without the author mentioning it.

    as far as the hpfandom posting goes, if you haven't figured it out already: create an account (click on log in and then register), then go to your account page and "add new story", then you'll be able to add new chapters to it through another link on your main account page. hope that helps
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  • From marie2curie on December 18, 2011
    I adore this story! Just saw it this morning and it kept me company through breakfast, had to finish it!!!!
    Your writing is witty and entertaining and I'm curious to see where you'll take the story.
    I love your Harry/Marvolo and can't wait until voldie makes a show and merges with Marvolo, fun times ahead I'm sure!!!
    I'm really hoping that Marvolos presence will keep things from getting to f***ed up like in the 3 book, cus that was just majorly annoying!!!
    Despite everything with Sirius, hes a Black! I hate it when JKR portrays him half braindead with stupidity. Somewhere he must have some Slytherin tendensies.
    I'm not too fond of teasers (makes me a bit crazy, yes patience isn't my forte...)
    Looking forward to your next update.
    Thanks for writing and sharing
    All the best
    marie
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  • From bloodshound on December 18, 2011
    Ron does indeed sound mentally lazy. I could almost feel sorry for dumbles... almost. This is soooooooo going to come back to bite his arse. Having marvolo and moony about will be interesting. siri too and having sev owe him will be priceless. ^^
    why the heck didn't ppl like chappie four? I thought i was fine.
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  • From llyoung on December 18, 2011
    I absolutely love your story. Thanks for all the updates :) (I don't like Ron either so I hope eventually Harry ends the friendship).
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  • From AmberDaze on December 18, 2011
    Hey! I'm really enjoying this story so far - and thanks for the super fast updates today!! I like the way you are developing the Harry/Marvolo relationship - and I find the insights into what Marvolo is thinking (and his motivations/ulterior motives) really great to read! Can't wait for more!!
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  • From yuiop12345 on December 18, 2011
    Nice! When does the higher rating/romance stuff happen?
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  • From mdevries08 on December 17, 2011
    Holy crap! 450,000 words written already??????? You have no idea how excited I got when I read that lol. I love this story's first five chapters a lot and I'm thrilled that there's not going to be super long waits between updates! I'm not a big fan of teasers at the end of chapters, but that's usually because I can't read the next chapter right away and I get very impatient lol. I usually just don't read them so the next chapter is a complete surprise. Anyways, love your story and can't wait to read more of it!
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  • From yuiop12345 on December 17, 2011
    Nice
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  • From yuiop12345 on December 17, 2011
    Nice chapter! Are/Have you posted anywhere else besides AFF?
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  • From yuiop12345 on December 17, 2011
    Nice
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