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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens: The Scaled Bits

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - ladilyn on January 28, 2013
    I am soooo happy you did this piece. I was dying to know what happened with the confrontation with him mum. It would be interesting to see how Myron and Richard are taking this. While Max is conflicted, from Nasta's explanation Max would pick his submissive and children over his family. However, with Myron and Richard, they are caught between their submissive and one of their children, their eldest child, so I would imagine their conflict is intense. They must be heartbroken to think of losing so much over this fiasco.

    Given Ashleigh's reaction to all of this, it would appear that all she really cares about are the babies as that is what she was horrified to find out she would lose. It seemed that she was taking Harry and his feelings for granted and not being honest. The fall out from this will be interesting to watch.

    I hope you had a wonderful birthday and thanks for taking the time to assuage curiosity.
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  • From ANON - Pernicia on January 28, 2013
    OMG!!! Best Birthday Present Ever!! Thank you!!
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on January 28, 2013
    Please Max, I love them, you can
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  • From Woodlandspirit on January 28, 2013
    Poor Max, it's so weird to see him all sad. I want happy Max back
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  • From ANON - Katlin Malfoy on January 28, 2013
    i have never read one of these and i saw that it was updated and i read the last one and it like puts a whole complete perspective on things and im really glad i read your last update i feel sick because of maxs mom she deserved that i don't think she even feels remorse for what she did makes me wanna snuggle harry poor harry if i was max i would have severely maimed or killed her oh and btw great story love them both cant wait for the next update and well have a nice day or night or whatever
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  • From ANON - Wicked on January 28, 2013
    Oh my. I feel so sorry for Max, and Myron and Richard. Well everyone except for Ashleigh. I knew I had an uncanny feeling when it came to her, and now I know why. Serves her right to not get to know her grandchildren. Especially after what she thinks of Harry.
    But please, don't let it go out over Myron and Richard. They have to be allowed to meet the kids. They just have to. Max wouldn't do that to them, right? and I mean, they're heartbroken - and I can't believe you would break up a family like that. I hope it all sorts out for the best. I would really cry otherwise.
    Looking forward to the next chapter - I always do
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 28, 2013
    Awwwwwww, Maxie

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  • From LadyFreak on January 28, 2013
    Ch26: Absolutely Brilliant! I was really wondering about what happened with Max's family. All of this makes me wonder whether she's developing something like Alzheimers or if she's just so focused on having babies around that she doesn't think of anyone but herself. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Pk7611 on January 28, 2013
    I just- hnng love you!!! My heart is breaking for Max. The next familial meet up is bound to be tense!
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  • From truthseeker on January 26, 2013
    Is it possible to update this story too? I am anxious to find out the mates version of what happened to harry and the latest blow up between harry and max's mom. Now that argument will be interesting to read. She needs a very hard spanking or severe punishme t for what she did

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  • From dime on January 18, 2013
    Highly enjoyable. ^^
    I wish there was more of it... Now I have to wait for updates like everyone else. *pouts*
    Hugs,
    Dime
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  • From HeavenScent on January 11, 2013
    I enjoyed these scaled bits very much, thanks for posting them! I appreciate the extra effort :) Can't wait for when you get around to posting more!

    Lots of love,
    HS
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  • From ANON - MaryRoyale on December 18, 2012
    I really, really love "Determination". Max was both cute AND adorable all the way through this chapter. I appreciated the way you highlighted the plight of older Drackens who (most likely) won't get a mate, and allowing us to see a meeting from Max's point of view. Even though I've read TROTD (numerous times now) I felt so bad for poor Max when he was sent away from the second meeting. He was all devastated and sad. I just wanted to pet him and say: "It'll be okay. You'll get scrumptious Harry and lots of men to play with, just wait!"

    I think it was quite smart of you to include some slightly older partners for Harry because they realize just how lucky and blessed they are, and this chapter really helps to highlight that. The ratio of Dominants to submissives is 20:1 I believe you stated, and Harry is the only male. It might be easy for Draco or Blaise to forget just how lucky they are to even have a submissive, let alone a male submissive. Of course, they are fallible, and you do have them make mistakes and hurt Harry's feelings, but I think that's realistic of an actual relationship. I think you even had Max thinking right after this that it was going to be a lot of hard work to make the relationship work.

    Anyway, I love both TROTD and your scaled bits and I thought it might be time to say *something*. I just really loved this little peek into how Max felt about Harry--even before he became a mate.
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  • From ANON - Ceciluv on December 17, 2012
    Hello, I was just rereading this and the actual story and got to the chapter where Nasta makes the compromise and offers up the idea on baby and me classes and realized we never heard how that went or when they actually took the classes. So, I personally would love to read a scaled bits showing them all in the class and just seeing how they react and some things they learned and who got what fastest and who struggled. Etcetera. Anyway, that is my request and thanks for listening.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 15, 2012
    Hello, I was wondering if I could request a Christmas/Yuletide bit. I've been reading your stories, and I really like them. You definitely have talent!
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