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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens: The Scaled Bits

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From Jan on February 14, 2013
    Go Dominants! That was just so sad of an excuse for a submissive....

    Please update chapter 28 soon.
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  • From dark-huntressmoony on February 14, 2013
    I loved this little insight to Nasta....i cant decide if Max or Nasta is my favorite OC that you have done. These stories are so much fun, i can't wait to read more
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  • From Lady_Arachne on February 14, 2013
    I loved this!! I just love it when they talk about past meetings they have went to and now there's a chapter about it~!!! *squeals* :DDDD
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  • From Lady_Arachne on January 31, 2013
    Whoa, that was pretty intense, wonder what will happen to Ashleigh in later chapters now that she isn't allowed near Harry or the babies~!!! :DDD

    And if you don't mind, can you do a SB chapter about the first time Harry went to the Dracken meeting? I want to know what Harry's mates did while he was playing with the kids and wondering around. :DD
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  • From djaddict on January 31, 2013
    I like this very much! Thank you!

    Will we find out what happened after he left his parent's house?

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  • From Jan on January 30, 2013
    Oh, I forgot to ask, but is Ashleigh sick? Maybe have something similar to an early alzheimer's disease?
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  • From Jan on January 30, 2013
    Hearing Max version, was more heart wrenching then when I read his mates POV, and I thought that chapter was a heartfelt one, but I guess it's cause this one came from a more personal POV,that had my eyes tearing up.

    Please update chapter 27 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - Frosty on January 29, 2013
    OMG!!! (O)_(O)
    I've been following 'The Rise of the Drackens' story and I love how you go back and tell the story from someone else's POV in 'The Scaled Bits'.
    When I read the latest chapter(67) I was convinced that Harry was wrong and Ashleigh didn't see him as only a baby-maker, but after reading the 'Scaled Bits' latest chapter.......(Max's Voice) "I just don't know". STOP REELING ME IN WITH SUCH JUICY UPDATES!!
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on January 29, 2013
    i say that i hate that his dads need to suffer. Ashleigh on the other hand i want her to suffer. i do hope the force her to tell the truth so we know i can't see Richard, and Myron taking time to see their grandchildren at the same time that would be hard but i so want Alexander to fine out. and to see how he deals with it.
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  • From ANON - Dreamer27 on January 29, 2013
    This was great. I loved Max in this chapter. He's never very serious, but suddenly in this one he is, which just shows how much he loves Harry and the others. I also loved how Ashleigh was begging for Max to not stop her seeing them, instead of just saying Harry. It was obvious she was meaning the babies, if she even included Harry in that at all, or was just thinking only of the babies.

    I also can't wait to see what will happen once everyone else finds out about Ashleigh especially Max's grandfather and Amelle and Ceasar. It would be great if suddenly Ceasar took charge and said that Ashleigh was not allowed near Amelle and Eleanora. So that it didn't just go straight back to Amelle refusing everyone and everyone being mad at her. I also like that Amelle is going to have another baby soon.

    I'm so looking forward to what will happen next. What will happen to the Dursley's and how Ashleigh is going to act now to, because I can't see her sitting back and taking it. It would be great if she showed up at Harry's door and all of Harry's mates jumped between Harry and the babies to keep Ashleigh from them and then Myron and Richard had to come and drag her back home. Although I would like Myron and Richard to still be involved with Harry and the babies, just keep Ashleigh away. It would also be great if Harry got pregnant again and no one including Max's grandfather would let Ashleigh near him and even throw Ashleigh off his estate.

    Anyway just waned to say great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 29, 2013
    Aw this is so sad! I really hope Max and the others forgive Ashleigh, it's just not natural for him to be so angry at her! I just really love the dynamic their family has with Myron and Richard. Thank you!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Wyldcat1187 on January 29, 2013
    I'm beginning to hate Ashleigh as much as you do. Now that her "forgetfulness" has shed so much light on her behavior, I'm just really starting to hate her. I have to congratulate you on the subtlety of the hints that you dropped. I've reread the entire thing about 3 or 4 times and I never once got the idea that this would happen. And her reaction when Max was so angry really just set me off. She was so much more upset about not seeing the babies than she was about hurting Harry that way. You have a goft for ensnaring your readers with the emotional content of your writing. Loved it!
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  • From truthseeker on January 28, 2013
    I thought max would do what he did. Are we ever going to find out y that woman did what she did in her perspective or her mates. I hope she has a damn good reason y!
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  • From ANON - Linda on January 28, 2013
    Great chapter, I feel sorry not only for Max and Harry but Richard and Myron. Those two won't lose their son will they. I love those two characters.
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  • From Meechypoo64 on January 28, 2013
    The pain that max most feel. Nasta was right when he told Harry that the dominant's instinct would always pick his submissive, mates and children over his birth parents! I feel very sad for Myron and Richard who are trying so hard to understand their mate without breaking her will. Let's just hope everyone can get over this betrayal and that Ashleigh realizes she too needs to speak with someone more as Harry noticed with Amelle. She still carried her scars from her loss so deep that she has used her grandchildren as replacements for her grief instead of dealing with it. Thank you for Max's point of view!

    ~~ Meechy
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