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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens: The Scaled Bits

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Shadowwolf03 on August 24, 2012
    Man I love these back stories that don't make it into "the Rise of the Drackens". I was wondering what Nasta as the dominant mate would do to straighten out Max on the too hot food issue. Bad Max, Bad. }:-
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  • From Lady_Arachne on August 24, 2012
    Hmmm, I was expecting something more extreme to happen to Max...but this was good!! >:D
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  • From ANON - Nicola on August 24, 2012
    That was really emotional, i almost cried for max, i know it was his fault, but it was still really sad :(

    It was so well written. i loved it
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  • From dominique1 on August 24, 2012
    so sad this had to happen but so good
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  • From ANON - Angela on August 24, 2012
    I have been a long long long and did I say LONG time reader. I have love your story since the beginning, but I have been a silent reader/somewhat silent on facebook. This chapter and ch. 56 were great. You had me thinking dirty thoughts with Nasta's punishment for Max (would be a good thought). Thanks for making me freak out and keep writing. I will go back to being silent till something make me review again. Good luck with your job!
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  • From bloodshound on August 24, 2012
    yay another Scaled Bits! the main story is fun, but these little side glimpses are utterly fascinating. ^^
    Whoa, Maxie really screwed it this time. This going to take serious tome to work out.
    Draco learned from the best when it comes to head game dom. ppl forget that sometimes with how he is around Har.
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  • From Harriette-Stevenson on August 22, 2012
    Brilliant chapter, I really appreciated the effort and attention to detail used in linking previous events in the original story to this chapter. I have to say that Max is one of my favorite of Harry's mates, second only to Blaise who I remain attached too because he was Harry's first mate :) Thanks for writing and sharing

    Harriette
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  • From mmichelle97219 on August 16, 2012
    this is my absolute favorite bit so far i loved the little journey you took us on, and it interesting to see the uncles and then switch back to the birthday party to see them interact there after this. a suggestion for the next bit would be from nasta's dad after helping out with the babies especially on the point of fairy baby. i think one of on the research that has been done on harry's childhood would also be a good one to do. i look forward to reading about the trial.

    happy writing
    michelle
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  • From ANON - thestralhorse on August 13, 2012
    this chapter is AMAZING!! I have read it twice and I am pretty sure i will read it again later today lol I love max so much he is just so cute!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 12, 2012
    Absolutely loved this chapter! Great job doing it from Max's point of view. I loved reading about the meetings from a different perspective. Very interesting!!

    Great job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 12, 2012
    I loved this chapter!
    The feeling from Max were very detailed. :)

    But I would love the view from Nasta also. I think his thoughts about the unusual second mate (in form of Draco and Max) would be really interesting!

    Thanks for your hard work (and sorry for my grammar - English isn't my first language...)
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  • From Lady_Arachne on August 12, 2012
    Cool, so that's what was going on in Max's Pov~!

    Dang, there was one I've always wanted to see in the story...but I forgot what is was...um...OH! I was wondering if you'll do a chapter about the previous submissives that was mentioned in the story, like the ravenclaw in Dumbledore's story and the one Blaise been to and the few that Harry's Mate been to? And a chapter about what happened during Caesar and Amelle's arguement? Please?! :D
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  • From ANON - Siekin on August 09, 2012
    I'm a little confused. I know sanex is human but during chapter 18, when Richard and Max were taliking about Sanex you said he got drunk at a meeting. Are humans from Dracken families allowed to go to mate meeting, or was it a different type of meeting?
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  • From ANON - Celestialuna on August 09, 2012
    Loved it from Max's point of view.
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  • From Krucksue on August 08, 2012
    Loved it! Looking forward to the next installment of either story.
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