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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens: The Scaled Bits

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - yngoldfogee on August 08, 2012
    It was interesting to see things from Max's p.o.v. and while it would be nice to see things from others p.o.v's as well you're right in that they would not be as interesting as Max's because he was really put through the wringer emotionally wasn't he?

    Love both your stories and look forward to the next update in both of them.
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  • From helga1967 on August 08, 2012
    This Chapter is amezing. The point of veiw of Max in the courtship
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  • From ANON - EasyReader on August 08, 2012
    I felt so sorry for Nasta. I think this is a great idea to show how the mates lives were changed by meeting Harry and the others. I actually teared up a little thinking of how miserable he was. Are you going to write them in order of dominance?
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  • From ANON - Kathy on August 08, 2012
    I love you! Thank you for writing this! I was so excited when I saw this chapter. You are my most fav author ever!
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  • From ANON - mnfm on August 08, 2012
    Love it, just loooove it!
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  • From ANON - Emma on August 08, 2012
    This is my favorite chapter yet!!!!!!!!! Loved it!!! :)
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  • From bloodshound on August 08, 2012
    definitely worth the time and effort and how! I'd forgotten that those elder dom's Max is related too would have been pulled by him as well. It was absolutely fascinating. How far away can a new subs call be felt?

    Max's side of their 'dom fight' :P would have been interesting as well. Still hoping for an Arsenio snippet or maybe a henley one.

    Anyway, i enjoyed that a great deal. I'm glad crooked elders don't last long in power. Really, what the hell was that guy smoking to think he could swing such blatant favoritism...ESPECIALLY with a hi profile sub like harry.

    Everyone's raving about how har is the first male sub in an age... how is it the all missed Reg? Did he not get a meeting or something? Cause not many seem to know about Sev either.
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  • From Zx14ninja on August 08, 2012
    I loved it! I think it will hold me over until the The Rise of the Dracken updates. can't wait to see what happens
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  • From ANON - Nicola on August 08, 2012
    OMG!!!! i loved it, i almost cried with Max when he was sent home crying to his fathers! Brilliant! :D
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  • From ANON - shadowwolf03 on August 01, 2012
    Nasta is a real cutie... keep him out of the sun though.
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  • From ANON - shadowwolf03 on August 01, 2012
    Oh... a teenage hunter after bear. Me like Max but I also love the background provided about his mom and dads. thank you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2012
    How can Nasta get a mole from the sun on his back if he was wearing a shirt...?
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  • From bloodshound on July 31, 2012
    Nas is utterly adorable. The interaction between the sibs is fun too. (unsalted, unsweetened porridge. ick ewww. the least he could have done was let them dump a bit of fresh fruit or trail mix in it.)

    I've only been burned to that point twice. once when i was kid and got blisters... wow that sucked and once as a teen when i fell asleep while sunbathing and the sunscreen wore off. My shirt rucked up so i got a weird shaped burn that hurt like hell. I lasted through several skin peelings and the tan from it lasted for nearly a year. I've been sun smart and super careful ever since, so little nas has my sympathy.

    Will we ever get a snippet on that scarred Dracken that Har liked but didn't pick? i hope a plot bunny nibbles you on that front if not soon, then some time cause i find him interesting and would love for him to get a happy ending.

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  • From ANON - Kathy on July 31, 2012
    I love your story! I check every day to look for an update. I like reading about their early lives or alt chapters. I would love to read about Nasta and/or Max's thoughts and feelings during the courting in the Hell Hotel! Thanks for the great story!!!
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  • From dominique1 on July 31, 2012
    yes this was sweet i kind of wish his sister was alive now how sweet
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